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Reviewed By: Yashie.And.Kags.Forever On: August 03, 2007 02:42 EDT Comment/Review: ... Update Soon, Good Chapter
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 00:22 EDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: great chapter update... really liked it... kagome is just being stupid... she's a coward... why is she still running away when it's been 3 years and said that she's over inuyasha... she's just afraid that when they meet again that she might not be over him... hope inuyasha finds out that kagome is in new york... there meeting is long over due... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Sam28 On: August 03, 2007 00:05 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Love the story and the writing is great because it gives good detail which is important. Kagome is a pain here and should be with Inyuasha. Been three years they should see each other soon. Maybe have Kagome date or something but don/t let her sleep with amyone besides Inyuasha because that would crush hin and well how much more can he take right. Love it update soon.
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Reviewed By: Sam28 On: August 03, 2007 00:04 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Love the story and the writing is great because it gives good detail which is important. Kagome is a pain here and should be with Inyuasha. Been three years they should see each other soon. Maybe have Kagome date or something but don/t let her sleep with amyone besides Inyuasha because that would crush hin and well how much more can he take right. Love it update soon.
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 22:12 EDT Comment/Review: ahhhhh!!!!who is this newbee ahhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!! not another hanger!!!!!! must read next chapter!!!!!!1
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Title: Ur kidden right? Reviewed By: 1st and only InuFan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 21:54 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: omfg! how could kagome do that to inu! *cries* she didnt even give him a chance to explain! Besides that its really good. update soon! :)
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Title: Are you serious? Reviewed By: TrueInuYashaFan22 On: August 02, 2007 21:24 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: I am confused, why is Kagome playing the victim saying he hurt her? She clearly hurt him and herself. I am getting tired of her "woe is me attitude," when the hell is she gonna grow up and get a clue about the pain her rashness causes others? And if Kagome is going to get a new love interest, can InuYasha man up and stop pinning after her like a little bitch. He waited 500 years for her to throw it all in his face again, and it seems to me that she doesn't deserve him at all. She isn't all of that and its about time he realized that he is more than just the man who loves her, and more than the used toilet paper she treats him as. I know about all the "mate" crap and one love junk for him, but can he find someone else to share himself with? Its no fair that he's all alone, again while she lives her "dreams" in the city. I don't believe for one second that she thinks he really cheated, she is just using it as an excuse to explain her desire and decision to leave. When is someone going to call her on her bull and stop pampering her? She's a grown woman now and if you love someone you don't hurt them as she has done, again.
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Title: WONDERFUL Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 20:28 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wonderful chapter. But when will they get back together? Why didn't he give a letter to her mother explaining the misunderstanding for her mother to mail to her? 3 yrs? I hope they get together soon. Keep up the terrific work.
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Reviewed By: BABABLUE On: July 30, 2007 15:16 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: eeeeeeeeeeeeeeee okay first of all OMG second can they comunicate in their dreams I LOVE IT GREAT IDEA there can still be lemons in the dreams omg how will they react when the see their dreams are connected to eachother!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 01:56 EDT Comment/Review: This is so sad, I know Kagome needs to find her own way in the world but the girl does have a knack for jumping to conclusions. This isn't her first time running away from the obvious, so I hope New York will help her clear her mind and realize that she's got a lot of growing up to do. She's broken Inuyasha heart over her own insecurities but only time will tell what will happen to them. Great story once again, can't wait for another update.
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 12:06 EDT Comment/Review: OMG!!!! please update soon!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 01:14 EDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: great chapter update... feel bad for inuyasha... will kagome get her memories back... hope they get back together... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Title: TERRIFIC Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 22:16 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Damn!!! I want more, more, more. I can't stand that the chapters end..... Please, please, please, update soon. I can't wait!
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Reviewed By: Stephthelover On: July 25, 2007 18:46 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Omgggg! i love this fic! please update as soon as possible!
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Reviewed By: Yashie_And_Kags_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 13:23 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMFG, This Is One Of The Best Fan Fics EVER! Please Hurry And Update Soon. Will Kagome Ever Remember Fully? LMAO I LOVED The Hojo Parts LMAO, That Bastard!
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