| "Volition" Reviews/Comments [ 233 ] |
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Reviewed By: brazen thought On: September 04, 2006 00:08 EDT
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I really want Kagome to remember him. It made me feel sorry for Inuyasha. And I am really glad the shikon no tama is gone. Akina kind of annoys me, and I want Kouga to find out that she likes her "uncle". She deserves a boring lecture from her daddy.
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Title: taihorin
Reviewed By: taishorin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 23:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying this story. It is nice to see Kagome really having to look into herself and analyse what her feelings really are. Keep up the good work, I like the characters, you keep them in their origional types, even thought they are in a modern world.
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Title: WOW!!
Reviewed By: IYsMateKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 23:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like your story!!!! i have read sureic's work, i really enjoy it also, but i KNOW you ARENT copying ANYTHING from her, I LOOOOOVE THIS STORY!!!! it is a great story, and i read that review about the "raping" and i agree with her/him that rape has been taken too lightly by authors, well pls UPDATE!!! thnks for making the story so great!! GOOOD JOOB!!!
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Reviewed By: yume-hime On: September 03, 2006 21:58 EDT
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i am really liking this story and i cant wait for when you can update. it has a story line that no one has come close to yet. yume-hime
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Reviewed By: LostInSiberia_14 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 16:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWW!!!! Poor Inu. Can't wait for Kaggy to remember! I love this fic! :)
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 03:45 EDT
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This is so sad, I can feel what Inu must be going thru knowing that you love someone so much and they can't remember you or what ya shared. I hope she remembers something soon so that they can get a little closer.
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Reviewed By: ragingtoujikin On: September 02, 2006 08:37 EDT
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ahh i love this chapter! its so damn sweeett
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Title: helllllo.
Reviewed By: amandachristine06 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 01:41 EDT
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Hey there! Really enjoying the story. I like the plotline, and while others may compare it to Sueric's work, consider them blind as bats. There are very noticeable differences in your style and diction. However, could you please clear one thing up for me? I'd really like a more detailed accounting of what Hojo did to Kagome. There seems to be implied rape due to Kagome's volatile reaction to Inuyasha the day after. However, I'm still not sure, and I hate how often rape is featured in fictions. It is a very overused plot twist. Rape is not to be taken lightly, and I feel that the overuse of it seems like people DO take it lightly. Not you, though. I didn't mean that. However, I couldn't really tell what all had happened to Kagome. I hope she wasn't raped! That would definitely set back the relationship by a few steps. Such a drawback. But if you could just please clear that up for me, it would be terrific. Thankies! Manda.
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: September 02, 2006 01:30 EDT
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Oh boy. Akina seems like a nice demon so I don't think she is going to casue any troubles for Kagome and Inuyasha.....I hope.
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Reviewed By: Chio [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 23:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my, this is soooooo sweet. Thanks for updating almost everyday. I really like your story.
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 00:27 EDT
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This chapter was soooooo gooood. I swear I like felt Inu's pain when he saw Kagome. I'm glad Homo got what was coming to him. You should of had Inuyasha peel his skin off slowly. I'm glad that they're semi-together now, can't wait for the next level in the relationship.
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 19:22 EDT
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It's GGGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTT!! As Tony the Tiger would say.
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Reviewed By: ragingtoujikin On: August 29, 2006 18:49 EDT
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ahh you updated
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 18:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this chapter along with the story. YES,YES Hojo is dead. I know his mother is gratful don't ya think. I can't wait till the next chapter.
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: Wowz On: August 29, 2006 18:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa, what a sad chapter. At the same time yay! Hojo's finally dead! Great job, update soon!
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