| "Volition" Reviews/Comments [ 233 ] |
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 14:58 EDT
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I'm glad things are going good for the rest of the crew except for the few that are in the dumps. Seems like lives are about to collide all over again and I can't wait to see what happens. See no matter how hard you try you cannot run from true love, Akina learned that with Zachary, what are the chances. Now Kagome is about to learn her lesson and she has alot to make up for SO she better be prepared. Can't wait for the next chapter, happy writing.
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: August 11, 2007 12:39 EDT
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Noooo!!! Kagome can't be getting married. That's just wrong. Please update soon and stop that wedding. I can't stand the suspense.
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Reviewed By: Chio [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 11:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, please don´t make us wait more. Kagome will marry or not. Inuyasha will appear in the wedding to interrupt it. Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 04:09 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice chapter update... but kagome is getting really frustrating and stupid... she is still running away... what and why?... if she said that she's over inuyasha why doesn't she just talk to him... 6 years is just too long for them not seeing each other... and can't believe that her mom kept her location from inuyasha that long... of all the people that should at least understand would be her mom... now she's getting married to this vincent guy... kagome better wake up... inuyasha better show up soon anf stop the wedding or something... sorry just getting impatient here... hope next chapter there's good news about inuyasha and kagome... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Title: sad
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 02:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been loving this story. I have a couple of problems. If Inuyasha still sees Kagomes mom, he would have told her that what Kagome saw was not the truth and to tell her daughter. Or he could have written her a letter and gave it to her mom to give to her. or In their dreams that they share, he could have told her then. Inuyasha could have gotten a detective to track her down. 6 yrs is a long time and he would have found her by then. She knew he waited 500 yrs for her, said they were soul mates. She would have realized something in 6 yrs. I hate the angst. It's killing me that they are not together. I love your story very much. Please next chapter she realizes her mistake and goes back to him. PLEASE!!! update soon please. *waiting patiently* :)
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Reviewed By: Sam37 On: August 11, 2007 01:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story but six years might be long enough apart and how long can Kagome be an idiot. Since she doesn't love the guy but is just plain stubborn. So great and can't wait for update.
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Reviewed By: Yashie_And_Kags_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 01:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tell Flamers To Go Fu*k Themself. This Story Rocks, But... This IS InuXKags Right???
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Reviewed By: cm On: August 11, 2007 00:56 EDT
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don't you DARE let Kagome actually marry that guy!! Hurry up and let Inuyasha and Kagome get back together. I hate seeing Kagome deluding herself into thinking that she actually loves this vincent. It's all bullshit. Hurry up and stop this thing between Kagome and vincent.
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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 00:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I've been reading this fic for a while, like a month to be exact but I had to put it on hold a few times because my stories and my personal life were getting between, now that I've finally got the time to finish what you have wrote till now it's time for some truth... your fic is very good, pretty good actually... I've never read Sueric's fics but I'm sure you didn't copy her or your fic wouldn't be posted till now... anyway, about your grammar... there's a few mistakes tha bug me, true I make mistakes too and I shouldn't be judging you but I just hate it when you write 'to' instead of 'too', I have noticed this in almost every chapter. Now, well... I'm really into this story and I'm looking forward to the end, this story has filled me with the desire of crying because I felt so bad for Inuyasha... at some points I find myself yelling at Kagome for not trusting him but I guess that those kind of things are what make a fic a good fic. So, just to end this review I would like to tell you that you should check twice before uploading a chapter and of course you should update sooner because the freaking tension is killing me lol... update soon please! =)
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 14:05 EDT
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Aargh, I can't begin to tell you just how mad I am at Kagome. I really do feel she owes Inuyasha alot more, I mean I know she has to do the "Finding yourself and independance" thing but geez. Inuyasha waited for her and then had to fight to get her to be with him all over again and she's still so insecure with her relationship with him that she runs at the first sign of trouble. Now she's at a club about to start something with who knows who. This is soo not looking good right now but I love your writing and the angst so update soon.
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 13:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First, great story! Stayed up all night reading it! Still can't believe Kags jumped to completely the wrong conclusion and ripped Inuyahas heart out TWICE! How much more can our poor hanyou take?! Please don't have Kags sleep with anyone else...I don't think Inu could survive that. Can't wait till the next installment!
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Reviewed By: randa15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 09:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really good, im enjoying this chapter so far!
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Reviewed By: bluefire101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 19:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that this story is a pretty good one so far :), I wonder what will happen in the next chapter :O
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Title: YEY!! New chap!!!!
Reviewed By: Hollywood1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 12:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow Kagome has been gone from home for sometime now!! I'm surprised either hasn't lost their minds already!!! Aww Souta has a girlfriend that is so cute => But I hope Kagome reads some more of her diary. LOVE the story this is one of my TOP favs so update soon ALMIGHTY BeAuTy 2004 :p
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Title: Threat and not
Reviewed By: Jappy On: August 03, 2007 11:00 EDT
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I WILL FUVKING HATE YOU IF THERE IS NOT A KAGOME INUYASHA CHAPTER WHETHER IT BE IN DREAMS OR WHATEVER I SWEAR I WILL HATE YOU IF YOU MAKE INU OR KAGO LIKE OR DATE OR LOVE ANYONE ELSE EXCEPT INU OR KAGO GOT IT BUSTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love this story keep it up and you'll win a grammy or something lol
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