| "Volition" Reviews/Comments [ 233 ] |
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 03:59 EDT
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Uggh,just absolutely wonderful,Inuyasha lies to Kagome not maliciously but a lie none the less not knowing Super Bitch Melissa has just got his girl in a snit. I can see Kagome's mind working overtime now and I'll take a wild guess that she's going to believe what Melissa told her and end up doing something she's going to regret. Oiy, what a mess. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: oniguts On: July 23, 2007 02:01 EDT
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Oh boy, trouble never leaves Kagome does it? I really hope that Inuyasha catches on to Melissa's goading Kagome that Inuyasha is unfaithful. That girl has to be fired!
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 11:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice Chapter. Very Nice. I feel like I'm watching the anime in my mind. Keep up the terrific work. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 12:55 EDT
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Kagome and Inuyasha are so "Koi"(did I spell it right?)I'm so happy for them I just hope that Kagome doesn't let people change her mind about their relationship. Well,Well, Kiyoshi has met his match in Alexandra, can't wait to see how this'll turn out. So until next time, happy writing. P.S When will we get another lemon?
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Reviewed By: Mirror223333 On: July 20, 2007 15:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
STOP SKIPPING THE LEMONS WE WANT LIME AT THE VERY LEAST!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 23:31 EDT
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good chapter update... what will happen now... update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: shikiori [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 23:39 EDT
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Beyootiful! Never stop writing! I wuv it! I wuv it! I wuv it! I wuv it! I wuv it! I wuv it! The storyline is awesome! And I don't know how retarded the person was who said you pladerized. (did I spell that right?) I've read Purity, and I don't see where they got that idea. Continue on! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 17:35 EDT
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love chapter 21 i can't wait for 22,23 ect till the story ends
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 00:24 EDT
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really great and sweet chapter... liked it... update soon... please and thank you!
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Title: Yo!!!
Reviewed By: Dark Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 09:41 EDT
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I love your story. But besides that could you chnge the name of Shiori to Souten because Souten had a crush on Shippo. You remember that little sister of The Thunder Brothers and if you don't or haven't watched that episode, could you still change the name.
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 01:37 EDT
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I do so love this story. I wonder what's going to happen in Paris with the crazy bunch of them. Now really, what is Melissa doing snooping aroung in Inuyasha's office, I think she may be one of those people leaking info on him to the tabloids. I hope Ayumi doesn't drop her friendship with Akina over a boy, it's not worth it at all. Well hope to see another update soon.
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Title: Miss
Reviewed By: AviaJade On: July 10, 2007 14:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
xenon?! warroir princess LOL
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Title: Miss
Reviewed By: AviaJade On: July 10, 2007 14:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
xenon?! warroir princess LOL
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: July 10, 2007 01:15 EDT
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The secretary isn't going to cause trouble is she? The limo meeting was way funny, can't wait ti see what happens in Paris.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 01:03 EDT
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great chapter update... getting good... update soon... please and thank you!
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