| "Volition" Reviews/Comments [ 233 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 12:41 EDT
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darn it the chapter is over. guess a short chapter is better than none. waiting for the next chapter. What all are they going to do in NYC?
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 01:01 EDT
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GEEZ, Can you write up a real man that's really that romantic, understanding and patient. This story is so bittersweet, I'm really feeling it for Inu but I know that all the pain will be made up for in the end, right? New York was a good place for them to go, hey maybe he can take her on a carriage ride around central park, now that's real romantic.
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Title: Yes!
Reviewed By: Chio [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 22:14 EDT
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She remembers something!!!!!! Nive chapter. :)
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Reviewed By: EarthToMe001 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 20:52 EDT
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I'm really enjoying this story (I'm up to Ch. 5 so far), and I've got to say... The way you're portraying Hojo... it makes me think of Norman Bates from Psycho. Kinda funny really. I'm curious as to what makes you dislike him so much - or maybe you don't, whatever. ^_^ Anyway. Keep up the good work (i didn't check to see if this is a 'completed work or not)
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Title: ME AGAIN!!!
Reviewed By: IYsMateKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 18:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HIII IT"S ME AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! well i REALLY like the last two chappies........ KEEEP UPP THE GOOOOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: thankies!
Reviewed By: amandachristine06 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 23:44 EDT
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Another excellent chapter. I really like how the legend was involved in the chapter. Kagome's coming around, slowly but surely. You're doing a great job of pacing the plot. Thanks again for clearing up the rape issues, and I'm so relieved that it never happened. Awesome job!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 00:53 EDT
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Your chapter is excellent as usual and please give Inu a little somethin. He's trying so hard and he's so in love with Kagome. I must say though, she is acting a little dense and I wish she would just open her mind to the possibilties. Her memory changed but it shouldn't have changed her strong will and personality. Don't tell me Aki is going to make me not like her, she needs a reality check and better not even think of making a selfish wish on the Shikon but hey maybe that's what your going to do, hmmm? Anywho, I'll keep reading as long as you keep writing, Smooches.
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Reviewed By: brazen thought On: September 04, 2006 00:08 EDT
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I really want Kagome to remember him. It made me feel sorry for Inuyasha. And I am really glad the shikon no tama is gone. Akina kind of annoys me, and I want Kouga to find out that she likes her "uncle". She deserves a boring lecture from her daddy.
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Title: taihorin
Reviewed By: taishorin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 23:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying this story. It is nice to see Kagome really having to look into herself and analyse what her feelings really are. Keep up the good work, I like the characters, you keep them in their origional types, even thought they are in a modern world.
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Title: WOW!!
Reviewed By: IYsMateKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 23:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like your story!!!! i have read sureic's work, i really enjoy it also, but i KNOW you ARENT copying ANYTHING from her, I LOOOOOVE THIS STORY!!!! it is a great story, and i read that review about the "raping" and i agree with her/him that rape has been taken too lightly by authors, well pls UPDATE!!! thnks for making the story so great!! GOOOD JOOB!!!
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Reviewed By: yume-hime On: September 03, 2006 21:58 EDT
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i am really liking this story and i cant wait for when you can update. it has a story line that no one has come close to yet. yume-hime
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Reviewed By: LostInSiberia_14 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 16:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWW!!!! Poor Inu. Can't wait for Kaggy to remember! I love this fic! :)
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 03:45 EDT
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This is so sad, I can feel what Inu must be going thru knowing that you love someone so much and they can't remember you or what ya shared. I hope she remembers something soon so that they can get a little closer.
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Reviewed By: ragingtoujikin On: September 02, 2006 08:37 EDT
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ahh i love this chapter! its so damn sweeett
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Title: helllllo.
Reviewed By: amandachristine06 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 01:41 EDT
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Hey there! Really enjoying the story. I like the plotline, and while others may compare it to Sueric's work, consider them blind as bats. There are very noticeable differences in your style and diction. However, could you please clear one thing up for me? I'd really like a more detailed accounting of what Hojo did to Kagome. There seems to be implied rape due to Kagome's volatile reaction to Inuyasha the day after. However, I'm still not sure, and I hate how often rape is featured in fictions. It is a very overused plot twist. Rape is not to be taken lightly, and I feel that the overuse of it seems like people DO take it lightly. Not you, though. I didn't mean that. However, I couldn't really tell what all had happened to Kagome. I hope she wasn't raped! That would definitely set back the relationship by a few steps. Such a drawback. But if you could just please clear that up for me, it would be terrific. Thankies! Manda.
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