| "Volition" Reviews/Comments [ 233 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 21:23 EDT
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I just read all the chapter so far. I think it is great. It is not a plagerized fic of Sueric's. It does remind me of Sueric's writing, which is good because she is one of the best.
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 20:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this chapter. Hojo is an abusing boyfriend. Oh please you just have to have Inuyasha kick his ass NOW!! Anyway thanks for letting me rant and rave. Your story is getting better and better. Keep up the good work. Can't wait till the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Alotta Profit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 19:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I first saw this I thought to give it a try. I'm glad I did. This story is great so far. A.P.
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Reviewed By: AngelGabe On: August 26, 2006 18:23 EDT
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Just a little compliment. Story sounds great so far. Keep the chapters coming! ^_^
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Title: Volition
Reviewed By: chanda *nsi* On: August 26, 2006 01:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, this is good...real good. Hojo is a problem...but I don't think for long. Great love story so far, I even like the angst. Cannot wail until you update again. Chanda
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Reviewed By: mirim87 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 00:17 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I stumbled upon your story a few nights ago in a fit of boredom and I love it. Hojo's new personality is a little harsh, but at least he's not a helpless little boy anymore. I love it, keep writing!
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Title: Volition
Reviewed By: Inuyasha'sfavlover On: August 25, 2006 23:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa! Amazing story. Anyway, love the chappie and love the way Inu/Kag relationship is unfolding. Keep it up. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Title: Volition
Reviewed By: Volition-FAN! On: August 25, 2006 23:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gods, I absoluetly LOVE this story! It's so cute and funny and beautiful! You've certainly evolved as a writer from 'Twisted Love' to this! It's amazing! Upload as soon as you can...you've got me hooked girl. You've got serious talent!
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Title: Keep Going
Reviewed By: animelimited On: August 25, 2006 22:30 EDT
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I have been reading fan fiction for some years now but I have never left a review before. I never thought my opinion, good or bad, should influence anothers calling. Sharing a part of yourself with strangers can be intimidating at best. You have a sweet, romantic and funny story unfolding. Don't let someones groundless accusation bother you. I know I am looking forward to your updates.
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Reviewed By: Big Fan of Volition On: August 25, 2006 20:34 EDT
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*Does happy dance* I'm absolutely loving Kagome's little internal monologues...now if only she would just go through with them, specifically kicking Hojou in the balls.
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 15:10 EDT
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This is a very good fic, and the plot is definitely not the same as Purity. It's really well done, and when will Kags remember?!?! Hmm, I am waiting eagerly for an update. (I want Hojo to get beaten and then he will go away and leave Inu and Kags to sweet fluff!) *Worships the fluff*
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 14:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this chapter What is hobo going to do to Kagome? I love the slip she gave him she should always listen to her intervoice. anyway keep up the great work. can't wait till the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: kawaii chica [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 13:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this last chapter was great. i cant beleive it is taken kagome this long. i would have dumped hobo the moment i met inu. i think hobo should have a freak accident! something big so he ends up in the hospital as a vegetable!! cant wait for the next chap. update soon please!!!
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Reviewed By: ragingtoujikin On: August 25, 2006 12:55 EDT
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I love the new chapter! hojo should get hit by traffic. =D
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Title: aww
Reviewed By: mistress_yume [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 19:21 EDT
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this is awesome! ^^ good job! and please keep up the good work and updates!
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