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| "Violation of Honor" Reviews/Comments [ 497 ] | | Pages (34): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879NSI On: June 19, 2008 00:24 PDT
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Amazing. Beautiful, Erotic just filled with love lust and burning passion. I absolutely love this story. It seem like every update takes my breath away in either joy or pain. I am so glad Miroku is not dead and am anxiously awaiting to see what other changes occur to all of them that inhaled the red dust and to see to it Iku gets his just desserts and then some.
| Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 14:42 PDT
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Ok Ok I know that this is your story and you can do what you want but you can't let Miroku die...Perminently.....you said a time of peace, love, and..XXX...so Miroku can't be dead for ever it just would make sence... Sorrow doesn't really fit in to my idea of peace....Oh but I'm sooooooooo glad that thoughs too finaly got together...about time if you ask me.......I wander what you are planing for them...is Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru's brotherly bond going to ever come....will Kagome move in with Sesshoumaru?...what about her family in the future.....I forget can she still travil though time? .......................Oh ya and why did ya have Inuyasha and Sango not go with Sesshoumaru....is their a different reason other then saveing Sango some grief (sp?).....well I hope I can find out soon.........Nyuka
| Title: The Time Has Come!
Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 15:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, Inuyasha gave up a lot. He didn't think Big Bro would confess! Love the way you let that play out! Now on to my shameful, emotional review. I like a big fool, cried my heart out with what you let happen to Miroku. I only hope that there is hope. Poor Kagome, her dispair go to me also. Now that I've finished wiping my eyes and blowing snot,(excuse me). Again Congrats to you on this wonderful dark fic and I know there is better storytelling to come. Peace!
| Reviewed By: ice vixen x On: June 05, 2008 13:27 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great! as always. i was laughing so hard at the miroku kag scene about her lover to the guards... hehehe And i was sooo sad when miroku was killed. You HAVE to bring him back. :::pout pout::: Well keep up the good work and update soon... ^_~
| Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 16:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
They're finally together again! This chapter was so great, but I'm so worried about Miroku. I do hope Sesshoumaru can save him in time - I almost cried when I read that part and I just know that it'll be so depressing if Sango loses yet another person dear to her heart. Once again, an amazing chapter, and congratulations on winning some awards from the IYFG this quarter! :]
| Reviewed By: burgundyburning On: June 03, 2008 12:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a chapter! What a story! I like your AU stories alright, but this one is by far one of the best works I have ever read! I check this all the time for updates and I was thrilled to see a new chapter so soon. And a lemon! Love ya!
| Reviewed By: Doberbitch [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 20:52 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Please delete my previous comment; I rated in other categories that I don't wish to entertain. Thank you. I normally don't rate except for the Enjoyment factor; really what is the point when it is not constructive since you've already posted the chapter. If I had something constructive to add, I would just send you an email. :-) LOLs --NOT THAT YOU NEED IT. ~~~~~I loved how you incorporated the historical events into the plot. The action, angst, drama, suspense and romance in this chapter were mind boggling and not a small feat by any means. On creativity alone, is the mark of a professional.YOU ARE JUST TOO AWESOME!! This novel is a total experience. Thank you, thank you for sharing your talents with us! God Bless!~~~~Doberbitch
| Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 16:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! *is crying hysterically* I can't believe you killed Miroku! T^T MIROKU! You are a horrible, MEAN, mean person. You better bring him back! = ( *sniffles* Well... Unfortunately, Iku isn't dead, but I understand the delay and I love you for it. He isn't worthy of a quick death. That scene should be at least a half a page. Now I'm wondering what power the girls were given. *tries to figure it out* Hmm... Something to do with their personalities, no? For that matter, I wonder if Inuyasha was effected by it. He IS half human after all... It's weird. It wasn't until you mentioned Kagome going into shock that I really noticed how far this story has come. I mean, yes, this story is getting long and I know the characters have developed and changed, but we've come a long way from when Kagome and Shippo were in that little village where Oda's men initially attacked them. Probably seems like so long ago for you... In any case, I'm glad to have been able to read this story as you're writing/creating it. Please, keep up the great work. I - we - love it. ^^ *gives you a cookie*
| Title: Too Cruel
Reviewed By: rage2velvet [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 14:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alas, thou art too cruel, Noble Writer! You've lefting us hanging! Hanging! Ack! Can I stand it?? I must. Well done. I LOVED it when Sesshoumaru cut off Iku's hair! Take the bird's plumes! Oh, I can't wait until the Monkey Prince get's in on the action. That scumbag cut off his tale! And I know you won't disappoint us with the *ahem* reunion between Sesshoumaru and Kagome. Much to look forward to.
| Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 13:13 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It seemed like forever to get this chapter - but the wait was worth it! That was awesome! I rarely get involved emotionally over fanfiction, but yours takes the cake! I'm more worried about Miroku then reading the lemon too! Wow! Keep writing!
| Reviewed By: RIK9 On: June 02, 2008 10:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have me in tears here!!!!!!!!! Thank you! THANK YOU!!! for such an awesome chapter. Hell, the story caught me in it's web from the very beginning. I'm just happy that they are finally together once again. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm already on pins and needles with anticipation. Please, please update as soon as you can.
| Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 23:18 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that was so moving. I cried over Miroku. I just love him. And Kagome's grieving was so tangible. Nobunaga, I just wanted to cut his balls off. You are great at writing enemies. I hate him. Iku, too. I loved every minute of him being stabbed and poisoned and clawed. Yeah! I was hoping Sesshoumaru would cut his eyes out and cut his dick off and maybe his hands and tongue, too and then leave him alive. I don't know, I really want him to suffer. Can you tell? Thank goodness Sesshoumaru saved Kagome just in time. The chapter was fantastic. Jean.
| Reviewed By: inuyasha-coolness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 16:34 PDT
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ahhhh! and after 10 chapters they see each other again. my eyes are going to explode!!!!!! this chapter was great but it really made me think about sesshomarus upbringing, because if i were to cuss sum1 out it would be more along the lines if "go to hell, stupid ass bitch"... but sesshomaru (and i laughed sooo hard by the way) meets iku and says "die, you odious wretch." lmoa. omg. odious wretch. lol jeez [btw CANT WAIT 4 THA SEXIN!]
| Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 11:56 PDT
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I can't help but to laugh. There was nothing funny about this chapter, but for some reason, I'm chuckling to myself. Maybe it's because you have achieved the impossible with someone like me: I will explain. I was so anxiously awaiting this chapter - when Sesshoumaru and Kagome would be reunited, and Oda and Iku would get their dues. But, your knack for suspense has gotten the best of me, and now, instead of looking forward to the obvious lemon in the next chapter, I'm waiting to see what will happen to MIROKU!!! That's just ABSURD! I should be dying for the smut, not to see if he lives, which I know he will. I know you won't abandon our favorite demon-slayer. And of course, Kagome has to go find the kids they stashed. Anyhow, this was a really great chapter. I'm sad that it's almost at an end, but they all have to end sometime, right? LOL We can't all go on for 10 years, like Rumiko has. So until next time, Happy Writing! (and happy Lemon-Making!!!)
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 03:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea!!!!!!!!!!!!! and another wonderful chapter!!!!
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