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Title: Chapter 34
Reviewed By: WiccanMethuselah [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 00:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another EXCELLENT and spellbinding chapter added on to an EXCELLENT and spellbinding story. Thank you so much for sharing this masterpiece with all of us!! And, CONGRATULATIONS on your placings in the 1st Quarter IYFG awards. Frankly, I felt that this story deserved FAR more, but such is life, eh? I'm looking forward, eagerly, to the next exciting installment, as well as to seeing this most deserving story nominated for yet more awards in the future!! :D ~~Wiccan~~
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 00:20 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!! **happy dance** uh... ok I feel a bit bad about doing a happy dance after that battle, but I feel that one should celebrate the good things. And Miroku could be brought back anyhow... Hell, if Sessh wanted to, he could bring the whole mountain back a hundred at a time. At least someone to take care of the surviving children... I kinda doubt that's going to happen. I think Kagome should purify Iku's dick off. I hope Shin finds happiness before it's all said and done. Maybe the miko Kagome is/was training... He sounds totally hot in the new humaniod form... except for his attitude, but maybe a feudal age woman would expect that sort of jackassery. I'll be so sad if Miroku says dead... did he even die, or was he seemingly on his way there? hmm...
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Title: I can't get no (ba na na) satisFACTion!
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 23:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been possesed by a youkai, now I'm all horny, how long before I see some satisfation???
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Reviewed By: snowbirdyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 21:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the red dust in Miroku's system will keep death from taking him. I think they will find him alive. Maybe not completely healed yet. I could be wrong, but if Sango can heal from a life threatening injury then why should not Miroku. I am so glad Sesshoumaru and Kagome are finally together without something or someone separating them. His confession of love for her was so touching and magnificent. For him to set aside his pride and humble himself like that, showed just how deep his love for her is. Also, thank goodness Inuyasha finally made an adult decision regarding Kagome.
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 21:12 PDT
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very good chapter. i was on the edge of my seat the whole time. the whole 'lover' bit was hilarious, poor kagome, and your ending a/n had me cracking up. very good story. very good indeed. FL
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Title: OH MY GODS!!!
Reviewed By: Kagome357 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 20:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MAKE HIM SUFFER!! MAKE CHICKENBOY SUFFER SOME MORE!! THEN MAKE HIM SUFFER AGAIN!! I HOPE YOU CHAIN HIM TO SESS' DUNGEON FOREVER SO SESS CAN TORTURE HIM WHENEVER HE FEELS LIKE IT! Okay I'm sorry for shouting but I absolutely loved the passionate way you showed Sess' cruelty towards the stinking chicken! Poor Miroku...I hope they get to him in time to save him. the way you had Sess express his love for Kagome was brilliant and breathtaking and the last part of them declaring their love...tear...it was bootiful!! Damn that Oda! I love how Sess made him piss his pants and let him know Kagome was his! Now on to the lemon chapter and (sad face) end of all things that is your wonderful story. I don't often rate but I'm gonna do it today!
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 19:52 PDT
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You're drawing out Iku's torment for all of us who are pissed off at him for ass raping our dear beloved puppy. *smirk* and don't I want to give you a great big kiss for it LOL! There is one torment I'd wish on him. too bad I can't describe it here, not enough characters for me to go into the graphic detail of such a nasty treatment that would be, ironicaly, suited to our soon to be dearly departed bird. I look forward to your next chapter! and thanks for making Oda piss himself. about time that odius little man got what was comming to him! DD
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2008 06:34 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I remember this...I new it was coming as soon as miroku mentioned taking Kagome to the warrior munks to hide...bloodly brillent working this into the story I hope f@#k bird gets his soon, cause his stupid butt is really starting to pev me off...
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Title: What a kick in the Shin!
Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2008 09:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First let me congratulate you for this your story! Now let me say that I feel for Shin!:( So much he must suffer. Now that he can blow fire, shucks look out. But then seems everyone going through some form of torment. Poor Miroku, he's is between a rock and a hard place. Truly an enjoyable story even if it's dark. That darn Iku, well I can't wait to see what becomes of him and Nobaga. Peace!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-coolness [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 21:15 PDT
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this chapter took 4ever. i almost thought u had abandoned it. i wouldhave cried.// but on the other foot, this chapter rocked! ithere were so many parts where i was just like,"wow that was hilarious." like the part where u said shin felt so "put in his place" i was like omg. wow. seshomaru dominates everything. even the big mouth shin. lol. and did u know that the episode of inuyasha came on 2day with oda nobunaga's cusin? kagome asked 4 an aoutograph cuz she thought he was the actual oda nobunaga. then the kid was like, "yes i know him and hes a big IDIOT!" referring 2 oda. all i kept thinking of while watching the episode was this story, which rocks my face off!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: rage2velvet [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 08:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for this installment. It was worth the wait as always. It was also nice and very long which was good reading. The twist about Shin was entertaining. Thanks again!
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Reviewed By: TheSorrowfulVampress [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 19:48 PDT
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This is a great fanfic. I love it. Please continue soon, as there aren't enough dark fics about (Me: slightly sado-masochistic...)
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Title: Ah, the experience of reading
Reviewed By: Doberbitch [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 15:46 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I finally got caught on chapters 31-33! I didn't realize how long it's been since I last read it. I am in summer school trying to advance on some classes for my master's degree. Rinseternalsoul and Risa, these chapters were awesome. Thank you!! My friends talked about them and I felt like I had already read them, but Violation of Honor is an experience that word of mouth just doesn't measure up. Shin is a total hunk! Hey, Shin baby! He is going to make L'Oreal, Miss Clariol, and Garnier jealous. Super Congratulations on your awards; they are well deserve!!~~~~~~~~Doberbitch
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 12:05 PDT
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Oh, my. Can't wait for the next chapter. This story has really evolved since you first started writing it. I'm very glad that you have kept it going. I was afraid for a while there that you would discontinue it, but thankfully you didn't. I hope you can update soon, and I'll be sure to read it as soon as you do update it!
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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 02:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm mad that Shin's upset with his appearance. With the way you described him, he sounds handsome. This is completely at odds with his obtrusive behavior and biased outlook on life. You should have made him a ugly outside as he is inside. ...It'd serve him right... *huffs* Hazzah! Sesshomaru has come to get Rin and now they're on their way to rescue Kagome! ^^ Um, did he ever take that nap? He's definitely going to be feeling it if he hasn't. >< Well, hopefully, Sessho'll get to rest before they get to Mt. Hiei (even though it'd slow they progress... I'm sure Miroku will be fine until they get there). So~ Iku's still disgustingly manipulative. And... Oh! How many days has it been?! O_o Kirara must have made it back to the village by now. And with Sango's new accelerated healing abilities, Inuyasha would let her go on, no (though the question remains if you'd have him let her go off alone right now and exactly how intelligent of a move that would be)? *le sigh* So Sango and Kirara'll will be by the secret entrance just in time to encounter Oda and his army. >.> Great. I love how Kagome doesn't realize (maybe it's the sleep) that she's the reason Crazy Oda attacked Mt. Hiei, and the driving force of the horrific battle. She's why only nine(?) of those monks were left alive and were able to flee to the countryside. ...Wait. That IS how that story went right? I don't remember all the details. >< Either way, this fight's going to be shitty. Sesshomaru better hurry his ass up. DX Well~ Another great chapter. And long too! Yay~! ^o^ No biggie taking a little longer to update; it's only been a month. Take as long as you need. you know, just as long as "as long as you need" isn't over a year. *cough* Looking forward to the next chapter~. I'm hoping it doesn't, but figuring that there will be some horrid cliffhanger at the end of the next chapter. Just in case - >.> I hate you. Okay! Update soon~ *wavies* JA MATA!! = D ~Animefrea242 aka Kawaii Girl
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