| "Violation of Honor" Reviews/Comments [ 497 ] |
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Title: Wonderful story
Reviewed By: Blackrose1849384 On: March 14, 2008 18:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Exceptional story! It is so dark. I just want to keep reading. I am so glad that Asuza finally died! I love how you brought the Aztec gods into the story! It was almost like poetic justice how all her sins gave her a fate worst than death. It is all in all an amazing story! Every chapter just opens a new door. Your characters are so complex and different! They each have their own personality. You really captured Sesshomaru in a way that it still seems like him, but you also change him like what would occur when someone goes through a very traumatic experience. But not in like a day like I see in so many other Sesshomaru and Kagome pairings. So, it is still him but also not him. Again, I think this is a wonderful story! Please update soon. I am dying to read the rest of this story!
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Title: WE'RE NOT WORTHY!!
Reviewed By: Kagome357 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 18:19 PDT
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I BOW TO YOU!! WE'RE NOT WORTHY!! AWESOME!! DING DONG THE SKANK IS DEAD! THE SKANK IS DEAD! DONG DONG THE WICKED SKANK IS DEAD!! PRAISE THE KAMIS!! I'm soooo glad Sesshomaru made a declarative statement to Inuyasha and thank goodness the simpleton was able to put it all together. I worry about Inuyasha sometimes...LOL! Anyhoo, loved the Queens getting together and the uncle boozer is now dead for what he did to that girl. Skankarella getting her just desserts in the netherworld is so fitting. Now...ON TO CHICKENBOY!!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 17:23 PDT
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eeeeeeek i loved it ^-^ update soon!
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Title: Ding Dong the "_"itch is Dead!!!!!
Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 16:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad the crazy demoness we love to hate is gone!!!! And I must say what a suitable ending for her when she got to hell. Our boy Sess Confessed? Whoa! I love the way you got into the relationship between the Monkey King's Queen and Sumiho. I love the way my boy Saburo cleared the way for his mate, cool! But you know what worry me? That damn Iku!!! Oh! I know you got something cooking. I'll wait for the next dinner bell so you can feed my mind with your wonderful story!!! Peace!
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Title: Well done!
Reviewed By: Doberbitch [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 14:48 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WE LOVE YOU!! OH MY GOODNESS,all we did was talk about your story today. Good grief! What an awesome chapter! From the beginning to the end, it was just so damn good. I must say that one of your reviewers had mostly definitely read this chapter too fast. Aoi was still holding Saya in her arm when they landed and I wondered how Inuyasha will react to Saya's injuries. I cannot tell you how surprised we were about Hyuuga being control and fighting Sesshoumaru! What about the truly awesome punishment for Asuza and the Azetecs gods, girl you have some serious creative juices. THAT WAS SOOOOOO AWESOME!!!! My regards to Risa as well. You guys do make for a great partnership.Well done Rinseternalsoul, well done! Damn it was just too good!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 01:51 PDT
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Hmph ....well she desurved it if you ask me...XP.....Well any ways why did that dust have an effect on holy beings, was it because it was made from the bones of the Aztec death goddess and the blood of another Aztec God?.....if that is so why did it make them fall in to an unatural sleep...I don't like this Saya could die if Kagome doesn't wake up in time....and if the sleep is unatural then what will wake the monk and miko......ohhhhhhh the Inu-gang+ seems to still have some trubbles...I wander if Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru can work out their difference at least for Kagomes sack....And dang it what about Chisumi...will she really die a terrible death like that for all the good she did it doesn't seem at all fair though alot of the stuff you wright is hardlly what I would call fair to the Main characters...But I have faith that all will be well and I will be a happy ever after...I can only hope trully...XD
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Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 20:54 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG the bitch was able to use them to fight against each other again. Sesshoumaru was so strong, even though he grabbed Kagome he didn't hurt her. That was such a moving scene; very suspenseful and afterwards when they clung to each other it was so beautiful. Fantastic destruction of Asuza. I'm glad you utilized Yumiko and Kouga as well. Saya's rescue was very unusual and brought both human and youkai together in a touching way, but deadly too. At least for the Uncle. What scum. Sucking out his life force was scary. Always stay friends with that female. I am hoping that she can be restored by Kagome, although at the moment Kagome is unconscious mumbling Sesshoumaru's name. Yes! Inuyasha finally twigs what is going on and the major couple is together at last, just not awake together. Fix that, will you. I just watched "Apocalypto" again the other day which is about the Aztecs and human sacrifices and OMG. So, Asuza will be consumed slowly--a fitting afterlife.
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 19:43 PDT
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awesome ending battle! you have a real knack for writing battle scenes, I never was confused and the battle had a plan to it. :)
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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 19:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
--Since my other review hasn't seemed o be posted, I'll try to continue where I left off in hopes it'll come up later-- Xochipilli is an idiot. XD But I wonder what his blood is going to do to everyone. Breathing that much in can't be good for the humans. Even worse for Kagome and Miroku with their (counterproductive?) powers. Hmm... I wonder if they saw Asuza receive her punishment (since they're asleep)? Hey, I was wondering... Exactly WHAT is Yumiko. She's not half snow monkey, is she (because if sh were, their kids would be strange to say the least)? More so, after this chapter, that 'godly status' remark (in regards to Yumiko's parentage) got me thinking. Hmm...
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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 19:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! OMG, I love you. ^o^ "...you are condemned to suffer the pains of purification through the eating of your flesh until all of your sins have been cleansed." What a great punishment! ^^ I give you cookies. This chapter was really good. I especially like how you made sure to include everyone in the battle in on way or another. And I'm even more glad, and somewhat surprised, that none of the important characters died (though Juno was promising. He probably could have evolved nicely if given some time). But what's done is done, no? Well, in any case, I'm glad that's over. ^^ Now we have to get through the more familial issues (who's sleeping with whom, healing Saya and Uchuu's clan). This should be interesting... Oh! There was a typo... Where Rin and the wives came in. You said, 'Saya carried Aoi', when it should have been the other way around.
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 18:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i wonder if sessh heard her.-thinks- ~sessh-... ~inu-.... soo... she's gone? and i know? can i mock him now? ~tba- uh........... are those retorical questions? ~sessh- ok. let me answer this. yes,yes, and no. ~inu- why not? ~sessh- mock me if u will. for i seem to no longer want the testiga. i have obtained something better. -smirk- ~tba- hits sessh- WOMEM ARENT PROPPERTY!!!!!!!!! ~inu- ill give u tetsiuga 4 her. ~tba-HITS INU- WAT DID I JUST SAY! 4 BOYZ WITH YOUKAI HEARING U GUYZ ACT LIKE UR DEATH! ~sessh- as in cant hear? ~inu- or like dead? ~tba- hits both of them- idiots. -walks away- ~inu- update soon. ooh! oh! and can i mock him! please!!!!!!!!! -puppy dog eyes- ~sessh- i think im gonna hurl. -clutches stoumuch and runs - ~inu- ... oh wait. where is everybody? come back! ...please ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 17:56 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"She's everything to me" :] I loved it!
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 17:37 PDT
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Oh Snap! The punishment for Asuza was amazing. Having the gods argue amongst themselves was brilliant, too. My heart stopped when Sesshoumaru said, "she is everything to me." *tears standing in eyes* Very touching. I also found the moment in battle that Kagome and Sesshoumaru shared very beautiful. I love it.
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Reviewed By: hemlockglade On: March 11, 2008 15:21 PDT
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"You are wrong, Inuyasha. She is everything to me." - love that line! Completely in character within the context of the story, and no doubt delivered with the tone of utter disdain. Also, very satisfying to see Asuza get hers, plus loved the Aztec orgins of the jewel. But the dust worries me, and Iku is still out there, so I am hopefully that the story is not done yet! You are an excellent writer, with multiple plot lines twisting and converging, and compelling original characters - I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-coolness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 15:17 PDT
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i havent even read it yet. im just writing this to say YEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!! XD. AN UPDATE!
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