| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 10:41 PDT
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ohhhhh...that was good and funny..yay for an update...cant wait till they get together...should be interesting...
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 08:38 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL. GREAT chapter. Kagome really showed her potty mouth here, lol. But, Inuyasha REALLY did his best to provoke her. Talk about fighting attraction to the bitter end. He is just determined not to fall in love. But, I wonder why it hasn't occurred to him that if he's already fighting it this hard, he's already halfway there? They have yet to have a meeting where one or both of them isn't cursing the other out. Yet, he's still having to fight not to kiss her?! He's a goner.....and he knows it. Kagome does too, lol. I just can't wait to see these two fall for real. They've both been hurt so badly....but even Inuyasha knows they'd be great together if given a chance. I look forward to seeing that happen. But, I'll definitely be enjoying the ride until they do.
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Reviewed By: more999 On: July 22, 2007 08:13 PDT
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OMG PLZ UPDATE SOON...it was SOOO good!
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 21:26 PDT
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oh wow I was literally on the edge of my seat hoping they would kiss man the sparks are intense I cant wait for you next chapters
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Title: WONDERFUL
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 20:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That was an awesome chapter. I was at the edge of my seat in anticipation. I was so hoping for them to kiss. Man, such fiery. They were so in character I couldn't believe it. You are an excellent writer. Please I need another chapter soon! **glad your move went well. Hope you are doing okay.
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Reviewed By: serenity101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 15:58 PDT
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wow. at least we know why akitoki left kagome like that. great chapter. it was funny. update soon
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 14:30 PDT
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HAHA Conniving bastard. A sexy one at that. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 18:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!! when will you be up dating??!!!?? you've definitely have my attention I look forward to more
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 19:22 PDT
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AAAAGGGGGHHHH,Oi,Inuyasha is an evil ass, that boy got a chip on his shoulder the size of Nevada. But Kagome is the right chick to give him an attitude adjustment and vice-versa. They need each other like peanut butter needs jelly, like a booty to a bench, a hand to a glove (sorry, got a little carried away,smile) Anywho, can't wait to see how this turns out. Until next time happy writing, P.S. Akitoki was a real punk but that s**t Inu did was funny as hell. LATER!!!!
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Reviewed By: Thrust355 On: June 26, 2007 12:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for updating on such a interesting story, so far it has been a joy to read and I know I will continue doing so. I am very sorry to hear of your loss, it must take a lot of effort to continue on with this story after something like that has happened, I know I wouldn't be able to. I hope that things get better for you. I agree with KeKe-Chan, take your time updating. :)
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 09:50 PDT
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I'm sooo sorry to hear about you loss! Please take you time, and of course if writing helps you to take your mind off things, and charges your energy in positive action, i fully encourage it! But don't feel pressured...this is an excellent story, and i'm prepared to wait it out with you!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 03:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CAN I FAINT FOR KAGOME!?! GOD!!!! "Me, but I'm better known as Inuyasha." i can just see Inuyasha right now..... *starts to drool* HOW I WISH HE WAS REAL lol PLEASE UPDATE SOON.... *faint*
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Title: TERRIFFIC WORK
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 22:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found your story and I don't usually read stories that aren't a continuation of the series. But your story sounded very interesting. After reading the 1st chapter, I was hooked. You really bring personality into the characters. I really feel like I actually know them on a personal level. You have done a wonderful job in describing everything in detail. The anguish, sadness,lonelyness, heartbreak. I feel so much for the characters. You made me actually smile as I read some of the funny things you have them say. I actually laughed out loud at one point and stunded myself that I did that. I am already feeling a loss that I can't read more! Just like when they have a season finale and you have to wait until the new season to see what happens. Thank goodness I don't have to wait until September for your story!!! You write beautifully and are a very talented. Keep up the stupendous and great work. **Very sorry to hear about your young cousin. I know it is very hard to have someone leave your life so abruptly. My thoughts and prayers are with you. You can only take one day at a time. Life will get little easier as time goes on. Remember they are always in your heart.
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 19:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry about the lost in your family, my prays are with you and your family. I found this story today and wanted to say I really love it I added it to may "favorite story" Update when you can ok.
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Reviewed By: blue15 On: June 25, 2007 18:51 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Inuyash Baby_bre: inuyasha just got her, and u stopped, its getting good
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