| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 14:44 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I wondered why Akitoki took off so fast. Emergency or not, he would have at least stayed to tell her personally that he had to go, as interested as he seemed. Inuyasha's interfernce certainly explains a lot, the little stinker, LOL. That was so dirty what he did. And his approach at the bar left something to be desired as well. I definitely look forward to seeing how Kagome reacts to all of this stuff; it should be hilarious. On a sadder note, I'm sorry to hear about your cousin. It's always tough to lose a family member but especially one that's so young and to something so unexpected. All you can do is ask for strength, from wherever you can find it.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 23:23 PDT
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OMG!!! She met him, i wonder whats going to happen. I can't wait! Update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: dbporter08 On: June 18, 2007 18:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAHHHHHHHHHHHHH! cliff hanger!!!! this story is so awesome so far though. keep up the good writing!!!
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Reviewed By: jtcl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 15:57 PDT
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I love your story so far I hope you up date so on it
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Reviewed By: serenity101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 21:59 PDT
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oh my freakin god. you have to update. i'm lovin this soo much. i'm up at 1:00 reading the first ten chapters. the anticipation is driving me crazy so update soon. oh, and it's going great. :)
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 19:28 PDT
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I'm really interested to see what happens next. Nice cliffy. I wonder what's up with Hojo...
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Reviewed By: biglaugher113 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 07:35 PDT
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UPDATE SRY
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Reviewed By: biglaugher113 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 07:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an extremely good story. Inuyasha is sooooo damn sexy. plz u have got to review this.
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Reviewed By: *Zetsuii* On: June 16, 2007 18:45 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww man that was frickin hilarious and awesome...i just love it...I am smiling my butt off...anywy thanks for updating but we all are looking for some more action...cant wait for an update or two soon
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-Keke-Chan (nli) On: June 16, 2007 14:13 PDT
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Oooh, what a twist! I was annoyed at him running out on Kagome, but now Inu's here its all good! Tehee, 'have you caused any accidents lately'..classic!! Can't wait for next chappy!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 19:25 PDT
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How absolutely evil and devilshly clever to leave us hanging like that. I think I know why Akitoki left the resturant, 1. If your blind date leaves the table early in the convo and for more than 5 mins, it's not a good sign. 2nd, he proberly followed after her and heard her convo with Sango in the bathroom and bolted. Hey I could be wrong but hmmm. What a nicely played move to have her meet her mystery biker when she's in a foul mood, I see the sparks flying already. Miroku and Sango are silly but enjoyable. Well until next time, happy writing and update soon.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 03:50 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOH, EVIL cliffie! How cruel! LOL. Seriously, good, funny chapter (particularly the phone conversation, LOL), but I can't believe you did that to us at the end! Oh, well, at least he's finally there (and looking scrumptious if the description is any indication). I can't wait to see what they finally say to each other. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: starblade2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 00:18 PDT
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Yay my patience paid off!! LOL Awesome chapter. Now I have to be patient again for the next one.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 23:00 PDT
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damn my heart skipped a beat at the end. Man i chocked on my drink..lol...wonderful story.Cant wait for your next chapter. Plz Update A.S.A.P
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Reviewed By: Aozora_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 08:14 PDT
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AH! I love it! It's funny that both of them are so close together in a way being connected by Rin and yet you've been holding off their meeting each other. I'm glad that you aren't rushing them together like most people =] Great Job so far! Update soon Love Ao. P.S. I don't see what right she had for hitting Kagome when Kouga had mated with her while he was still with Kagome. I would've beat the crap out of him.
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