| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2009 00:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As usual your writings are awesome! I look forward to more very soon. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2009 14:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so worried for part of the middle! Ithought they were going to screw their relationship up again! ahhH! XP I really liked how you broght them together toward the end, but I am worried about Kagome being gone for the two to three weeks. Yikes! Creepy Kouga and Creepy Dead Priestess are on the prowl! Inuyasha should just show up, cutely unexpected like the next day at her family's home. XD XDDD
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Reviewed By: kagomerocks241 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2009 05:52 PDT
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I'm begging you please update soon
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2009 00:06 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
N'aww that was SOOO cute at the end!! i felt all warm and snuggly inside XD anyways isnt Koga's home in Kyoto!?! HOLY CRAP!! damnit Inuyasha you might loss her!! B'AWWWW GO WITH HER!!! *sighs* god i love your story :P
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2009 23:10 PDT
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I love this chapter ... the way you wrote about all the chaos going through their minds about each other. I am so glad that they talked about it though ... in their way. I have this feeling he will be going to Kyoto sooner then the next time she visits. I hope to read more soon.
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Title: Oh This Is Awsome!!!!!
Reviewed By: Lilsweetpea011 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2009 14:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write your chapters soonier or it's going to drive me nuts!!!!!!!!! Still love the story!!! :)
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Reviewed By: Silly1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2009 09:45 PDT
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I love all the little details that make it real--Rin holding the scissors she used to cut open the package of sausages...I'm bad at details. It makes a story that much more interesting, though. I really am enjoying this one!
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2009 04:37 PDT
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this chapter was very revealing. it felt great see inuyasha's insecurities and issues. loved it.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 23:52 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EXCELLENT chapter. I loved all the emotion displayed here....and I'm so glad that Inuyasha and Kagome talked before she plans to leave. Doubts like those can fester if not talked about. Terrific job with that.
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Reviewed By: nicc85 On: March 21, 2009 22:57 PDT
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fantastic as usual... and you always have sessh say something that has me cracking up. kagome going back to kyoto; kouga going back to kyoto... doesn't sound so good...
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 21:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
magnificent! that was soooooo good. gosh, inuyasha that jealous butt! =]
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 20:37 PDT
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I daresay I think I know whats gonna go down in the next chapter %D lol oh my Ninja powers. BUT! Now it makes sense eh? lol horahh for updates!
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 19:45 PDT
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Oh the tears... It wasnt really that sad and I still have tear tracks running down my face... Anywho, two or three weeks huh? With Kouga there... It wont last, besides I dont think Inu Yasha could go that long without seeing Kagome... It was great, hurry up and update!
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Title: two cents
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 19:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inuyasha was two cents away from bein a real big baka. For a second there I thought she was really going to have to slap him, but it worked out (woo)... But I sense another baka on the horizon, I certainly hope that she's not as "understanding" as she once was. I loved that bit with Kouga in the beginning by the way you really write him as a first class wackadoo. Until next time may the muses stay with you!
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Reviewed By: Karaumea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 19:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh... I just reviewed the chapter in fanfiction.net, but I'll say it again. Great chapter! But stop revising it, dammit! :-) I get the sense that you're like me. You're not able to wait one more second once you're done writing, and you post it. But once you do it, you see the minor errors while you read it from the website, and cursing yourself to have missed such small but obvious mistakes you start revising the chapter. Is that close? Haha! You already have a beta, but do you need one more set of eyes to check the chapter before you post? If so, I can lend you mine :-)
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