| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Title: Love the story
Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 17:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must tell you that I'm enjoying this story a lot. It's different and not only because it's an AU but because how you are 'managing' the characters. The insecurities and refusal of relationships by Kagome, the hilarous and -in a way- so in actitude Sango, and of course Inuyasha. It's a break from Confrontations and Confrontations II -love those stories- but suffered and suffering sooooooo much with all the situations the gang is put through!!! Although, must say, don't shout victory yet on this story... have the feeling that angst is round the corner... lurking... just a gut thing. Okay. Nice chapter, funny and entertaining and love all the way you are playing with our beloved characters. Good job, keep going and thank you, thank you VERY MUCH for your beautiful stories!
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Reviewed By: szyszka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 16:22 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter!! can't wait for more:)
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Reviewed By: serenity101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 09:31 PDT
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it took me a minute to read your chapter cuz of school, but this was great. i would have mushed the little kid in his head or something. he needed to mind his buisness. update soon kay
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 00:52 PDT
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I have mostly preferred Inu/Kag fics that are more a continuation, but I absolutely love this story. I just love your InuYasha, he is hhhmmmm! I so look forward to reading more of this story. Thanks Dei Dei
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Title: Chapter 18
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2007 18:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved that chapter. I love how you write what they are thinking inside. You do it so terrificly. I loved the scene with the little boy and him saying "you like her, don't you? I can tell by the way you look at her." That was priceless. I hope when they get to Hawaii that they open up to each other. Maybe another drink or 4 will loosen them up. Ha! Keep up the wonderful work. I love your story. It gets better and better. and of course... please update soon :) ---Amy
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Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2007 16:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story. Please update soon =)
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2007 13:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, those two are just fooling with themselves for thinking that.... And what kind of dad that kid has? Talk about scarred for life..... Anyways, great chapter, getting really interesting, and hope you update. Peace....
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin (offline) On: September 28, 2007 06:52 PDT
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I loved every bit of this chapter. So funny. I can't wait for the next chapter. Good luck!
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Reviewed By: lostgirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 22:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! the barriers are starting to come down! now things are going to get really interesting. you so totally rock
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 22:09 PDT
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are they ever going to get together
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Reviewed By: shijin suzume [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 20:16 PDT
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I love this story so much. It's writtend brilliantly, and I love how you make the characters multifaceted. I've been reading the story for some time now, and I get so excited every time there is a new update. Hope things get better for you, and thanks so much for yet another awesome chapter! :)
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: September 27, 2007 16:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet. Nice chapter. When the arrive it should be really interesting...
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 16:30 PDT
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Always beyond my expectations!!! Malcolm was so adorable asking Inu those questions. Hahah.. that made me laugh. Thank you so much for posting this chapter. It was heart warming. Can't wait to read your next chapter!!!!
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 16:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a cute chapter. Kids are so nosey and forward. Thats funny. I wonder who the father is...lol. Anywayz, I do hope things for you take a change for the better. I think it has been a crappy month for everyone. Next month is Holloween, that should be fun. ne? Well til next time, take care.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 15:20 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT chapter. Inuyasha's conversation with that kid was hilarious "Stay out of grown folks' business!" I loved it, LOL. And I'm glad that we are finally starting to really see the chinks in both of their armor. They are both potty-mouthed and damaged....but at the same time so worthy of being loved. I really hope that they have a REAL breakthrough in Maui; if the armor is already shaky and they haven't even gotten off the plane, there's a good chance that they're toast when they actually get around the romantic atmosphere of the island. I really hope so. I look forward to reading more as soon as you can post it. And I'm sorry that things are so crappy in your real life. We all have times like that.....and sometimes bitching to strangers can be very beneficial. So, feel free to bitch all you want, lol. Take care.
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