| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 23:24 PDT
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And so it starts anew,nothing like a love built on mutual hatred(smile). Poor,emotionally twisted Inu he's just way in over his head but swears he's in control. Can't wait for next time.
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Title: THANK YOU
Reviewed By: shijin suzume [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 22:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I devoured this chapter. THANK YOU SO MUCH. I can't wait for the next. Oh how I want Inu and Kagome to just get their heads out of their behinds and get together. I love this story! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: smich16 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 18:16 PDT
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great chap!! i love the way you have that comical banter between inuyasha and kagome, its somewhat tense but at the same time its funny, im very much grateful you added a new chapter. but im getting anxious to hear what happened to inuyasha, that was so horrible that he'd shut out sexy kagome. anyway, awesome fic keep it up!~smich16
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 17:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been checking for this story to update with such eagerness...you have no idea. This chapter was so good. I like seeing their defenses come down a little, not that I didnt enjoy the fights, cus they are funny. So, next chapter I take it from the excerpt that things get a little physical?? That should be entertaining. Will Kags just loose it?? Will it open pandora's box so that Inu will finally see that Kagome is as broken as he is?? I can't wait.....til then, take care!
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 16:34 PDT
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Great chapter!!! Funny, entertaining, with a tiny little insight of his insecurities and into Kagome's heart too. Loved their "play-mode" behaviour and love how the story is flowing. Wonderful chapter, thank you very much for the update and for sharing it!!!!
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Reviewed By: serenity101 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 16:00 PDT
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yay this was fun! i love this story! you gotta update real soon. i think its cool how you got them in the same room like that. something is going to happen between them, i just know it.
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 15:57 PDT
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write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!hurryyyyyyyy!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 14:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm more comfortable with the emotions expressed in the story at this point than i was in the beginning. there's still angst, just not unprovoked hostility. i loved that you started the chapter by giving them a common enemy in sesshoumaru. nothing brings two people together as much as haveing someone in common to be mad at. you painted a perfect image to the tranquility of a tropical island. makes me wish i was there right now. i appreciatethe fact that you are not making them rush into acceptance of each other. in order to keep it believable, you can't rush things. thank you again for a wonderful story
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Reviewed By: szyszka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 12:58 PDT
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another great chapter:) update soon!!
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Reviewed By: *-Stranger-* On: October 08, 2007 11:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story... i was hooked the moment i read the summary... i'm sad that there was no more chapters to read so please update soon!
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Reviewed By: arizonasiren On: October 06, 2007 09:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story. Love your style of writting. Can't wait for your next update.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 04:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm glad that i finally caught up to you. it's a fulfilling feeling, but now i have to wait for up-dates. in the beginning i almost quit reading. the feelings of bitterness from both kagome and inuyasha were right at the brink of making me give up on the story. the only thing that kept me going was the quality of your writing. i know every story isn't a happy story, but the seemingly total disillusionment with life and relationships is something that bothers me on a personal level. so it may be a flaw in myself, and not your story. i'm just glad that you didn't take that aspect any further than you did. i do like how you have developed the story to this point. i am eagerly awaiting your updates. and if real life gets in the way, i will wait. it never pays to try and rush a story. it comes in it's own time. thank you for sharing your talent with us.
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Title: awhhhhhh
Reviewed By: inuyashalover913 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 22:42 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was sososo cute!:) I loved every bit of it. Eeeeek, update soon! Pretty pleaseee. That made my day:):)
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 00:49 PDT
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Missed reading this story sooooo much. This plane ride is hilarious,those two are like a walking boxing match. When they finally let go of their bulls**t it's going to be explosive. Until next time, happy writing
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 23:35 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
got to say... im starting to hate 'Boom chicka wah wah'.... its on tv WAY TO MUCH!!!! lol but awww Kagome was sleeping on him.... >.< i want to see that it!! AWWWWWW Inuyasha is starting thinking that he likes her soon ...... i CANT wait lol... NO i cant wait when their on the beach.... *wink* that will be classic ^^
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