| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: jewel78 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 14:46 PDT
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I am soooo adding you to my author fav's
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Title: Wonderful!!!
Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 14:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it! Really loved this chapter, loved how they are trying so hard to avoid falling for each other. Wonderfully writing, the pace, the dialogues, their thoughts, the quarreling, the reluctant tenderness, everything was writing with the right dose making this a magnificient chapter. Really beautiful and, why not, funny. Congrats!!! Thank you, thank you for this chapter and for sharing with us.
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 14:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a very sweet chapter. It looks like walls are coming down, slowly, but surely. Trust is what is going to have to be built and both will have to have a little faith in one another for them to move forward. I very thankful for your update, it is always fun. Great job!!
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 14:13 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAH!!! Laugh my fucking pants off!!! That was so hilarious when Inuyasha was taking those pictures of her!!!! Overall, I'm sort of happy that Kagome broke down in front of Inuyasha because now, they are officially "FRIENDS"..... Great chapter. I was so totally impressed!!!! The next chapter is going to be great! Thanks for sharing all the time! Good Luck with your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: serenity101 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 13:43 PDT
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awww that was cute...and sad on kagome's part. great chapter. update fast k.
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Reviewed By: jewel78 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 13:35 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I the work you're putting in with creating this story. Keep up the good work, and by all means please, keep updating. I absolutely love Heart's Landfill. Big ups to Simonkal of Inuy!!!!
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Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 13:34 PDT
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*Click, another picture taken.* Lmao... that was awesome. Was lmao at the tug-o-war with the cam, that was great. I needed a laff and that did it for me, lol. Wonder what he'll do now with the epiphany he got on her outburst, seeing as he knew it really wasn't aimed at him. Ive been reading this from the get go, and have enjoyed every bit of it. Excellent chap, and update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 12:42 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Much love goes to you and your story~! Awesomeness! ^.^ Can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 11:47 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT chapter. It was HILARIOUS. Kagome doing all that ranting and raving....and it's all wasted because she was practically naked while she screamed at him. And, just like a guy, Inuyasha took full advantage. LOL. Of course, if the shoe had been on the other foot, I'm sure that Kagome would have taken the opportunity to take a couple of pictures of Inuyasha, too. Oh, yes, I enjoyed that part A LOT. And it wasn't even my favorite part. My favorite part was the....breakthrough between Inuyasha and Kagome. It was just heartbreaking when Kagome started crying while they were wrestling on the bed. Those tears had obviously been a long time coming. A broken heart can really mess you up. And Inuyasha was so sweet! And, he's also right. After a scene like that, you HAVE to be friends. It's an unwritten rule, especially since Inuyasha finally sees that he and Kagome are kindred spirits. Both of them have an amazing capacity for love....but both have had it scorned and thrown back in their faces. I just look forward to seeing how this all plays out from here. They are SO perfect for each other!
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Reviewed By: angleofthenight [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 10:58 PDT
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another amazing chapter! this story is so great! i love the twists and turns you take with it. keep up the great work and i can not wait to see what else you have up your sleve!
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Title: ?
Reviewed By: inuyashalover913 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 18:42 PDT
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for some reason what i wrote didnt show up aha oh well, what i said was: really great work:D very nice lil' excerpt. Does that mean the next chapter will be coming out soon? ahh can't wait:)
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: inuyashalover913 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 18:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 02:01 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooo why cant Inuyasha let his wall down like Kagome is doing >.
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Title: WOWZERS!
Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2007 14:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COOL! This chapter was just amazing!!! That little teaser that you call an excerpt sounds quite interesting! I can't wait! I'm jumping for joy already!! You are just an amazing author. Thanks for sharing all the time! Good luck on your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 04:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well... at least their civil to one another.... And that room arrangement (shakes head) that is very annoying at some points, but in this case.... yeah. Anyways, love the chapter and, of course, the story. Keep it up and hope you'll update. Peace....
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