| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: serenity101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 07:57 PST
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Do you know how much i love this story? i always go to my email just to see if you updated or not. i really love this story, and this was a funny chapter. update soon.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 04:28 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the fact that you're not rushing the developing relationship. keeping it at the point it is now makes people keep coming back. at least for a while. the confusion as to how to make a relationship progress is something that most people have lived through and can relate to. even the confusion over being honest with you own feelings, is something that is known to most readers. the trick, for the writer, is to find just the right moment and situation for that relationship to experience a breakthrough that will let it progress to the next level. i think they have to be in a situation that forces them to rely on just each other for either emotional or physical support. just having them close physically(as in sharing the same suite) isn't enough for them to break through the emotional walls they have set up. whatever you decide to do, i'm sure you will do it well. i like this story more and more, with the direction you have given it. thank you for another good chapter
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 23:02 PST
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Damn,this was a good chapter,I see some s**t is about to hit the fan with those two. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 22:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, while she may have denied it, so was he, if not more so. He wants her, and he knows it... should be interesting on how he gets her, lol. Till next time: update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: November 09, 2007 22:38 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah for the update! *lol* Inu is such a bad boy...and Kagome, talk about a spit fire. Do I see some drunken hooking up in the next chapter?Captin Morgan anyone? *lol* Can't wait to see more from you, great job.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 21:49 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. Good GRIEF, these two are so cute! I know that's a silly thing to say about these two jaded, cursing folks.....but for some strange reason, "cute" is the only word that seems to apply! LOL. Their jealousy of even the thought that the other is talking or thinking about a member of the opposite sex that isn't them. Their silly, sexy arguments (MAN, Kagome has more willpower than I could ever have if she's resisted Inuyasha's sexiness this long, lol). I can't help but hope that something finally gives between these tow stubborn folks before they leave this beautiful island. And I look forward to reading more soon.
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 21:47 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally caught up with this story (too many interuption on my part) anywho, this story is really great can't wait till the next update.
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Title: Oh myyy
Reviewed By: shijin suzume [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 20:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, I pretty much do a little jig every time I see that there is a knew chapter! Thanks so much for the update... I am so in LOVE with this story! Update soon!
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Title: Lol!!!
Reviewed By: sunrisegoodbyes [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 20:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh that last chapter had me cracking up and almost crying at the same time!! You are a fabulous writer! I looooovvveeee the way you make them hate each other but deep down they know they love each other. ah, priceless. Oh and the whole cell-camera thing that just made me laugh into an early grave. Well update soon cause then i can write another comment!!!
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2007 19:05 PDT
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write more pleese
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Reviewed By: xyanblue On: October 23, 2007 10:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i can't believe she broke don't in front of him like that please write moe soon
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 22:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was good morning now wasn't it? Love this chapter, reminds me of middle school when the same thing happened to me..... That was embarrasing... but made a new friend out of it, thank god. Well it was funny, cute in a way... and just fantastic. Hope you update and keep it up. Peace...
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 20:15 PDT
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How do I love this story,let me count the ways. They had a moment "aaaawwwwww" and now it has been immortalized on Inuyasha's phone,hehehe. Those two are hilarious and how do you get so mad that you forget your in your drawers in the den of the enemy,she's crazy haha. But kudos to Inu for being able to comfort her a little, we females like showing weakness about as much as men. Wonderful job and hope to read ya sooner than later.
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Reviewed By: LookAtMe [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 15:56 PDT
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wonderful i love this! update again soon please...but don't feel rushed...everyone has their own lives!
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Title: haha
Reviewed By: inuyashalover913 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 15:00 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahaha omg i was laughing so hard when he was taking the pics, and then when they were wrestleing(sp?). aha! awh, poor kagome, at least inuyasha was understanding her pain. did i sense a hint of foreshadowing with that vow;D great chapter:) can't wait 'til the next one!
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