| "A Fool's Redemption" Reviews/Comments [ 144 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4kagome [NSI] On: July 14, 2008 16:37 EDT
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Well can I guess correctly that Inuyasha had just heard the interraction between Naraku and Kagome. And I am so happpy to see that he is being his jealous self already..even if he doesn't notice. haha I love this story. Its has such a unique story line. And the setting...man it could be an awesome movie. lol OH and she totally dropped sango out!! OH now i really cant wait til thenext chapter. Great job. =D
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Reviewed By: BoxingKing [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 04:50 EDT
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Excellent story! I love AUs, and yours is such an interesting world! I kept waiting for Naraku to do something, and with what we know of him, it has to be something bad... ARGH! The suspense! I'm also waiting for Miroku. Sango has to be with him, it seems like. At first, I thought you had him change into Naraku once he became the Prince, but then I began hoping he was the Prince that left. That's my hope, anyways. Can't wait for stuff to come to a climax! For that matter, get some more smut in there! Everything is very well written, and flows wonderfully. Keep up the good work, I am awaiting eagerly an update!! ~BoxingKing
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Reviewed By: Teddy Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 20:54 EDT
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Incredible, simply incredible. I can honestly say that this story is absolutely amazing. The plot in and of itself is exceptionally divine. The way you so intelligently and eloquently explained away Inuyasha's unique outer-characteristics using very advanced modern technological concepts, not to mention how you created a whole different world, was fabulous. It was so vividly portrayed that, had I not known any better, I would have actually believed that such a wonderland existed. You beautifully made the transition between Inuyasha and Kagome from enemies, to "frenimies" and finally partially accepting friends (hopefully with benefits). It made the fic seem all the more real. You depicted the characters well and I applaud your commendable efforts. Inuyasha is the surly, stubborn, asshole we all know and love, and Kagome the spitfire vixen. I cannot put into words how much I enjoyed this piece of literature. I spent the whole day reading it praying for it not to end. For the record I for one LOVE LONG CHAPTERS, so feel free to go wild whenever you fancy. Your story has wormed its way into the spot of my top three most favourite fics I have ever read in all my time of being an avid persuer of brilliant stories. I hope you update soon and that the upcoming chapters will be just as good as the rest. Continue to stroke the fires of your passion for writing and I hope God guides and blesses your talented hand. PS: Sorry for the long review. Sometimes I get carried away when I really like something. If you like you can peruse my own fic (first ever) called FATED, I'd really like to know what you think about it.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 14:21 EDT
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Absolutely amazing as usual. I am so incredibly infatuated with this story and I love the way you write. Thanks for updating!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 14:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: bad Kagome
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 03:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my words have left me, but I still wanted to leave a virtual smiley face. I not disappointed with anything. I think the story will be that much richer if it takes time to explore the emotions and reason behind the plot.
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Title: I looooooove it!
Reviewed By: larky_bird [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 00:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story! Please write more! You've got me hooked!!!
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Reviewed By: fudge On: July 13, 2008 00:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how exciting. I guess they are starting at a new level into their blooming relationship, can't wait for you to update! hopefully soon!
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Reviewed By: klachcik1214 On: July 12, 2008 22:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so much it's definitely one of my favorites, probably my most favorite
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Reviewed By: BrokenAngel1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2008 19:05 EDT
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love it so far. just started it 2 day. 1st chapter captivated my attention from the start. very interestin story plot. can't wait 4 more updates, but take ur time if u need 2. no need 2 rush through chapters if they end up crappy b cuz u were pressured 2 post em fast. then again, with ur writin, it's not really possible 4 it 2 b crappy in the 1st place, so u ain't got nothin 2 wrry about.
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 (not signed in) On: July 12, 2008 18:35 EDT
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This is excellent! I usually don't like AU fic but have found a few to be to my liking... this one is definitely at the top of my list! I angst over where Miroku could be, tho... :) Keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: musicmuse18 On: July 12, 2008 17:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoy reading your story. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2008 17:08 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. And although it wasn't the naughtiness some of us were hoping for, I can see that it was important to the plot. Inuyasha needed to see himself for what he had become. He was, for lack of a better word, a whore. He was using others while allowing himself to be used. And that was such an ugly way and sad way to live. And when Kagome saw him doing that he finally realized how badly he was misusing the gift she had given him....his life. You couldn't have done that any better. Inuyasha was finally forced to see what he had become and realized that he needed to change. Unfortunately for him, it looks like he is going to have some competition from Naraku where Kagome is concerned. I loved this chapter, and I look forward to reading more as soon as you can post.
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Reviewed By: new2meridies On: July 12, 2008 17:04 EDT
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In this last chpater you have Kagura nipping on Inuyasha's earlobe. He has doggie ears. He doesn't have an earlobe... Otherwise this story is pretty good. Is Kagura working for Naraku in this to do something to Inuyasha?
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Reviewed By: stargazer824 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2008 11:48 EDT
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Another great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!!
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