| "A Fool's Redemption" Reviews/Comments [ 144 ] |
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Reviewed By: secret35 On: February 19, 2009 17:07 EST
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this story is so amazing!!!!!!XD please please please update as soon as possible, im going to die slowly if never comes, this story is one of my favorite stories, please please update, it will complete me. lol XD
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2009 00:00 EST
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this is great you have to update soon! i really, i cant exsplain how much i love this fic, i literally screamed when i saw there wasnt another chapter... so hurry please its killing me...
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Reviewed By: tres_chic [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2009 22:50 EST
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i loove this chapter! actually love the whole story in general. it just makes me wanna read the next chapter more badly! took you a while but im very happy for you :)
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession09 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2009 21:42 EST
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I'm so glad you're back! Hope to see a new chapter soon!
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: yume_no_hanabira [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2009 14:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this fic and I hope you haven't given up on it. The story is fantastic and gripping and I really want to know what'll happen next!
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Reviewed By: Berly On: December 31, 2008 00:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Please, please, please update! I love this fic. It is currently my favorite and I check for an update every time I go online. I've been following it for quite awhile (more than six months, maybe even more than a year!) and you generally update at a reasonable pace but this time gap makes me think you've given up! It would make my day to see another chapter. Thank you!
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Reviewed By: HentaiSouljaShojo On: December 19, 2008 16:43 EST
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O.K. Can you please update your story ? Ijust found it and wanted to know what happens next thank You
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Reviewed By: Broken Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2008 01:29 EST
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Absolutely astounding fic. The plotline is easy to follow and very well thought out. I love the characterization of Naraku so far. I always thought he would be a suave kinda guy if he weren't so evil. I'm very anxious to see InuYasha's reaction to this "date" business as well. I really hope you continue this fic, I'm so into it! Haha. Well, thanks for this piece!
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession09 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2008 00:31 EST
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You still hanging in there? Hope to hear from you soon!
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Reviewed By: KawaiiTierra [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 13:15 EDT
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Oh my gosh! Chapter 12 kept me at the edge of my seat as soon as it ended. It's a Cliffie. I wonder what it is. o_e; I keep re-reading it over, and over again to get some clue. But I haave no idea! I'm dying for an update D:
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Reviewed By: KawaiiTierra [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 12:48 EDT
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Hopefully, you'll get a chance to write up your next chapter (And if we're lucky a couple of chapters). It'd be great if your next chapter can be longer, because it's just too darn enjoyable and the waiting is a killer. Takecare D: And thank for you for the amazing fic, it seems so rule -- Everything plays out so perfectly in my head.
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Reviewed By: KawaiiTierra [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 12:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad you were nominated
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Reviewed By: breizhbit On: September 04, 2008 22:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story--prompting me to leave my first review on MM!! I have to say that since the start of this story I've been completely intrigued by the tone and the care you've taken in setting a convincing and compelling atmosphere. The city and its culture seems so well thought out that it lends this vivid and slightly surreal aspect to all of the action taking place with Inuyasha and Kagome, as well as whatever plot is shaping up with Sango and Naraku (where's Miroku? White Prince??). As far as the technical aspects of your writing, I haven't noticed anything that put me off about it, and I can tell you it's very hard for me to read stories that have a lot of spelling and grammar issues (even if they're my own!) I also must say that with regard to the sex scene in chapter 12 I was pleasantly surprised that I managed to stick it out and get through it. I am generally obsessive about canon pairings and sometimes find it hard to handle scenes with other parties that seem gratuitous. This one did not, and though I was disgusted with Kagura & co. (and Inuyasha's behavior!) it was worthwhile to see how it affected Kagome and Inuyasha's situation. Though I have to say I am looking forward to him having to deal with turnabout, as Naraku seems pretty insistent on this upcoming date. What will Inuyasha think about that one? Hopefully it will inspire further introspection and not retaliation? Can't wait to find out! Eeep! Well, sorry for the super-rambling review but your story deserved attention! I hope that you will be able to update soon, since I really look forward to seeing where this one is going to end up! Thanks for writing!
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Reviewed By: Inu_Does_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 03:51 EDT
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I hate to question the writer but...this is a InuYasha and Kagome fiction right??? I find your story quite captivating and Im thrilled with joy with every sentence. To me it kinda feels like some parts of your storyline have been used before but its original in the scence that Kagome saved InuYasha and that he is now a prince of sort and is actually worshipped (with girls and sex) instead of being an outcast. Its confusing but I admit its an interesting turn of an idea and because of that it has captured all of my attention. Hopefully you will reassure me that it IS InuYasha and Kagome in the end and I can let go of my possessive nature I have for those two together.....or at least a bit of it. Afterall InuYasha its only fair that Kagome gets some romantic lust after her when he has a blow-job am I right? lol. Still.....InuYasha and Kagome forever! p.s. I also appreciate Naraku going after Kagome instead of Koga all the time. Its a great refresher. And Naraku is handsome.....in his own evil way......
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2008 04:25 EDT
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I hadn't found anything really worth reading for a while, and then this jewel of a story popped up, and I was very happy with it! This story is original and entertaining, but it's also thoughtful and well written. I'm really looking forward to seeing how it progresses.
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