| "A Fool's Redemption" Reviews/Comments [ 144 ] |
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Title: Bananas in pajamas are coming down the stairs
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2009 08:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a nice light hearted chapter (great kiss too), would saying I hope it stayed that way for a while jinx it. Is Naraku not a complete loon in this, I can't get a read on his character???
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Reviewed By: Randomfangirl247 On: April 17, 2009 01:31 EDT
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Totally awesome. I love it. And I hope Kagome gets InuYasha back for his little stunt by hiding all of his left shoes or something. I hope she does little things like that to annoy him for a whole day. I also wonder what Emory will think about the changes in InuYasha when he returns from his vacation. I'm sure he'll be in for a shock. I hope you update soon. Good luck! Randomfangirl247
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Title: Glad you're back!
Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 16:28 EDT
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I'm not sure why I didn't get notified of your update; this story is on my favorites list. So glad you've continued and this chapter was one of your best! Your style has changed subtly, probably because of the time away from the fic, but I've suffered health problems, too, so I empathize with the length of time it took to update (I'm just as guilty with 'Facets'). Thanks for soldiering on!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2009 09:31 EDT
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absolutely amazing chapter! it was fun and cute and hilarious. i'm glad you're feeling better and thanks so much for taking the time to update. this story is incredible.
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2009 09:17 EDT
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I am so glad you are doing better and have been able to continue the story! Your story is amazing and I am thrilled to see that you plan on continuing it!
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Reviewed By: secret35 On: March 31, 2009 04:43 EDT
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YEAH!!!! you updated!!!! i was starting to worry and i was just thinking about this story this morning... GOSH!!! this story is amazing. INUYASHA and KAGOME FINALLY KISSED!!!!!!!!! YEAH!!!!! Thank You Thank You for not giving up. please, please update sooner if you can please XD
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession09 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2009 01:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you're back! I was getting worried! I totally understand about the thyroid mess though. Every woman in my family has problems with that, which is uncommon for an entire line , including cousins and whatnot. My 15-year-old little sister just had surgery to have hers removed because she had cancer. They caught it early so she'll be fine. But I know what its like to not have your meds working as they should. my lil sis gets crazy without hers now that she has no thyroid. Anyways, glad to see you're back and feeling better and I can't wait for what comes next!
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2009 00:44 EDT
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it was freaking fantastic! oh my god, it made me so happy. now i just hope that my other updates are as good... great chapter, seriously. the kiss took my breath away, and when he bit her finger i literally cried out as well... before i read what her reaction was...
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2009 22:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was just thinking about this story the other day, when I was going through some old unfinished stories I have bookmarked and wondering when and if I should give up hope on any of them. Yours was one that I definitely kept in the "still waiting" pile, and now look, just a couple of days later my loyalty paid off! Goodie goodie! Great chapter, keep up the good work, and super looking forward to additional updates. :-)
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2009 21:57 EDT
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Wonderful chapter...and welcome back! It was a pretty long wait...but this one was terrific. Inuyasha has FINALLY realized what is going on with his feelings for Kagome and making his move. The moonlight scene at the end was beautiful and fun...but so serious at the same time. And let's not forget the leaping at the concert that probably told EVERYBODY more than Inuyasha wanted them to know about his feelings for her. I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2009 21:14 EDT
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I'm so glad to know that you're better. I was wondering what had happened. I suffer from seizures and have long bouts of not being able to write, so I know where you're coming from---This was a lovely chapter. It seems that a little competition was exactly what Inuyasha needed to get his ass in gear. Their interactions were so cute and sweet. I'm with Kagome in wondering how long it will last. I wonder what was up with Sango. Perhaps I should re-read the story. Naraku creeps me out, but I have to wonder if he hadn't intentionally wanted to further Kagome's and Inuyasha's relationship, though I can't imagine why. Anyway, loved all the waff. ^_^ Hope you keep feeling well. Snow
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Reviewed By: xcuteanimegurlx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2009 14:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update please
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Reviewed By: Patricia Amber Hiwatari [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2009 18:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the most original stories i've read in a loooooong while. It's very entertaining and has me anxious to read what will happen next. Please update soon and don't give up on it!!!!
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2009 23:23 EST
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Please update... I really like this story, for weeks I was dreaming about it, thinking about it. You've got me hooked and you've left me hanging. I love this story, the detail, the imagery, its great, its beyond great, its fantastically splendorifourus! Its to beyond the beyond that I had to make up a new word on the spot to describe it. Please update, I love this story.
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Reviewed By: Millicent... On: March 01, 2009 18:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This by far is my most favorite fic. Its one of the most creative ones out ther. Please continue it.
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