| "A Fool's Redemption" Reviews/Comments [ 144 ] |
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2010 00:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You're still alive, and so is this story! Wonderful update, though I agree with what's been said that you most certainly don't have to shorten your chapters on our account. I would much rather read longer chapters. I understand the mathematical theory of shorter chapters equaling less wait-time between updates, but so far that theory has yet to be proven! Still, glad to know you haven't abandoned this fic. Now hopefully this new angsty arc won't take that long to resolve before they can get back to getting closer again.
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Reviewed By: sublimetrickster [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2010 17:15 EDT
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Nooo, not more hardships for their relationship! Just tell him, Kagome, he'll understand... eventually.
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Title: Yeah!!
Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2010 15:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Welcome back. Good chapter. I do wish Inuyasha's nose would've figured out what was wrong, but that may have given us a conclusion too fast. Better for them to keep plugging away at their resolution. Naraku's nice and creepy as ever. Just what was he thinking!!! Drugging her, then kissing and... nothing else? Wuh huh? I'm guessing it's to sow dissent, but maybe a bit subtle for him. If this was canon, I'd think she'd have miko powered him and he'd used her blacked out time to recover but that wouldn't work in this series, so I'm guessing he was some percentage of gentleman there.
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Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2010 11:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I've forgotten how much I love this fic. Take all the time you need updating, but please never abandon this one! I cant wait to see what happens! Stupid Naraku needs to keep his lips off Kagome!
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2010 02:50 EDT
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I understand your fear of writing long chapters, misguided as it may be, that it will make readers not want to read your story. But honestly if it's going to be a year between chapters anyway, I would much rather read 25 pages or more and feel fulfilled and that the wait was worth it than feel gypped by a very small chapter. It also seems that the urge to keep your chapter size down is actually making you take longer in between chapters not making than come faster. But then I have seen that happen to other writers as well. Why hobble your muse when it is whispering in your ear and your fingers your flying across the keyboard? Sounds counter productive to me. All that aside, it was wonderful to find that a new chapter had finally shown up for this story, even if I did want to yell at Kagome for being stupid.
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: breizhbit [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 21:45 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love reading this story! Though there was kinda a lot of Inuyasha thinking on things in this chapter, I loved the sweet moments between IY and Kagome, and I am certainly in great suspense as to just what the hell Naraku is up to. In an environment like the one you've created, how does he plan to get away with doing anything to Kagome against her will? Is he counting on his reputation and position as prince to override her status as Inuyasha's assistant & special person as well as being niece to the king? Is he planning something that he thinks no one will find out about? Just what is going on? (Still wondering where Miroku is if he is in fact who Sango is sighing over in this story.) Also! I was very happy to read your book recs as I have been casting about for some new material lately. Thanks! Wonderful work and thanks so much for the chapter!
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Title: miroku
Reviewed By: kitty555 On: August 10, 2009 09:34 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so much, anyways In chapter 8 descrip about 'kouga being prince surprised' i realized it refered to Miroku...whose whereabouts are a bit of a mystery...Does miroku ever appear?? Does he now that in his absense Sango has been seemingly 'involved' with Naraku? i think miroku would make a great purple prince... The colours fit so perfectly (Naraku Black...kouga gold...etc) anyways I really Do Love this Story
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2009 10:57 EDT
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Oh noes! The dangers of drinking, and letting other people get you drinks have been proven once again. It was really nice to see that this had been update, though the cliffhanger is a bit maddening. However, I was certainly not disappointed in the quality, and am looking forward to the conclusion of this alcoholic fiasco.
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Reviewed By: star555555528(nsi) On: July 01, 2009 02:44 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wanna no what happened!!!! I feel so lost w/o knowing!!! please please please try to update soon. This is the best story ever!!!
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2009 17:35 EDT
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you dont know how thrilled i was when i saw that there was an update... i had all but given up, the last step was to delete this story from my favorites list but i held out and boy am i glad i did... but now you've left me with a cliff hanger and lord knows i cant stand them. dispite how deliciously cliff hangie they are, but its worth it... just dont leave me waiting for so long this time!
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2009 02:07 EDT
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NO, no. You can't do that to me. Ack! Naraku kissing Kagome and drugging her. Help!!! We had some wonderful fluff, Inuyasha is taking things slowly with her, everything is working great and now I assume that Kagome is either going to be kidnapped or raped. Nooooo the injustice of it all! Arrgh! Sob sob! OK a few other thoughts... I believe that Naraku is actually into genetic engineering and wants to make himself an ubermench, like Inuaysha. Kagome has the expertise (being the only person who is still alive from the initial experiments)--so he wants her mainly for her knowledge. I think the red eyes that him and Kagura sport show that they have both been 'tweaked' as it were. SIGH. So is Kagome going to be taken from Aldury? Will Inuyasha and Sango rescue her? Will Inuyasha and Kagome please...get a nice lovely lemon? Just them...no one else getting in the way? Pretty please? SIGH... OK. Good writing as always...but I'm feeling pretty sorry for Kags and Inu now. Give me a happy ending...please... :-) Begs will puppy dog eyes...
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2009 23:31 EDT
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agh! i knew it was coming and i still wasn't prepared. yeesh kagome. never trust a man that pretty lol. thanks for the update!!
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2009 05:25 EDT
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Loved it. Wonderful. Huzzah! I really like it when I read an Inu/Kag fan fict and I see a slow steady love build up. You did it beautifully and in a way that makes us all beg for more. Thanks it's been an enjoyable read so far.
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2009 21:29 EDT
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I'm still addicted, lurking as usual. I got around to reading it pretty late, but I really can't wait to see what you come up with next. Perfect awww moment at the end there, too. ;p
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Reviewed By: YupMuppy On: April 25, 2009 14:53 EDT
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Intriguing story. It's one of the different stories out there. So... I'm hoping for a fast update so I can read more of your story. Thank you. :)
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