| "Murder My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 217 ] |
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Reviewed By: Crys Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2007 10:18 CDT
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I enjoy every line of your story, it's so awesome. I should check for updates more often and not only once in an while. Still waiting for Hitsugaya-san, but I'm sure it's worth the time ^_^
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Reviewed By: laurie_bunter [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2007 09:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh God that was one HOT kiss :D I loved the way Ichigo slammed her into the car door. Not to mention all the witty, sexy banter -- so yummy. The sexy bits ALMOST made me forget about how brilliant it was, you making Gin a coke-dealing jute-smoking perp and Chad an undercover cop with an eye of detail (for cute rabbits on a scarf LOL) Ahh, such a satisfying chapter. :D I am doing my happy dance right now!
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Title: I GOT AN EMAIL NOTIFICATION!!!
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2007 17:19 CDT
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Holy crap I am the frist to review becasue I GOT EMAIL NOTIFICATION!! Wow, what an interesting and exciting and HOT chapter!! When is Rukia going to stop resisting? I know that the romance is not the main focus of this story... but wow how you write it draws you into the main plot and sub plot with Rukia and Ichigo's chemistry between each other. Good job! Well I can't simply wait for more... and OMG you're adding more to 'Casual Friends'??? I think I'm going to faint. All I can say is thank God for you!! ~gg
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 20:03 CDT
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Wow... great chapter! I thought about you yesterday after watching "The Cubicle" and remembering that your pen name Tituba was the name of the woman that was accused of showing the village girls about witchcraft... well anyways, great chapter as alwasys. You are really keeping us very content with the updates, there isn't anything worthy reading for Bleach IchiRuki right now, and this is very pleasing! Laters!!! gg
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Reviewed By: laurie_bunter [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 05:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Did I forget to tell you that I REALLY liked the last chapter? (Grovelling.) Oh, I hope this makes up for it -- I love this version of flirty, sexy Ichigo, who finally reveals his libido after 6 chapters! I love the way he skims the edge between gentleman and asshole while dealing with a naked, needy Rukia. I love the way he pisses off Renji about it, too! Hilarious. :) Also the bits about Ishida and Inoue made me laugh. They're so kinky!!!! Whee. Anyway, I just have a tiny observation I hope you don't take amiss -- I hope there's a reason between the murders -- I always love a high body count but so many experienced cops getting murdered so carelessly is, uhm, requires lots of suspension of disbelief. Unless their murderer is someone they know and trust -- right? :) It's easy to sneak up on someone if they trust you. That would make everything plausible. :) Hope you don't mind me mentioning this. I don't want to pressure you in ANY way regarding your plot. I trust that you will reveal everything in good time. I LOVE your writing, and this story -- it's unfolding very well. P.S. Oh, and thanks for the thanks too! :) You're a sweetheart.
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Title: (cough)Ahem,(taps the mike)Is this thing on?
Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 22:47 CDT
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Because of life,school,work,housework,homework,exams,term paper to finish,mangas to read,anime's to watch,er,toe-nails to clip,nose to pick,etc. I barely have time reading fanfics...and hell, i sure missed a lot here...uh,one question. what happened to your other fic? you know, C.F..
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Reviewed By: cactuspd [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 23:05 CDT
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what the hell is wrong with MM? can't tap in the latest chaps. i am still in meetings and murders chap. and no matter how much i look for the next installment, that is as far as i get! arghhhh! reading the latest reviews, i can't wait to see the next chaps
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Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 14:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god! I just got back from holiday and saw that fic(I was away from home for 2 months=)) Its fucking brilliant! I loved it how you described the things, it felt like I was watching a CSI epsiode with belach characters in it, damn it. and it has to be related with Aizen and Gin, they have to be bad and stuff; cause Aizen was talking about Gin on the phone and ...Geez I dont know! all I know is you are a brilliant writer and you keep me reading on and on and on!
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Reviewed By: polaris_sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 05:10 CDT
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I agree with gokusgirl this is wicked. I like Ichigo being bad bad boy and tease Renji. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2007 18:57 CDT
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Wicked chapter. I loved how Ichigo toyed with Rukia when she couldn't remember about the night before! And the part with Ichigo talking to Renji over the phone was priceless! But back to the murders... gee I wonder WHO is doing this? But the main question is... who's birthday is next! I guess I'll have to find out in the next installment, laters!
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 18:37 CDT
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Sorry for the late review... I've been totally busy lately and it's getting on my LAST nerve. Loved this installment; and I'm finally gald that the obvious attraction between Rukia and Ichigo is not forced, just barely seen on the surface just to keep us IchRuki fans on the edges of our seat. I still don't see how you manage to pump out all these chapters, they arent' short... but long and very detailed. Lucky you! But you're in a good point in your artistic flow and it's top notch!!! Anyways... when you mentioned "Law and Order" I laughed. I'm a huge fan of that show, and Mike Logan is my man!!! He's so gritty and yet if you got him alone... you could tear his clothes off. Ahem... well, back to the review. Good update, can't wait for more. Laters!
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Reviewed By: cactuspd [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
gah! The intensity and the feelings in the story's just so real. with just words you could make your readers feel so much. your story writing ability is awesome! *bows down* so i'll just be a total fangirl and say, 'write more' and 'update soon'
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Reviewed By: Crys Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2007 11:26 CDT
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I'm not good at pointing out what I like about a story, so I can only say that it really is a great piece of work ^^
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Reviewed By: laurie_bunter [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 07:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Naked cliffhangers are the best :) I'm riveted, as usual. I'm torn between wanting Ichigo to take advantage of Rukia at this point or being a gentleman. Argh. I'll just wait for the next chapter when you're ready ;)
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: bludragon89 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a great writer. I was wondering though...are you going to incorporate any of the characteristics of the Anime/Manga into this story. If not it is still great. Keep up the good work, great story.
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