| "Murder My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 217 ] |
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Reviewed By: IchigoBLEACHcake [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2007 01:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that last chapter "Awake" Really hit me. My sister was in a coma after a car accident. I just remembered how badly me and my family wanted her to wake up. Her doctor told me to talk to her to try and get her to respond. I just remember talking to her for hours about the things we used to do when we were younger. It was really...I don't know really how to describe it...but when she just wouldn't respond when I would talk to her, well you captured that with Ichigo so well. This chapter...wow...it just made me cry. I'm really glad you captured the feelings exactly. Thank You From a still hopeless fan ~Ichi
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Reviewed By: averyrose [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 22:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH! Please update soon! I waited all week for this! Kudos for posting early! YOU MURDER MY HEART! I'm left on the edge of my seat! I check everyday to see if there's any chance that you updated earlier than usual...For a second there, I thought that Rukia was gonna notice the ring on her finger as she caressed Ichigo's hair. Did he remove the ring or leave it on her? AHHHHHHHHHHH! LOVE ICHIRUKI!
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Reviewed By: zenk0ku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 21:28 CST
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WOW. I read the two latest updated chapters at a go and I'm now kinda out of breath. The build-up to the climax where Aizen tried to set fire to Rukia was really, really well-done. And your portrayal of Ichigo in all his different emotions just does it for me (: I absolutely adore the way Ichigo expresses his love for Rukia ! And yes, I also appreciate the way you've fitted in the rest of the Bleach characters, a very nice touch indeed! So as usual, can't wait for the next chapter, it is getting better and better !
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 16:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It just leeps getting better and better!!! I love this so much!He loves her!!!! and she is okay! Can't wait for the next one, put Aizen's ass away!
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Title: oh, ah....
Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 15:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god if Aizen wont try to kill her in the next 36 hours I will die happy! ohhhh that was sooooooo sweet, I mean the ring and the words he said *sighs* its just amazing how you write so simply yet so elegantly and amazingly. thats the real nature of your writing, its undertsandable, clear and flawless=)
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 15:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yayayaayayayayayay!!!!! Aizen's ass is in jail! Ichigo loves Rukia and Rukia loves Ichigo! *cries* I love it! I just love it! Great job!
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 14:31 CST
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Yay! Rukia is okay!!!! I loved the cameos you placed in the fic with the other Bleach characters. And I don't consider this a filler, actually. This chapter is about the most important chapter in here; it gives us relief on wether Rukia survived, Ichigo made his confession that he loved Rukia (even though she was alseep) and We know that Aizen is behind bars. Yay! Great chapter! I hope we're not getting to the end now... It would be good if we got the actual Grand Jury scene, and the court scene were the DA ( I can't write is name, but you know who I'm talking about) makes a huge dramatic opening/closing arugements just they do on Law & Order. Gee... this fic has so many yummy gems! Until next update!
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Title: The sequel to intillegent review 2! The crazy stalker strikes back!
Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2007 14:40 CST
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Ok So I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS CHAPTER! IT WAS SO AWESOME! We got so much love from Ichigo that I was ready to die in my chair. Rukia really broked down in this chapter. And I ABSOLUTELY HATE AIZEN!!!!!!!!!! But... surprisingly he was the one spouting the most romantic lines about Ichigo and Rukia in the whole fic. O.O yes I know he is insane but what he said really made me go 'Awww!' even though Rukia was about to die! Yes the rabid fangirl has come back. AWESOME CHAPTER GIRL! YOU TOTALLY BLEW ME AWAY!
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Title: ::Jaw Sitting on desk::
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 07:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gracious girl! What an incredible, action packed chpater! Aizen is a horrible, crazy person and Ichigo should have choaked him to death!! The descriptions in this chapter (and all the others ones) are so visual; I was on the edge of my seat, bitting my nails down to the damn bones when I was reading this! And how you captured Rukia's fear-- wow. I hope she is okay... there's is no way you can kill one of the main characters in this story! Ugh... well I guess I'll have to find out in the next update, until then have great turkey day!
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Title: oh my god!!
Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 05:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god! this was so...I have no words.I mean Im practically paralyzed right now. The intensity of the chapter was overwhelming and the way you wrote it was completely amazing. I felt every feeling, goosebumps raising, stomach aching with anticipation and rapidly increasing heartbeat...you cant make me wati for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: averyrose [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 02:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was sooo intense! I could feel the pressure on Ichigo! Aizen's character came off just the way I had imagined. No doubt, the next chapter should be wonderful! Thanks soo much and update soon!
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Reviewed By: akirk85029 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 00:45 CST
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OMG!!!! So good, hurry and update again:)
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 22:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ACK!Rukia!!!! Is she going to be okay? this is too intense I need to know what happens! I literally can not wait for the next one. This is LOVE!!!!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! that was AWESOME!!!! now uu left in suspense!!! what's ganna happen to Rukia?! is she going yo be o.k.?!! well PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAP!!! U ROCK!!! P.S. have a happy thanx giving!!
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Reviewed By: Mayatsu-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 20:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*IS ON THE EDGE OF HER SEAT* O_O!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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