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| "Vying for Dominance" Reviews/Comments [ 205 ] | | Pages (14): [ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 › » ] | Reviewed By: R On: November 27, 2018 18:45 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You know, it cracks me up to find myself back to this story so many
years later. I originally began reading Inuyasha fanfics well over
a decade ago and must have read this story somewhere in the mix -
and loved it. It covered all the bases - salty, sweet, perverted -
what was not to love? Plus, the dialogue was exceptional; the plot
felt concise, clear, and unique; and the characters well developed.
I just recently found myself hankering for some good
ol’ throwback fics and I’ll
be damned if this didn’t hit the spot again.
I’m throwing down this review just to let you
know that this little gem from over a decade ago is still gettin
some love ;) It brought back all the original Inuyasha fandom
nostalgia! Thanks for your hard work. Hope life is treating you
well ~
| Reviewed By: inu_gurl91 On: September 17, 2009 21:43 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow!!! that was absolutely lovley!!! if theres more than plz update soon n if not that wuz awesome!!!! shes gonna stay shes gonna stay!!im so happy for him...seshy is so kawaii n letting the inutachi stay in the home was icing on the cake with keeping kagome there. u r amazing!!!
| Title: Feudal Association!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2009 21:01 PDT
Comment/Review:
Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the June 2009 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ This terms' Fiction winners list can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/june2009.html Authors, writers and storytellers please retrieve your awards here: http://s286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/Fiction%20June09 / First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/gallery_lists.html Links to all the awards, past or present, can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/pickup.html Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Inuyashaloverr ~ Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
| Title: Feudal Association!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2009 22:36 PDT
Comment/Review:
This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors/artist, Inuyashaloverr and InuGrrrl, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fan art) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ Inuyashaloverr & InuGrrrl Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2008 14:34 PDT
Comment/Review:
Geeze, where was my head in that last chapter. It did not do the chapter justice. Sesshoumaru was too kewt. He made me thinking of a dog expecting/begging for a treat, nudging and licking, tail wagging, and butting her hand with his head. Such a sweetheart. Gah, she had to go and be such a tease! But it was fun. You had to have worked very hard on that lemon. It shows. I loved the passion. "Not the door!" LOL That was funny. And the desk died a good death. It was so sweet that Kagome's admission that she would say made him release inside of her. He's such a sweetheart. Ah, there was the reminder of a beautiful Bryan Adams song. "And when you see your unborn children in her eyes..." Aw, I loved that part. I rarely think of men as having the capability of having deep emotions, except for anger. I guess there's another side. Anyway, beautiful chapter. ^_^ Snow
| Reviewed By: Arbor Glacialis On: August 06, 2008 05:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is absolutely brilliant, beyond a doubt, the elements perfectly infused together makes for a delightful read. Very descriptive, very fascinating. The story unfolds well but also brings out surprises, I liked how you kept the already known info (to readers--like Inuyasha being Sesshomaru's bro) until the later chapters and manage to bring out the element of surprise. Your characters are also very lively and play meaningful roles in the story. Wonderful creativity! 10! 10! 10! I absolutely loved it. =] Keep writing!
| Reviewed By: pandora-of-the-south [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2008 09:42 PDT
Comment/Review:
Great story!!!! I love the ending!!!! Looking forward to reading more of your work!!!!!
| Reviewed By: MissaD On: August 05, 2008 00:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would like to start out by saying that i have been reading fanfiction for a verrrrryyyyy long time (about 10 years) and i want u to know that u are my favorate author of all time and i am ashamed to that i havent reviewed before this (i am horribly lazy) i have read nearly all of your stories (i have a few more to go) your talent is amazing. i have been moved by to all sorts of emotions while in your thrall (and had an unhelthy amount of cold showers) and for the first time im my life in was indecicive on what i would do if i hunted u down; strangles the ever living life out of you or place a crown apon your head after much deliberation youll be happy to know iv decided on the crown, a horribly gawdy one with giant gem stones (probubly fake because im poor ::shugs::) your depiction of the characters is superb and your ability to draw me onto the plots is unnatural. i hade my bofriend rolling his eyes and me when practily gaping at the computer mumbling "oh she did not just say that!!!" i just sincerly wanted u to know that u have brighted up my days aftar a long day at work with your art (and yes i think of it as art to call it anything else would not be giving it the the joy i fell as im immersed in your world) please keep up the good work i will be paitenly (or not) awaiting you next literary masterpeice.
| Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2008 19:20 PDT
Comment/Review:
wonderful story! and ended perfectly.
| Reviewed By: darkiwi On: August 04, 2008 17:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i loooooooooved this story!!! i been waiting for the end for so long i loved it!!
| Reviewed By: SlightlyMadHatter [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2008 06:38 PDT
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My congratulations on a story well written. Keep up the wonderful work!
| Title: Aww...
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2008 01:28 PDT
Comment/Review:
I'm really sad to see it go, but it has to happen sometime, eh? Great ending to a great story. I really liked Sesshoumaru's idea of having her friends live nearby. And the scene in the vault was great - I loved Puffy! And the "Avoid Jaken" game was so funny! Anyhow, as much as I'll miss it, I know how relieved you must be - as an author, I know how harrowing it can be. So keep up the good work, and Happy Writing!
| Reviewed By: karategal7105 On: August 03, 2008 23:10 PDT
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omg, this has to be the greatest story ever written. i totally loved it and waited forever for teh next chapters to come out, thank you for a wonderful story, ur the best :)
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2008 08:08 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Squeeeeee! Boy, does he have some things up his sleeve. Awesome barriers to his underground world. Indiana Jones, prepare to meet This Sesshoumaru! I can't believe that he has prepared so far in advance. She could make a difference. She could see to it that youkai survive to see her time. The only problem is whether or not she would destroy herself in the process. Perhaps there could be some sort of spell, or barrier, to protect her while the changes are taking place. She could build her family's shrine! The possibilities are endless. It's so much fun watching Sesshoumaru do his best to sway her. Of course, he should have known that his riches wouldn't have. Too bad he can't bring that dragon alive. Kagome needs her own side-kick. Puff the Magic Dragon. So cute! I love your imagination! Maybe Sesshoumaru has seen the future and knows that she belongs with him. Whatever you have in mind is sure to be wonderful. I feel so bad for her indecision and for what Sesshoumaru must be feeling as he tries to convince her to stay. He's done everything he could for her and now the final decision is out of his hands. In a way, it feels as though he is courting her in the way of humans. That is so sweet. The fact that all of her friends will live a better life is so compelling. Please tell me that we get to see them defeat Naraku! I would love to see the the youkai clans unite to fight Naraku. Kouga's cousin (Jamon?) would make a fine addition to the battle. That fiend, Naraku, wouldn't stand a chance in hell. This story is so fun! You deserve all the awards you've won. Please give Kagome her own individual retainer! Sango has Kilala. Sesshoumaru has Ah Uhn and Jakken. Kagome needs someone, too. A big white dog! Or a pack of them, like Kouga's wolves. Or maybe Shaeda (can't remember her name) would be her retainer! That would be too cool. Kagome is already her doll. *tackle glomps and slippery, slimy, doggy kisses* I'm in the land of euphoria with this fic. Seriously. I feel like a cat that just rolled in catnip. Geeze, I'm close to the half a century mark and feel like a kid in a candy store. Anyway, awesome chapters. Thank you for updating so quickly. I'm dancing from foot to foot in anticipation of what Sesshoumaru has in store for next. ^_^ Snow PS, I have a policy of not rating fics and just broke it for you.
| Reviewed By: pandora-of-the-south [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2008 02:12 PDT
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I loved it, though I wonder if Kagome heard what Rin and Sess said there in the end...can I knock some sense into Kagome to make her realize that she does in fact wish to be by his side and no one else...please keep up the good work and update soon please.
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