| "Vying for Dominance" Reviews/Comments [ 205 ] |
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 19:51 PST
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ya!! new chap. aww, she said she loves him. how sweet. hm..i'm guessin' that i need to read the manga to know about how tenseiga protected her before. or was it in ur story? idk, i'm reading so many stories at one time it can get confusing. lol. congratulations on the award. FL
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 01:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This sucks... NO MORE CHAPTERS TO READ!!!!!!!11 (only started to read your story recently) This story is fantastic! Good luck with the next chapter!!!!
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Reviewed By: Angel alex1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 13:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would like to say that i really enjoy this story. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Oh And that I think you are a very good writerr. I never have to wait to long for new chapters and that is soo awesome... Well just wanted to say your Awesome and I can't wait for the next chapter!!! ~Alex~
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 12:08 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I think the ending was perfect. I don't feel wanting because there isn't a lemon. *sigh* It was beautiful.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 07:32 PST
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Oh! I forgot to answer your question. The last scene was great! I loved how Sesshoumaru took off with Kagome. He was all beasty and protectinve. Then there was the bit of tenderness there at the end. The words were a good close to the chapter. Not only did she outperform his expectations, but she also gave him more ammunition to convince everyone that they should accept her. With her story about Sou'unga, she also raised the impression of his strength and power. That comment about Tetsusaiga will help pave the way for Inuyasha's entrance. And, of course, there is the impression that his last words meant even more, that he thought she was perfect for him. It was a very good ending to the chapter. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 07:22 PST
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Chapter 24 was very exciting. I read it several times and still didn't get the whole thing about the swords and Dragon of Light though. The only dragon that I could associate it with was the Dragon Strike that Sesshoumaru uses and Sou'unga's dragon, but even then, I couldn't put it together. Could you explain that in a note in the next chapter? The idea that Kagome's powers would react so strongly was great! I really liked the part with Jomon. That was sweet. Enai was too cute. Sesshoumaru is pretty sneaky. I loved his speech. I think that more came out of that than he was planning. She healed his arm! Yay! The way you have youkai and miko powers interacting is awesome. I know that I've missed details. Tannis and Takked are amusing. I hope Sesshoumaru takes Kagome as his mate. *dances from foot to foot* Can't wait for the lemon! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: February 10, 2008 06:07 PST
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HOLY MOLY!! wow. just wow. thats was amazing. and the ending aww!! it was perfect. The surge of their connection was brilliantly described. Hopefully though the other inus now will understand just how wonderful and great kagome is. I want to see little ones at some point! lol
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 02:30 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it was a beautiful ending. Very fitting. I wonder what the other lords will think after witnessing him flying away with her to an empty cave. I think their secret will be out in the open. ;) Nice to see his arm returned. When that happened in the manga I was so thrilled and happy for his sake. I feel the same now. :D Looking forward to next chapter. Not only because of them lemon, though. ;)
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 23:35 PST
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This was an awesome chapter. There little display was pretty neat. Now the only thing that could happen that could really help throw all them dogs is Inuyasha showing up
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Title: squeefsn
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 21:42 PST
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Ah this latest chapter was wonderful... I just recently starting reading all of this and I love it.
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Reviewed By: B D Gerretson [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 21:31 PST
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hmmm good update. so how do all those other demons react to his demon taking over to keep her and leave with her i wonder? can't wait to find out!
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Reviewed By: KilalaMoonRose [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 19:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always, another great installment. You really are a genius. The only thing is that you spelled "So'unga" wrong. It's really spelled: Sou'unga. Oh well; it was just a minor something. Can't wait 'til your next chapter. Ja mata ne!
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Reviewed By: soliary25 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 14:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Since A Single Spark is down (or is for me, anyhow), I figured I would try here, lol. Great Chapter! I am curious as to see how Sesshoumaru will make this up to her! Update soon, please
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: B D Gerretson [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 13:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE OMG LOL IM LIKE PEEING MY PANTS WAITING FOR IT!!!!
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 10:49 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yeay!!! I finally got to catch up with the last two chapters... and boy howdy they were awsome chapters! The way you describe how Kagome blew up at Aria and Jamon was perfect. Classic Kagome 100%. Of course she blew up at something seemingly pre-maturely, is there any other way for Kagome to blow up? She blew up emotionally in the last chapter, only to blow up physically in this one. (big grin) NICE! LOL... The significance of Sesshoumaru and Kagome displaying "fireworks" isn't lost on me, either. Oh, let's not draw attention to the illicit affair *KABOOM* *giggle* The flashback worked nicely, too, by the way. This story is awsome. I'm enjoying it and will follow it until the end. Ima
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