| "Vying for Dominance" Reviews/Comments [ 205 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuWhisperer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 02:05 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! You never fail to impress me with your writing skills.
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Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2008 21:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please see my review on FF.Net.
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2008 02:47 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now this was an interesting turn of events. :) I wonder what Kagome might say of all this. I'm eagerly awaiting what happens next!
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Reviewed By: soliary25 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 15:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhh, this shoudl be interesting....Inuyasha learnign his place, I mean. Looking foreard to the next chapter, Shadow.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 15:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINALY!!!!!, Sessy comes to a good decision.
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Title: LEMON
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 14:53 PST
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OMG! *breathe, breathe* I had originally skipped the lemon and decided to go back and read it. It is one of the best lemons I have ever read. It was so full of emotion, tenderness, passion. Most of all, it was not typical. The description was not excessive, nor was it lacking. Balanced. It was perfect. Snow
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 14:25 PST
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Squeeeee! You are absolutely killing me!!! That introspective segment had to have been difficult to write. Maybe. *dances on tip toes* He chose to keep her! I have a sneaking suspicion that he plans to keep both of his lives. It is so confusing though! His mind is terribly complex, leaving any number of possible outcomes. I can see so many things happening. I'm wringing my hands over Inuyasha showing up and why Sesshoumaru's imposter wanted Tetsusaiga. For shape-shifting? But then, who and why? Will Kouga show up? To remain the leader, will Sesshoumaru fight with Kagome by his side? Heh, there's another option though. They would be unstoppable, though! Will Inu finally come into his inheritance? Oh! So many questions! I only have one request. Pleeeeeease do not kill off anyone. I may have already begged before, but I'm doing it again. I still have the question about the dragon. Maybe I missed something in the series/manga or earlier in the story. Anywho, this is so exciting! I can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 13:11 PST
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And to think you posted it on Valentines day...great timing, it sure made me smile today. I can't wait to see Kouga's reaction!
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 07:47 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Go Fluffy.. it's your Birthday, Go Fluffy, it's your birthday.... XD :)
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: February 14, 2008 04:51 PST
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go fluffy!! finally he's taking action. stubborn old dog. But a very catching chapter. Incredibly excited for more!
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Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2008 23:36 PST
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Ah he's finally manipulated the situation to his favor... YAY!
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Title: Unbelievable!
Reviewed By: aeternitas812 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 14:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, this is such an unbelievably awesome story! I love sess/kag pairings but I have never read one quite like this! The storyline is so captivating and I just love the humor (the whole Sesshomaru actually having a mother rather than having been chipped off some iceburg comment had me cracking up until my bf looked at me like I was crazy). I love it, keep it up! You're a great writer!
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: February 12, 2008 05:02 PST
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*sigh* that was incredible. I wonder if his beast took over completely if he would just fully mark her....hmmm time to lose control seshy!! we want you to be our test subject mwahaha!! and Kagome you too. naked now i say! mwhaha......^^ But yet another brilliant chapter. So much love felt. I also wonder if kagome is going to walk back to the feast with tensaiga over her shoulder. Now that image would be hilarious! Especially as all the dogs jaws dropped. ahah
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 23:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 Another great chapter!
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Title: Hot Dog
Reviewed By: B D Gerretson [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 22:00 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY I check every day to see when you update and I am so happy you did!! LOL you are so great! (bows) Great great story!!!
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