| "Vying for Dominance" Reviews/Comments [ 205 ] |
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Reviewed By: SlightlyMadHatter [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 21:55 PST
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Absolutely brilliant. I am thoroughly enraptured by it. My compliments to the world and story you have woven. Please continue this wonderfulness.
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Title: Ch 29
Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 21:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Saw the eclipse (gorgeous). Read the chapter (fantastic). I really like this serious introspective/upfront Inuyasha. I think he made the right choice in how to handle meeting the Lords. I'm glad Sesshoumaru and Kagome have come to an agreement about the future. The bit about the Sesshoumaru being turned on by Kagome's powers was amusing and cute. The part about him looking forward to the challenge of building a relationship with her was endearing and inspiring. ... ... I can hardly wait for the upcoming fight. Will we have more Inu Lord POVs re: Inuyasha, now? ... ... ... ... Thanks for writing, Kin.
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 20:59 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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alright inu finally grew up!!! but, its too late to bad so sad for him!! sesshy and kagie!!! love it!! please up date soon!!! ja!
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Reviewed By: TheAlmightyAya-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 20:37 PST
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Noooo! That was way too short! lol. Keep the story coming, I want to read more more more!!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 20:01 PST
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Ach! You leave us in such suspense! Whether he knew it or not, Inuyasha was excellent in his address to the lords. I loved it. Absolutely perfect. I'm sure that Sesshoumaru was expecting such behavior and that it played to his cause. I'm dancing in place and holding my breath! I don't know how Sesshoumaru is going to play this or what his ultimate design is, but this is awesome. Can't wait til the next chapter! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 18:00 PST
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Can't...hold out...need more! :: tackles story and searches for the next part :: Ok, now that that is out of my system. Wonderful chapter and I have fallen in love with Shaeda all over again. Go dragons!
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Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 11:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant new chapter. Much love. I really feel for Shaeda, there. It has -got- to be frustrating dealing with all of those bastards. The Kouga POV is really good. I can hardly wait to read what happens when they all show up at the gathering. Will Inuyasha be 'sat' in public? The reactions would be amusing. ... ... ... ... Thanks for writing, Kin.
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 11:05 PST
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This was an awesome chapter. I hope I can sometime come to the point that you are at in writing with well thought out ideas, describe things so well it's easy to picture and make it absolutely enthralling. I love this story!
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Reviewed By: TheAlmightyAya-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 08:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this fic!!! Please write more soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879NSI On: February 19, 2008 08:28 PST
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wow i think not pissing off Shaeda would be in everyone's interests ya? Like the update a little more filler for our thirst but can't wait to get the ball really rolling again. Inuyasha be civil..ha still can't wait to see the next chapter
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 02:13 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I find myself holding my breath so that Inuyasha doesn't say anything too stupid about Sesshoumaru and their relation. Next chapter is gonna be so interesting. How on earth is this going to work out without war? I'm sure there will be some uprising, but I'm confident that Kagome will effectively put an end to that. :D
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 19:04 PST
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I love Shaeda. Oooh, impressive form! Wow, I hadn't realized just how high her standing with the court was. She seemed more like a spy and comrade for Sesshoumaru than someone who actually held any political clout. Inuyasha sure is being difficult. Then again, he wouldn't be Inuyasha if he weren't! LOL Threatening to bring out Sesshoumaru's dirty laundry was a surprise. It seems that Inuyasha understands more than I had thought. Is that why he so easily gave Tetsusaiga over to her? I feel like I've missed a chapter somewhere. Maybe I did. The extent of his knowledge of mating practices and Sesshoumaru allowing him to save some of the women was very enlightening. It gives me more respect for Inuyasha. I'm glad you brought Kouga into the fray. It will make things feel more familiar and less outside of the realm of manga. I can't wait to see what you have in store for us. And, I still didn't receive a response to the dragon question. I'll go back and look through my emails again. :( Anywho! Can't wait to see what is going to happen next! ^_^ Snow
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Title: *drools*
Reviewed By: B D Gerretson [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 18:54 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I almost fell out of my seat when i saw new chap lol you have no idea how much i love that you update!!! i have read other stories that i fell in love with that the authors just disappeared and never finished so i now stalk you with your wonderful stories!!!
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Title: *puppy eyes*
Reviewed By: B D Gerretson [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 12:56 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When are you updating? I'm waiting with bated breath for the new chapter! I love this story so much!!!
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Reviewed By: Kakashisgurly [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 21:53 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good one. I really enjoyed the way you were able to capture us readers and tie us in to the emotions that Sesshomaru himself is feeling. You really captured his character there and were able to express it with vivid reality of his dilemma. Good job, I can't wait for more
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