| "Vying for Dominance" Reviews/Comments [ 205 ] |
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Reviewed By: TheAlmightyAya-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 22:52 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE! Keep the chapters coming! You write it all so well, the love, the action, everything. its perfect!
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Reviewed By: Cianna27889 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 13:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are doing great! I have enjoyed this fic sssoooo much, and am loking forward to the next chapter with great anticipation! CiAnna
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Reviewed By: TheAlmightyAya-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2008 20:02 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT?! You can't stop there! another chapter soon, please,please,please!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: March 05, 2008 12:37 PST
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The hand to hand was brilliant! Don't doubt yourself, i really enjoyed it. Much more then others hand to hand. It was to the point with drama and flare and i loved it! I can't wait for the next chapter. Till then ^^
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Reviewed By: Little Rini On: March 05, 2008 09:18 PST
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YAY! AN UPDATE! I can't wait to read the fight with InuYasha!
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Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2008 08:55 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ARGHHH CLIFF HANGERRSSsssss *wither*
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2008 02:34 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I was so drawn into the story I was surprised when the chapter ended. Normally, I keep an eye on the scrollbar to see how much is left of the chapter, but I forgot myself this time. It was that exciting! Can't wait to see what happens with the blood crazed Inuyasha. Poor Kuro will be ripped to pieces! XD Go get him, boy!
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Reviewed By: SlightlyMadHatter [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 23:41 PST
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ARG!!! NOOO!!! I WANT MORE!!! I hope you write another chapter soon...I wish to see the end of this fight.
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 20:15 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome fighting scene! Woof! Simply brilliant!
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Reviewed By: Little Rini On: February 28, 2008 19:05 PST
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Update please! The month's almost over. :( Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 04:20 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I missed the eclipse. :( It was scheduled at 4am here, so no way was I awake for that... Anyway, I'm very impressed with Inuyasha's speech. Proves that he's not just an airhead but that he does indeed have a braincell or two. It's gonna be really interesting to read next chapter, even though I'm not particularly fond of reading battle scenes. But I'm sure you'll do awesome, just like everything else you decide to write. ;)
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 15:41 PST
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good luck on the fight! One thing I think about when writing a hand to hand fight, is I envision what is going on and then jot down movements or expressions as my imagination plays on. Then when I have every move I want written down, I write the fight around my notes...It's just an idea, you can ignore me if you really want...but great chapter and can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 11:42 PST
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Once again you present the world... or us loyal readers on MM here with a fantastic chapter. Inuyasha has arrived and the anticipated moment has arrived. how the heck is the poor guy going to react. And... the world is still moving despite the fact that Sesshomaru.. smiled? Yes I believe I saw that in there. Wow! I love your story so much, it moves at such a well balanced pace and I love it I love it. Thank you
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: February 21, 2008 12:32 PST
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Oh i love it! And fluffy's playful, yay! This chapter made my dreary day into a perfect one. I'm so excited for the next chapter! I just know its going to be brilliant. Till then ^^
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 08:09 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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"Im not leaving this place unless she's with me." Oh Crap, Inuyasha... why on earth did you go and say something so difinitive? Isn't that pratically begging a fight to the death? (banging head on keyboard) Don't sweat the hand to hand combat too much. Okay, so you haven't written a scene with it before. . . that's what research is for! LOL... I have faith in you. /Ima
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