| "Vying for Dominance" Reviews/Comments [ 205 ] |
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 05:07 PDT
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great. i loved this chapter. *waiting for more* FL
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: March 11, 2008 04:11 PDT
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Action time! Aahhahaah they all will feel the wrath of the inu brothers!! ahaha
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Title: MY HEART D:
Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 02:46 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story gets my heart all thumping. Like when you watch "300" or the last LOTR movie when its all an epic battle scene and you're mind is all "HOMFG WHAT THE HELL OMG ATTAAAACCCKKK FIIIIIIGHHHHTTTTT UUGHHH" If that makes any sense....I get really pumped up when dramatic things like what happened in this chapter happens. You're soooo-oooo-ooo good at description. D:< I envy it. I'm waiting breathlessly for the next update.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 23:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whee!!!!!!!! dies!!!!! wonderful!!!! yea... kiss did seem long If you forgot that it was a "Layered" chapter.....
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 22:30 PDT
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That was a pretty fast update not that I'm complaining mind you. I'm as excited as can be. It was a fantastic chapter and Inuyasha is finally recognized. Go Yasha! It's kinda funny that note at the bottom of the chapter thinking of this being one heck of a long kiss is what I thought too as I was reading it. I was kinda wowwed by the thought of it, I mean they must have iron lungs or something XD Anyway I loved this chapter. You rock... despite your evil cliff hangers.
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Title: :D
Reviewed By: Niece [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 21:13 PDT
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Oh. My. GOD. I swear, your story is one of THE BEST I have read in a long, long time. UPDATE?! PLEASE?! I'm twitching where I stand in excitement for what is to come :D
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Reviewed By: GETTOGOTH On: March 10, 2008 15:39 PDT
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ive been reading this story from dY 1 N I OTTA TELL U DAMN I LOVE WHERE U'VE TAKEN IT I THOUGHT U WHERE GONN B ONE OF THOES WRITES THAT START STORIES OFF GOOD N THEN N THEM BS STYLE BUT NO NOT U KEEP IT UP N IM HAPPY U UP DATED ON THE 7TH THAT WAZ MI B DAY N I THINK DAT WAZ DA BEST GIFT I GOT LOL NO BUT REALLY KEEP IT UP DNT STOP RITEING N UP DAT SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 09:39 PDT
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Well... I kinda hate you for ending the chapter right there. That's hardly nice. This chapter was a real doozy though, I loved your battle scene and then that last little bomb you dropped. And the inu clan shall go into large fits and it will be a miracle in and of itself if anybody is left alive at the end of it all lol. I'm really looking forward to your next chapter. If at least to find out how mommy is going to react. :D
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 09:32 PDT
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That was kinda sneaky of you... or Sesshomaru. Thinking several steps ahead of the game, I like that. I was expecting Inuyasha to fight it out with Sessho but going against Kuro actually is something I can easily settle with. He's so arrogant that it makes my blood boil to hear/read him speak. I loved this chapter
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Reviewed By: kawaiigirlanime [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 16:56 PST
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love love love your sory. Can't wait for the next chapter. You just had to spop it right there ahhhhhh. How many days have past so far?? Love the story
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Reviewed By: REDWOLF [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 05:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great fight scene! I wish Kagome had not interfered, however, I understand why you had her to . No Sesshoumaru, will kill him for hurting Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 03:32 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, what a touching end scene! Makes me tear-eyed. :D Update soon! I have to know the look on Kouga's face when he hears that! What? I'm evil? O_o
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: March 07, 2008 03:29 PST
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That was breathtaking. That last part had me extremely close to tears. I love it. And wonderful job yet again. It was...beautiful
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Title: Vying for Dominance
Reviewed By: Fairy goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 02:12 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I should of been reviewing the entire time I've been reading your story, you deserve it, forgive me, I couldn't go on any longer without reviewing. Your story is incrediable! I've never read anything like it! It's unique, exciting, romantic, mading it's everything and most of all leaves me wanting more! Your cliffies are a dangerous thing. ^_^ I love all of your original characers and the your version of the real characters. Your story line is incrediable! You are an excellent writer, don't worry about the fight scenes, your doing great! I don't know what to say, I get dissappointed when there is no more and I have to wait for more. This is the most incredialbe, unique story I've read so far.OMG! Every chapter is excellent. Did I tell you I really love your story? I can't wait for the next update! With Love Fairy Goddess
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Title: Nooooo Don't stop there!!
Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 01:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAARRGGGHHHH!!! What a way to make me go crazy!!! You end the chapter there?? Thre cliffhanger is going to kill me!!! Gods woman!! This is way good to just describe it in a few words!! Great job so far!! this story is just getting better and better!! I look forward to your next update, which I really, really hope is going to be soon!!
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