| "Vying for Dominance" Reviews/Comments [ 205 ] |
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 14:41 PDT
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Yay! Of course, we all know that Sesshoumaru would win! However...that doesn't mean that the trials are over. Inuyasha getting sat was unexpected, and perfect. I think he needed to be put in his place. I really felt sorry for Sesshoumaru when he instinctively shared his victory with Kagome and then felt rejected. Poor guy. You portrayed Kagome's feelings exactly how I would imagine, full of joy. I don't believe that I reviewed the last chapter. Kuro is a bastard. Good job. And wow, your ability to project Sesshoumaru as a strategist extra-ordinaire is awesome! All of your battle scenes were wonderful. I hope I haven't missed a chapter, but I'm ready to see Auria beat the crap out of Sesshoumaru's mother. From what I read in previous chapters, I assume that Sesshoumaru has been waiting for Inuyasha to grow up and to set the stage for his introduction. This might be earlier than he planned. However, if this is what Sesshoumaru wanted, someone needs to enlighten Inuyasha. I look forward to a stunned Inuyasha. You know, Enai would be good for him. She's like Kagome. Can't wait to see the fight with Auria! Gah! I'm getting bugged by my daughter, so I can't remember the name, but I love the shadow dragon. Can't wait to see what she's up to! I'm off to run errands. Love the story and anxious for the next chapter! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 13:56 PDT
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aawww...sweet. can't wait for more, as always. ;D FL
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 01:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
apparently the ONLY thing that has gone right for me today it that I have a LONG list of Fantastic fanfiction to read today.... and that it happened at the START of my holidays and not the end.... I am so **** because I just lost all the data for one class at school... thank god it is only the one class.... could get some of the stuff off the teacher....
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 20:16 PDT
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Oh wow. Which was the most difficult part to write? The introspection or the action? You have made this action whore very happy indeed and I do appreciate it. I loved the whole exit scene. Everything about it--the windscar, Kagome's smile--was all good. Oooh, didn't expect mama to show up. What a bitch! She's really mean. Thanks goodness for Auria and Enai. It would have hurt me to write Auria's thoughts, but you did a great job in using it to describe the behavior and appearance of the other characters. Smartly done! You have continued to wind this around the General's vision. I'm wondering how Inuyasha will fit in and why it is that Sesshoumaru asked if he could visit. Aren't they going to be together? Maybe I missed another chapter. That's a good enough excuse to go back and read the story again! Yay! *snicker* Shoot. We don't get any battles with the rogues? Darn. I bet some of those rogues are nice hanyou. Oooh, then there's that guy who used the tainted shard. He's out there somewhere, too. Kagome still has a long way to go to be safe. Okay, I'm on a high and am going to read those two chapters again. I'm sorry if I didn't comment on so much in these past two chapters, like Kuro being a real ass and being surprised by Tannis. Just know that it is all good. I'm going to run back and re-read them, especially that yummy kiss. Heheh. ^_^ Snow
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Title: CHAPTER 32
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 19:35 PDT
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Aaaaaaach! I missed chapter 32! It was absolutely wonderful! Kagome is out in the open! Inuyasha shows his heritage and no one has known of him! This was just too good. I'm dying. Lines are being drawn and Sesshoumaru is as confident as ever! I doubt that anyone with any experience with Inuyasha would have gone up against those three. The dissenters have absolutely no idea how quickly they will be pulverized. Sesshoumaru was smart enough not to show Inuyasha until the boy could defend himself with his sword. I'm squee happy! *jump jump jump* I'm like Inuyasha. It's about time. Let's kick some ass! Woohoo! On to the next chapter! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Little Rini On: March 18, 2008 17:11 PDT
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Please write more soon. Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please
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Reviewed By: TheAlmightyAya-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 18:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!! Keep more chapters coming!!!
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Reviewed By: placidsmile [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 02:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your fic. thanks for updating promptly. i did a straight shot one day of your fan fic, and couldn;t stop reading after that.
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Reviewed By: kawaiigirlanime [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2008 22:01 PDT
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lol and here is me thinking as i read this chapter. dame that is a long kiss. they must really be going at it. lol
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 18:25 PDT
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You handled the time overlap beautifully. I am in awe of your story. (bow)
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Reviewed By: Moonlit_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 11:39 PDT
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OMG!! Not a cliff hanger at the most exciting part!! I've GOT to know what happens next! (and what mama fluffy thinks about all this, lol) Luv all ur stories and this is no different! Can't wait 4 the next chappie!
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 10:37 PDT
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GAH! :: runs around like a chicken with her head cut off :: You left it at a cliff hanger! You evil evil writer! I just have to read more! GAH!
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 07:46 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, yet another cliffy. But as usual, it was a good place to end the chapter, so I don't get too upset. :) Now I just have to wait for the next chapter. It's gonna be so exciting! It's so cool that Sesshoumaru finally acknowledged Inuyasha as his brother. It couldn't have come at a better time! Kuro is gonna get his ass handed to him on a plate. No one insults Sesshoumaru like that and gets away with it. *gets bloodthirsty* Update soon!
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Reviewed By: SlightlyMadHatter [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 06:23 PDT
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Masterful, absolutely masterful. What a wonderful way to reveal Inuyasha's heritage. I can not wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: REDWOLF [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 05:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heck-fire! I thought I'd piss when Sesshoumaru said "draw"! Damn, this is a very well written chapter!
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