| "Vying for Dominance" Reviews/Comments [ 205 ] |
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Reviewed By: kammi On: April 02, 2008 15:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha ok that bit about this originally being a one-shot now makes the beginning make a lot of sense. at first i was really confused that it was purely sex but i'm still really glad that you developed it into a story--only you could have done that. great job and keep up the good work; it is much appreciated :]
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Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 15:38 PDT
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A steamy chapter, indeed. ^_^ I, too, am sad that this is going to be ending soon, but I'm sure you want it done, already. I've felt that way about my stories as well... Good luck getting this next scene out - I wonder what will happen?
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 03:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol... yea...
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 03:04 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*drools* A really hot chapter! This is what I would call a typical Shadow-chapter. :) Steaming hot lemons with a good story to it. A true pleasure to read! I'm sad this story is coming to an end, but I'm also happy you're gonna continue on Sins of the Father. I think I'm gonna go read that one next.
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879NSI On: April 01, 2008 22:19 PDT
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Nah the title never ending story is already taken and not even a quarter as good and captivating as this is. Loved the update there are a few small errors just misplaced words nothing to big just like 2 sentences i think i caught where something was not right ya know one of the sentences u have to read like 3 times and still can't get it anyways loving the update and really dreading the end of the story just because it's so addictive and enjoyable it seems like it's starting to wrap up which is great and all but it's always sad to see a wonderful story end
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2008 04:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, a really beautiful chapter! I really like how you brought to attention that Kagome is no dog, and doesn't like the taste of blood. That would have been creepy and so not-Kagome if you had her go all excited over tasting the blood. And it was so cute how you compared him to Buyo bringing a dead bird to share with his Kagome. XD Can't wait for the next chapter, I think I sense the sweet smell of a lemon approaching.... ;)
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Title: XD
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 10:20 PDT
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Am I the only one that finds it humorous that this started out as a oneshot lemon? LOL Be that as it may, I commend you on this story! Yeah, it has many typos (I suppose you're rushing to get it out to your readers post haste) but that can be forgiven, as long as we not what you meant. Now, for the gushing.... I am like, the biggest SessKag fan - EVER. And I have to say, even though I myself wrote a story where these two fall in love in just a matter of days, it can be difficult to believe. But I feel I managed, and so did you. You did such a great job making this into an actual story with a great plot - that's my weak point, I always feel my plots are lacking - that this has easily become one of my favorites. And usually, I tend to ge a little.... iffy about Mary-Sues, but I found myself looking forward to seeing more of Takked and Enai. Such great characters! Anyhow, I'm sad that this story is almost ended, but it can't go on forever, right? For now, I bid you happy writing! ^_^
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 08:44 PDT
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I find myself really leaning towards Cuddlebum and Dinner. It sounds like such a cute name pair ya know? This was an awesome chapter and funny how Kagome was comparing between Sesshomaru and her cat. Bringing back the prize and sharing, oh yay! I was once brought back a mouse that started to climb up my leg so I can kinda understand where she's going with this. Not all together pleasant. Loved it so much. You rock.
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Title: lulz
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 17:46 PDT
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Oh, indeed, that was hot. I don't have any popsicles, but I do have icecream sandwiches. AFTER the lemon, of course. *winks*
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Title: Who were you kidding?! lol
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 17:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've heard this before. The whole "this was supposed to ba a oneshot but I'm going to keep going for a few more chapters" bit. ;o) It's how I started my Always fic. So far, this is really good! I think Kagome sounds a little braver than she normally would, but that's OK. I like to make her stronger too. I'll be damned if there is anything better than SessKag smut, so this is really good so far. Now, I'm gonna keep reading. Good luck!
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Reviewed By: Cianna27889 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 12:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am sssooo sorry that this is coming to an end, but alas, "All good things must come to an end." This fic has been great! You have really taken the time to explore your subject, think things through carefully, and your descriptions are like free flowing thought and poetry. Looking forward to more from you, CiAnna
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Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 23:59 PDT
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*Delighted squeak* Cuddlebum! HAHA priceless. Seriously. Thats like something you'd hear your 60 year old grammie call her little yorkshire terrier. LOL I love how you make them banter like a couple of people who have been married more than 30 years. It makes my heart happy ^^
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Reviewed By: omgitsmomo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 23:05 PDT
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I love you and I love this story. I hope this isn't the end! I couldn't stop reading it! I just found it today! I just needed to get to the most recent chapter! You're a brilliant writer! You should think about writing your own story! This seems much better then the actual anime/manga itself! You have an amazing talent! :) You better update, haha!
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Reviewed By: B D Gerretson [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 19:27 PDT
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absolutely beautiful!!
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Reviewed By: RediHebi On: March 25, 2008 18:50 PDT
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omg great chapter!! i love Enai's comment to kagome!! priceless! update soon!
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