| "Vying for Dominance" Reviews/Comments [ 205 ] |
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Reviewed By: SlightlyMadHatter [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2008 06:38 PDT
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My congratulations on a story well written. Keep up the wonderful work!
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Title: Aww...
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2008 01:28 PDT
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I'm really sad to see it go, but it has to happen sometime, eh? Great ending to a great story. I really liked Sesshoumaru's idea of having her friends live nearby. And the scene in the vault was great - I loved Puffy! And the "Avoid Jaken" game was so funny! Anyhow, as much as I'll miss it, I know how relieved you must be - as an author, I know how harrowing it can be. So keep up the good work, and Happy Writing!
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Reviewed By: karategal7105 On: August 03, 2008 23:10 PDT
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omg, this has to be the greatest story ever written. i totally loved it and waited forever for teh next chapters to come out, thank you for a wonderful story, ur the best :)
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2008 08:08 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Squeeeeee! Boy, does he have some things up his sleeve. Awesome barriers to his underground world. Indiana Jones, prepare to meet This Sesshoumaru! I can't believe that he has prepared so far in advance. She could make a difference. She could see to it that youkai survive to see her time. The only problem is whether or not she would destroy herself in the process. Perhaps there could be some sort of spell, or barrier, to protect her while the changes are taking place. She could build her family's shrine! The possibilities are endless. It's so much fun watching Sesshoumaru do his best to sway her. Of course, he should have known that his riches wouldn't have. Too bad he can't bring that dragon alive. Kagome needs her own side-kick. Puff the Magic Dragon. So cute! I love your imagination! Maybe Sesshoumaru has seen the future and knows that she belongs with him. Whatever you have in mind is sure to be wonderful. I feel so bad for her indecision and for what Sesshoumaru must be feeling as he tries to convince her to stay. He's done everything he could for her and now the final decision is out of his hands. In a way, it feels as though he is courting her in the way of humans. That is so sweet. The fact that all of her friends will live a better life is so compelling. Please tell me that we get to see them defeat Naraku! I would love to see the the youkai clans unite to fight Naraku. Kouga's cousin (Jamon?) would make a fine addition to the battle. That fiend, Naraku, wouldn't stand a chance in hell. This story is so fun! You deserve all the awards you've won. Please give Kagome her own individual retainer! Sango has Kilala. Sesshoumaru has Ah Uhn and Jakken. Kagome needs someone, too. A big white dog! Or a pack of them, like Kouga's wolves. Or maybe Shaeda (can't remember her name) would be her retainer! That would be too cool. Kagome is already her doll. *tackle glomps and slippery, slimy, doggy kisses* I'm in the land of euphoria with this fic. Seriously. I feel like a cat that just rolled in catnip. Geeze, I'm close to the half a century mark and feel like a kid in a candy store. Anyway, awesome chapters. Thank you for updating so quickly. I'm dancing from foot to foot in anticipation of what Sesshoumaru has in store for next. ^_^ Snow PS, I have a policy of not rating fics and just broke it for you.
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Reviewed By: pandora-of-the-south [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2008 02:12 PDT
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I loved it, though I wonder if Kagome heard what Rin and Sess said there in the end...can I knock some sense into Kagome to make her realize that she does in fact wish to be by his side and no one else...please keep up the good work and update soon please.
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Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 06:13 PDT
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Thank you so much for the fast update!! This story is developing so nicely! I love how the emotions of each character have begun to play such an important part, making this one of my favorite stories!! Thank you again for the unexpected update!! I look forward to the next one!! Hugs: Midcat.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 23:54 PDT
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Nice chapter. You've had me on pins and needles, wondering what Kagome's decision will be. I don't know when the last time was that I reviewed this fic, but I want to tell you that I loved the end of the battle scene, especially where Inuyasha says something to the effect, "One exit, coming up." That was great. And then there was the 'Ew' attitude from Inuyasha when Sesshoumaru and Kagome were all goo-goo at each other in the ring. All of your original characters are wonderfully portrayed. You make them real. I love this story. It's original, angsty, suspenseful and exciting. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: barelybreathing On: June 19, 2008 19:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LIKE THIS FIC IT IS IN ITS OWN LEAGUE, I HAVE NEVER READ ANOTHER FIC LIKE IT. aND I WOULD APPRECIATE IT IF YOU WOULD UPDATE SOON. THANK YOU.
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Reviewed By: pandora-of-the-south [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 11:16 PDT
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Another great chapter!!! Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 20:54 PDT
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I think you did a rathe rgood job with this one! I'm eager to see how it plays out. Sesshoumaru is so great in your story... you manage to make him so... him, and yet, he's different with Kagome. You've done an awesome job. I know what you mean about getting back to the story... I've been horrible with my own updates. So don't worry - we'll still be here. ^_^
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2008 04:33 PDT
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aww...how sweet. well, when it comes to fanfics and "obvious" endings, i try not to take anything for granted. there was one fic i was reading that was a x-over and absolutely everything went wrong with kagome. if you thought that she was going to make it...she didn't. if you thought that she was going to avoid being drugged...she didn't. so i've learned that anything can happen in a fanfic, despite all my wishes. :D FL
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Reviewed By: RediHebi On: May 14, 2008 08:57 PDT
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Awsome as always pleeeeassssssssssseeeee update soon!!! i love this story your an incredible writer!!!
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Reviewed By: omgitsmomo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2008 22:23 PDT
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I love this chapter! updatee, I can't wait to read more. ^^
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: April 02, 2008 19:19 PDT
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Bravo! I don't care how long it takes you, this piece is brilliant. It is one of the most creative and astonishing stories i have read. Completely ecstatic for the next chapter. Till then!
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 15:42 PDT
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indeed, no complaints over it being long. can't imagine it any other way now.:) brightens my day to see the "vying for dominance" is updated in my mailbox.
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