| "Dancing with Scissors" Reviews/Comments [ 256 ] |
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Reviewed By: aura9969 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 13:59 PDT
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I admit that the fact that this takes place outside of Japan bothered me for a while, but the plot and the way it was written had me coming back for more. There were some grammar errors and tense problems, but don't mind me much; I'm somewhat of a grammar nazi.
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2009 13:22 PDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the September 2008 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by artist/author, Inuyashloverr and author, KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Links to all of the awards for 2009 can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/pickup.html First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/2009art.html Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Please pick up your award here: http://s286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/Fiction_March09/ ~ Inuyashloverr & KnittingKnots Owners of the Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: GhostReader [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2009 15:55 PDT
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THIS STORY IS AWSOME!!!! I love it love it love it! It's so hard to find a fanfic that keeps my attention, and this story has such a great plot, that it's hard to stop reading. Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: maryaxe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2009 10:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really love this story. The plot is not at ala rushed and the characters are very well developed. I can't wait until the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2009 00:59 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i LOVED this! please keep writing and update soon! this chapter made me cry...and it made me laugh and well point is it made me feel a lot of different emotions...only ood writers can make me cry. so just to let you know you re an AMAZING writer. i look forward to your updates and i cant wait until sess and kags will finally get together.
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: just me not logged in On: March 26, 2009 20:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story so much! the characterization is refreshing. i can't get over kagome's potty mouth...the doctor's visit alone had me nearly peeing my pants. and her sick-person's booty call was great. i can't wait to see what you have in store for these guys. the sexual tension has to break soon.
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Reviewed By: yashkags4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2009 10:44 PDT
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Great chapter! I loved it how Kagome was bein so bossy to sesshy. i can relate. Im so sad tho that i read the chapter so fast and its over. Update again soon. I'm looking forward to how kags and sesshy's relationship will keep growing.
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Reviewed By: luvininu28 On: March 26, 2009 06:37 PDT
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I'm elated at the new chapter and yet I'm always surprised at how sad I am that I've read it all too quickly. I know that this will be one of those stories that I will read over and over again until you or media miner pulls it off of here. Either way, you've definitely got a fan forever. Update when you can. I'll be waiting and imagining all the "positions" those two can get themselves in!!!*o* ha ha
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2009 20:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd want to dress him up for the zombie walk and Halloween too... think Kagome could get him to go to an Anime/Manga-fest??? oh I didn't understand what you ment by defenestrated, cause I looked it up and wikipedia has it as "the act of throwing someone or something out of a window." and you had some very kool lines in here too. "Nonsense." He crossed the room and put a hand to her forehead, relieved that, though she still felt warm, the angry, immediate heat had dissipated and her color had become closer to normal. "How do you feel this morning?" Kagome made the conscious choice not to be irritated by his hovering protectiveness and instead allowed herself to close her eyes and lean against him, enjoying his strength and warmth. "Like I have been defenestrated-which is a step up from yesterday when I felt like I got thrown out a window…then beaten with a stick. I just want to be vertical for a few minutes." Sesshoumaru held back an indulgent laugh; Rin's courteous words did not match her sour expression and tone of voice. "That's all I could find." Kagome got up, went to the refrigerator, and took out a jam jar. She heaped piles of it on Rin's toast, just as she knew her niece liked. Then she tousled Sesshoumaur's hair before returning to her seat. "It's okay. Male Refrigerator Blindness is nothing to be ashamed of." Sesshoumaru's serious façade was almost cracked. "What's that?" Rin asked between bites. "When a man loses the ability to visually recognize objects in a refrigerator. Closely related to Male Reluctance to Load the Dishwasher," she said, indicating the sink full of dishes, "Male Fear of Touching the Vacuum, and Male Inability to Ask for Directions." "Very funny," he said sarcastically. "Is it like Female Funhouse Mirror Syndrome? Or perhaps Female Need to Interrupt Comfortable Silence?"
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2009 20:30 PDT
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Fantastical! But again with the lateness... So he's realised he's in love... But he has to go away for a few weeks... So will he take Sango's advice and wait to make a move, or will he jump the wait and mess things up a little befor making them right? I have a feeling, I know the answer... But only time will tell... Just don't take so long!
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 14:06 PDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors/artist, Inuyashaloverr and KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ Inuyashaloverr & KnittingKnots Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2009 18:28 PDT
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Ya know, I don't mind telling you that you make me happy... I'm not sure on the number of variations, but pretty much every way you can say I love this story, times two... That's how much I love this story...
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Reviewed By: kjpanny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2009 10:33 PST
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LOVE IT! But please hurry and update quickly
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty on old computer On: March 05, 2009 20:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FANTASTIC CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!! I want Sesshy to look after me when I am sick too... I love what language come out of Kagomes mouth. Fantastic Fantastic Fantastic!!!
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Title: Sensationally Hilarious!!!
Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2009 13:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww! This chapter was hilriously cute and endearing... *sigh* I really enjoy the way Kagome's character is portrayed in this fic. She's not the innocent that everyone and their mama portray her as. But she's not a bad girl either... she has a certain... edge about her that makes her a sexy yet dangerous femme-fatale. And it funny! And the way Sesshoumaru and Rin interact with her and with each other only builds the character that is their own... I truly love it! ^_^ I hope that we can all see an update in the immediate future. I know that real life can get in the way sometimes and prevent us from escaping our secret world of anime fantasies ^_^. Your faithful reader, Tusuke Kounami
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