| "Dancing with Scissors" Reviews/Comments [ 256 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2008 00:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WONDERFUL!!!!! "Back when we were freshmen, Kagome and Kikyou joked that they were the President and CEO of the Itty Bitty Titty Committee. She never saw her chest size as a negative quality, but suddenly it was, bringing up a lot of insecurities about her sexuality from the trial. She decided that dating wasn't worth the fuss and potential heart ache, so she swore off men forever and began amassing her very impressive dildo collection." If Kagome ever finds out about this, she thought, I'll need to enroll in the witness protection program. Congratulationgs go to Sango for best lines.... My family has a tendency to indulge in unhealthy levels of silence, melodrama, and guilt. She hugged him quickly, trying to avoid awkwardness; they had developed an easy rhythm with each other, and she hated to see it go. He thanked her for the lovely evening and exited, leaving her to contemplate how much simpler it is to be close friends with a gorgeous man when he is married to your sister.
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Reviewed By: Lizzie Welling [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2008 22:40 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter! That shower scene was hilarious--exactly how I would react if that happened to me. Great work; I really hope to see more progression in Kagome and Sesshomaru's relationship.
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2008 21:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nyaa! Love the cliffy. Can't wait for more!
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Title: Loved it!!!!
Reviewed By: inu_luver_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2008 19:46 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say- I loved it!! It was another reat chapter- thank you!!
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Reviewed By: luvininu27 On: December 10, 2008 12:37 PST
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I swear if I could do a backflip, I would have when I saw you updated your story. I loved this chapter and let's face it where your writing is concerned don't ever apologize for it being too lengthy. I love that song and the movie Tortilla Soup for that matter. I thought that the moments with the Taisho's were lovely and the fact that they've embraced Kagome so fully and thanked her for bringing happiness back into their lives. On another note the chemistry between Kagome and Sesshomaru is staggering and his thoughts about her are smoulderingly hot. *Touches Sesshy's mind and gets burned* I ache for more. Update when you can. It's really wonderful all around.
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Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2008 11:07 PST
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oh-yeah! REVIEW 100!! (and 101 including this one! ^__< )
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Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2008 11:06 PST
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omigosh this is one of my most favorite chapters!! i love how sesshoumaru's like: "I'll be frank, she's hot and i want to bang her. Tell me why she's scared of men." (this is my translation of that entire paragraph.) haha Senor Taisho and senora taisho are so right - Kagome is talented! I wish i could do those things (*envious*) Kagome snooping around Sess's desk was hilarious and very in character (in the anime/manga i think she's really nosy) but it was cute when Kagome said "But where does he keep his porn?" I love Kagome's character, a woman who's assertive, smart, sexy, and funny. She might be scared of her own reactions to rejection, but her willingness to delve into the unknown is commendable (what the hell am i saying?) OH YEAH! I love that she's not self-pitying and crap (like sobbing and crying and moping and general overplayed angst.) I love angst but sometimes it can be overdone. Your angst slips in at unexpected times (like when Kagome was searching through Sess's desk and found a pic of rin and the newspaper clipping detailing Kikyo and Inuyasha's deaths.) Kagome taking a shower in Sess's shower was like a disaster waiting to happen (for her.) When i read that i was like, "he's coming home earlier." He caught her in the shower and she just screams about how he scared her... YOU LEFT IT AT A CLIFFIE!! (if i write in all caps, does this count as a flame - because that's not my intention, i'm just excited and hungry...) I cant wait for the next chapitre!! sayounara!!! (wow what pointless review...I honestly cannot do constructive criticism because my writing skillz are cringe worthy. I am struggling in composition class. So, please be satisfied with the plethora of exciting compliments!! ^__^)
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2008 10:36 PST
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ROFLMAO! I can't say that I feel sorry for Kagome at all. Man, did Sess get some eye-candy. At least, now she knows that he finds her attractive--itty, bitty titties and all. LOL Uh oh. I sure hope Sango doesn't get herself into trouble, but she did give some good advice. I just can't see Sesshoumaru abiding by it. I'm still nervous about what would happen if she was outted for being the writer of that sex advice column. I don't think Sesshoumaru would mind, but the parents? Dunno. Their social group would definitely use it against Kagome. It's nice that you have Sesshoumaru easily taking a role in Rin's life....Okay, this is probably a stupid question. I'm assuming that the Taisho's are not youkai. Would you confirm that for me? Anywho, great chappie! There appears to be significant plot progression. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2008 10:19 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooohhh! You are such a tease! For having such a healthly view on sex, she kinda flew off the handle, didn't she? That was too funny. I would imagine she would have quite a few questions for him later. I wonder how that conversation will go. Thanks so much for the wonderful update. I hope we get another soon.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2008 21:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*long and load squeal* great letter! wonderful Uncle-Niece bonding. Great Kagome & Sesshoumaru bonding... waiting and waiting... Sesshoumaru finally admits(even if it is just to him self) that he likes Kagome!!!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2008 19:43 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very wonerful, as per your usual. I really like the filabuster bit. It is an extremely accurate way to discribe children and bed time. My nephew Jesse is very guilty of this. I can't wait to see what Sesshoumaru's wonderful, awful idea is. :sinster snicker: That should be entertaining. I still can't wait for him to find out who Scarlet is. I think that will seal the deal for him. Thanks for a lovely new chapter.
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Title: cool!
Reviewed By: bloody On: November 19, 2008 17:56 PST
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yay! u updated! im soo happy. that was a really cool video/flashback idea. i gtg but update soon and i promise to write a longer review next time. laters!
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Title: cool!
Reviewed By: bloody On: November 19, 2008 17:56 PST
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yay! u updated! im soo happy. that was a really cool video/flashback idea. i gtg but update soon and i promise to write a longer review next time. laters!
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Title: ...so...
Reviewed By: Little Red On: November 16, 2008 13:22 PST
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I usually try to write something informative, tell you about something you could improve on, something that needs to be fixed, that you used a word to many times in a row... But honestly, I've got nothing. You're a fantastic writter, it makes me happy to read your story. I love the way you think, the way you have Kagome speak. I love your attention to detail. Your portral of Inu Yasha, even Kikyo, and thats saying alot, because I'm a dedicated Kikyo hater. I hope you update soon. Impatiently waiting, your not so silent fan, ~Little Red~
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Reviewed By: LAaLA On: November 16, 2008 02:46 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe. i think seshy should ask Scarlet about his problems with Kagome. wouldnt that be great?
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