| "Dancing with Scissors" Reviews/Comments [ 256 ] |
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2008 08:59 PST
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I'm finding that I'm learning more from your stories than my immunology book. Acquired immunity was unfortunately the only term I recognized...that admission speaks volumes I suppose...in any case, your story is mad interesting! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Kristen_the_magnificent On: November 14, 2008 19:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no, i'm not just being generous with the rating... i absolutely adore this fic; and please, never, ever, ever apologize for long chapters =]. ever. -thank you, kristen
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Reviewed By: Annonymous On: November 14, 2008 17:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love, I ADORE your writing style. You are so creative and witty, I just can't get enough of this story. Oh, and trust me, nobody MINDS at all the length of your chapters. A matter of fact, it's kind of sad that most authors don't really have the ability to make it as long. Anyways, I'm off topic. Your writing is spectacular, and the way you portray each character so distinctly is amazing. I truly hope that you plan to do writing as a career, because I smell a calling. =P
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Reviewed By: Sweet_Adeline [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2008 16:13 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter. Wicked funny how you mentioned Cheech & Chong. I almost died laughing. You need to write Inuyasha & Kagome stoned more, its hilarious. and p.s. i love extra long chapters.
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2008 10:23 PST
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no1's going to complain about extra long chapters =P can't wait for the next one! oh man kagome and inuyasha stoned soo hilarious!
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2008 09:46 PST
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You just write as much as you want - if it is flowing, let it flow. Just lovely hints of the past. Such fun. Can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2008 09:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter...(yawn... night night for me...or some ungodly time of the morning, due to work...) Kagome didn't even mention how recent that kiss was...
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2008 08:52 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"The Man in Black? You're not worthy."...Best line I've ever heard. I feel like I (or a very close friend of mine) has written this story, what with all the obscure references that only a handful of people would know. I love it so much. I also love the long chapters. Don't worry about that. It's nice to sit down and read, not having to worry that it's not going to get anywhere in the story. It does seem that Kagome is getting better and better about the death of Inuyasha and Kikyo. Rin also seems to be doing good now that she has Sesshoumaru. He is really good for her. She will still need a strong male influence in the years to come. I'm glad the misunderstanding with Kouga was cleared up before anything could come of it. Thanks for the chapter! P.S. I thought you might find this funny. I once worked for a Harley dealership and there was a man there that did custom work on the bikes. His name is Jimmy. His voice sounded so familar though, and I struggled for weeks trying to figure it out. One day we were taking a smoke break in the back and it hit me. He sounds exactly like Tommy Chong. I busted out laughing before I could even tell him what I had figured out. It took a good five minutes to get myself under control. From that day foward, his name was no longer Jimmy. I called him Tommy, and still do to this day when I return there to shop.
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Title: REDWOLF
Reviewed By: REDWOLF [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2008 08:51 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like Kagome like this, she is more natural and Sesshoumaru seems less formal around here because she really doesn't give a shit!
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2008 20:36 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Aww he likes her! I like how this story is developing and they aren't just rushing into things.
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Reviewed By: darkangel_riku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2008 15:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First I would like to say, amazing story!! You are an amazing writer...this story has hit me at home bc I just recently lost my Daddy and its been veeery hard and reading this...idk how you do it but its amazing how you wrote this story so far and ima attached, pleeease update soon I can't wait to read what happens next...and even though im not normally into the vulgarity and the topics you have me captivated anyway and that is saying something bc ima very picky reader...continue writing ur amazing!
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Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2008 06:35 PST
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hehehe i had to review again cuz i read the entire fic again just so that i could read it in its entirety. I've recommended this fic to virtually all my inuyasha fanfic reading friends who are into het - it's that good. I feel that Sesshoumaru and Kagome's interactions are gradual and natural. But i had to step back and realize that they are indirectly related... >o< but i still love the fic. Inuyasha being not angsty enough killed me. I just want to see a picture of emo inu so bad (wonder if it's on deviantart...) oh! and do you mind if i make a club for your fic on devart because i want to post pics based on your fic... >o< i always try to do concrit...but i cant seem to criticize anything (cuz i write horribly to begin with...) overall, i'm a huge fan (*cringe* im a fangirl of fandoms.....)
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 14:16 PST
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I couldn't wait for Dokuga anymore - I'm so glad I came over here to look - wonderful chapter - wonderful story, looking forward to more wonderful words.
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Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2008 06:31 PST
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Yet another WONDERFUL chapter!!! I finally realize Kagome's no dating policy (and i think it's a good reason too) I half expected it to be Hojo's fault... >< very cliche yeah i know, but a girl can wonder. Omg the attraction is there!!!! I loved scarlet's responses because her advice (in my opinion is good.) I love the way your characters interact with each other and i cant help but stay glued to the screen for more. I have a question though - Isnt Kagome japanese? So wouldnt she already know? Wouldnt rin already know (and inuyasha?) just curious.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 09:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! More Scarlett Letter'd! I love the ATM part. I half expected you to make a reference to Clerks II. "You never go ass to mouth!" lol! If you haven't seen that movie, I highly reccomend it. I love the picnic in the park bit. And I like getting to know a little more about Kagome's past. I'm glad Sesshoumaru realizes that she's not going to go for his usual tricks. He's not going to be able to just sleep with her. They are way too connected through Rin for that. It's going to have to be an honest try for a relationship. :sigh: Thanks for the new chapter. I really needed and enjoyed it. By the way, congrats on the noms.
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