| "Dancing with Scissors" Reviews/Comments [ 256 ] |
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: nicluv1787 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2009 22:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I seriously cant remember the last time I read a fanfiction that was so thouroughly addictive. All I have to say is wow, your characters are so real, I want to get to know them and they all seem like real people its amazingly realistic. I've laughed I've cried, just simply amazing I cant think of a better way to describe this story. So orignal and enticing. I'm sorry I'm gushing great, great, great story i hope you continue, thank you for sharing your talent for words with the world.
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Title: One of a Kind
Reviewed By: innocencedied2nite [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2009 17:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have spent the last two days reading this story, in fact, I was up until 4am reading last night. It is very rare for me to find a story warranting a review, as most are good, but not near this level of writing. You have an amazing gift. I'm a hard core fanfict reader, and an even harder core shipper of Kag and Sess. One of the draw backs I find in some of the ones I have read, or started to read, is that the characters lack individuality, falling into the same rut. Your's, however, are by far the exception. Kagome, while brass and rough at first, has greatly warmed my heart. You show her to be real, and human, not an easy task when working with characters who are not our own. You have made all your characters your own, believable and so human. I love the light you cast on Rin and on Sess. It is great to see a story develop slowly, much like House of the Moon did. I am really looking forward to where you decide to lead them, and us as your reader. Kudos on a very very well done written work.
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Title: A true masterpiece!!
Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2009 11:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG!! Too bad the ratings don't go above 10!! This is the first time in all the years I have of reading fanfiction that I felt a mere 10 was not enough to describe how utterly original, how creative, how well done this story is!! Once I began, I couldn't put it down, it became an addiction so strong I felt silly for deciding that sleep could wait for another 12 or so hours, but the next chapter could not! *** +++ *** ... I have to praise how original it is to approach sex in a fanfiction (mind you, not only just any fanfiction, but IY none the less!) in the way you have done it!! It is so refreshing and absolutely sinful how much I have delighted myself reading this story!! ... *** +++ *** .. I must also tell you of the Oh, so many times during the night that I woke up my beloved next to me by just laughing none stop!! Your wittiness and sense of humor are on a class of your own, and I can honestly say that I have nothing to compare them to in anything I have previously read and this is one of the reasons why you have jumped to the top of my list!! This story has been a welcome reprieve from everything else I have read and I for once have grown to appreciate and cherish it with a rabid desire to read it over and over again!! The characterization is so in tune it is just mind blowing how well you manage to blend each and every one with each other!! My mind is reeling with joy at this moment!! I guess all I can say is that I can hardly wait, and seriously, be counting the days hours and minutes until I see the next installment of this jewel!! Please!!Oh please!!! Goddess of all that's unique and talented in writing; gift us soon with a new chapter!!! I will be here, awaiting in the shadows until the light that your story shines upon the heart can be seen again!! ... *** ++ *** ... Best wishes and my complete devotion: Midnight Cat.
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Reviewed By: On: June 11, 2009 19:45 PDT
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I don't review your story near enough. Sadly I think the actual times I've hit the 'submit' button for you is once. However, I absolutely love your writing. You may be a little slow at updating but I understand that genius takes time. Your spelling, grammar, word choice and writing style are all wonderful. I hate it when nice plot lines are ruined by amateurish writing skills. I can't wait to find out what happens in the next chapter. It seems to me as if things are finally going to start heating up, no?
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Title: eep!
Reviewed By: just another me On: May 31, 2009 20:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love love love this story! the idea is pretty unique, and the way the characters interact is great (even though you don't see alot of him, jak is a great character). using home movies to show sesshomaru and the reader flashbacks is a really creative plot device. it breaks up what could be a lengthy monologue of kagome explaining her life before the accident. i can't wait to see how the budding romance unfolds. you've built up an incredible amount of tension that will hopefully ignite in fireworks! i feel like bribing you with cookies or brownies or something for every chapter! (if this works, i'll do it...)
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Reviewed By: simple-memories [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2009 15:03 PDT
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Absolutely stunning! If you were to change the names, your characters would stand on their own, as in, this could be a published piece. AMAZING TALENT!!! Thoroughly enjoyable read! Can't wait for the rest!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2009 17:26 PDT
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What an exciting chapter! First a family type scene and then the cat is out of the bag and Sesshoumaru goes into full predator mode. Plus, he decides that he has more feelings for her than he had first surmised. I'm so excited! I hope we get to see him stalk her, or try to impress her. This is gonna be awesome. I can feel it in my bones. ^_^ Thanks for writing and posting! Snow
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Reviewed By: Inuyashalover829 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2009 15:57 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK first i have to say OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!! this fic is like the best one EVER orignial but based on Inuyasha and then the little tie-ins you put in from the anime is brilliant. OHHHHHHHHH PLEASE please please update on the next chapter soon, when r u going to have Kagome and Sess together?Im so anxouis. Im gonna say it again most brilliant fanfiction i have ever read thank u parents for making you.
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Reviewed By: fluffydemongirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2009 11:32 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
almost to good to be true!!! sesshy figured it out yeah!! i love it and please update soon. by the way for your information you have a new devoted fan. yeah for you!!!
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2009 15:59 PDT
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Fantastical! I'm so happy that you updated... I've waiting for so long! It was great, as usual... And we're finally getting to the good part! I've been agonizing, pining for the moment that Sesshoumaru realized Kagome was Scarlet... And again I must exclaim, Fantastical! Just don't make us wait so long next time...
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Reviewed By: luvininu28 On: May 22, 2009 06:33 PDT
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OMG!!!! That was amazing!!! I saw your update and did a happy little fist pump in the air!!! You had me from "How's my girl?" well you had me before that but I knew I would love it once I got to that quote. Awesome! I loved the reveal of "Scarlet"!!! Better than what I had imagined for them. I can't wait for the next chappie. Thanks sooo much!!!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2009 22:48 PDT
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he figured it out! oooo it's gonna get even more interesting
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Reviewed By: KayAkuma [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2009 20:34 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay you didn't die!!! Love the new chapter... I did a happy dance when I got the e-mail saying there was a new one posted. I'm ready for some Kag/Sessh ACTION now yeah!!!
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Title: just wanted to let u know u r currently one of my favorite people lawlz!
Reviewed By: sockenobsessive [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2009 18:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really love this story, it's one of the few things that can turn a 'F*** my life' day into, a 'WOOT! all my dreams!' day. so... yeah thx 4 taking the time to write this story :)
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Reviewed By: Lynzi18 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2009 17:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.. I loved this chapter:D:D I love this story... I can't wait to read more.. Keep up the great awesome work:D:D:D
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