| "Dancing with Scissors" Reviews/Comments [ 256 ] |
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Reviewed By: Florence On: August 07, 2008 12:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story you've written is amazing. It doesn't use sex as its only driving point, but the characters you developed are so real that it makes the readers care about them. I hope you continue writing this story and upload soon because I really enjoy reading it!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 23:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A GREAT chapter!
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Reviewed By: starlit333 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 20:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another amazing chapter. Which is, of course, no surprise when it comes to this brilliant author. I can finally see how Sesshomaru and Kagome are connecting. Before, I thought about how you were going to do it, but it's slowly going to come together, I believe. I love Rin's character in this story. She acts so mature for her age in some aspects but in others you can tell she's still just a child in the fact that she still gets dirty and plays around and acts so innocent unyet not about her parents' premature death. I liked Kagome's reaction to Sesshomaru's BMW, a lot of car talk, but somehow it fit the character of Kagome in this story. I can't wait to see the ice melt from Sesshomaru's parents, but even more from Sesshomaru. Something, I believe, we are already seeing. Please update soon! Your stories are so well-written!
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Reviewed By: starlit333 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 00:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So this story id freakishly amazing. You have accomplished what few authors try to, and when they do, they fail: make the reader love Kikyou and Inuyasha together. This is the first fanfic where I truly liked Kikyou and felt this blanket of depression cover me as I read about her death. Bravo! Second, you made the readers at least have this very strong and bitter taste towards Sesshomaru's father, something that is practically unheard of. I thoroughly have enjoyed this story so far. The way you portray Kagome's character is hilarious, and I absolutely love Scarlet Letter'd! It makes me wonder if Sesshomaru is going to use his sources to find out who the writer of the Scarlet Letter'd is. Or will he have too much pride to ask somebody about the articles, thus showing that he reads them himself... Hm... I guess I will just have to wait and see when you update!
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 15:29 PDT
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I think that your characterization of Kagome is unique, witty, and intriguing.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2008 21:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I learnt so much about commas... great chapter (again)...
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2008 09:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter. The Scarlet Letter'd scenes crack me up horribly. You made me snort, as a matter of fact. That hardly ever happens and I hate when it does. Although, it bodes well for you, because it means that something was so funny, I couldn't control my bodily noises. :Ahem: Anyway...this was a great chapter and I love the budding relationship between not only Kagome and Sesshoumaru, but between Rin and Sesshoumaru, as well. Now if he would only send in his own letter to the column. That would be mightly entertaining! P.S. I'm so glad I'm not the only one who knows who 'The Dude' is.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 19:03 PDT
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When you mentioned the 'Montessori program', I knew that I had to comment. An excellent choice. I used the same teaching principles during the time that I was able to school the children. I'm very much enjoying this story. I do find it odd that the family wouldn't hire a nanny to help with Rin--while on home grounds--rather odd. Also, wouldn't a guest house have its own washer and dryer? Haha! I liked the dissertation concerning comma's. That was great because so much is changing with grammar and spelling. For example, 'judgement' and 'jugdment'. I don't like the new spelling. This chapter was filled with events. What I'm wondering was when Kagome managed to get the time to write her article. It's funny that Sesshoumaru reads the articles. [snicker] Oooh, Clash of the Titans'. I can see that Kagome has her job cut out for her with Mr. Taisho. That will be fun! Rose is a real sweetheart. I hope we see more of her. It was great to get a bit of background history on Sesshoumaru's and Inuyasha's upbringing and I hope we see more. I feel sorry for Sess and his mother. I'm a firm believer in 'separation anxiety' when it comes to sending kids away from home, even if it is just for a day at public school or daycare. Making Sesshoumaru get inside that van was hilarious. Tease him some more, pretty please? It's just too funny. It was nice to see how easily he warmed up to Rin. How could he not? I'm impressed with Kagome's parenting skills. She's doing a great job. It was sad that Inu and Kikyou were doing so well and then got killed off. At least you did it before we could become too attached to them. I'm apologize for such a scattered review. I'm in the middle of something and worried about an advancing storm. I'll give a better review later! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: puppypal27 On: July 07, 2008 17:31 PDT
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I absolutely love your fic. Sess is gonna fall hard. I can't wait until he finds out she writes the column. I think your story is fun, imaginative, and shows us a very spunky and refreshing Kagome. I love how you depict her. I also love how you've made her interact with Rin. I have two daughters of my own and I could only hope to be that creative with them. Thank you for your story!! I can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 17:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was anohter great chapter... I wonder how Sessy's dad is going to take to the dog.... and when will Sessy find out that she is his favourite writer?
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 16:31 PDT
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i think its cute and classic how kagome's dog took to sesshomaru. rin is adorable showing off her missing tooth. update soon.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2008 23:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so in love with this story. Please give us a new chapter soon! I love this Kagome. She's so independant but also needs a little reassurance from time to time, just like the rest of us. She has her flaws, but she wears them with pride, embraces them. Sesshoumaru is in for a world of suprise when he finds out that Kagome is 'Scarlet'. And little Rin is just the cutest little girl in the entire world. Thanks for this story. It's so original and wonderful to read. Late congrats on the award!
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Reviewed By: makumba-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2008 01:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing story! I am enthralled and stayed up till 4:30 in the morning to read it all in one sitting. please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2008 02:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh god.. this is fantastic! "And what do you do if the zombies come?" references to Next Generation... this is great!
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: June 04, 2008 20:47 PDT
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oh and one more thing... *Wink* I forgot to ask before.. Can you do something with kool-aid or freezie? Like..oh..I dunno... have rin caked in the sticky surup from head to toe and run full on into sess and get it all in his hair so Kags has to help wash it out? *smirk* C'est tres magnifique, non? Chao (really! this time I swear) ^.^
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