| "Dancing with Scissors" Reviews/Comments [ 256 ] |
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Reviewed By: miss moon On: October 23, 2009 02:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more im addicted, and afraid your gonna drop a good story like so many other fanfic writers
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Title: short review - better one will come later
Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2009 07:05 PDT
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Hi! Just a quick question - The title is: "Halloween Party, Late Night Cup of Tea, and the Writing on the Wall..." What is the writing on the wall referring to? *confused* I loved the twilight reference partially because I'm in a love hate relationship. The vamp idea is pretty dumb (not ur story by steph meyer's) but it's still so addicting to read and get into... ;p anyway, It was a wonderful chapter and I'll review more after college apps are over and done with!! :p
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2009 17:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fantastic new chapter. I loved the twilight part!
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Reviewed By: KayAkuma [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2009 15:30 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it. I wish this story would go on forever.. lol. Sessh is indeed sex on a stick. *drool*
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Title: Ode to enjoyment
Reviewed By: sockenobsessive [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2009 14:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*happy sigh*"... yay."
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Title: I love this story
Reviewed By: Sutlesarcasm, not logged in On: August 18, 2009 09:30 PDT
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I LOVE this story, just love it. I've been reading InuYasha fanfics for a long time, and to run into a story that is off the beaten track is so refreshing. The way you are developing ALL the players in this story is wonderful, especially Rin, such a bright shining sun in all their lives, she reminds me of my own grand-daughters. My world revolves around them and their parents. They make my life contented. I don't care how long it takes between chapters, I once waited a couple of years for an update...(cough, Shikon Priestess, cough)LOL, and it was well worth it. Original storylines are difficult to come up with, and a joy to find. I'm looking forward to the next update.
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Title: The Dreaded Demand of MORE Review
Reviewed By: Shikon Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2009 16:56 PDT
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ok so i've finally hit the end-- AND IM LIKE A FISH OUT OF WATER!!! IT's like a huge draught came through and sucked up all the water! Please oh please rain me a new chappie so i can requench this addictive thirst i've developed for your story!
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Title: The Most Amazing Sess/Kag fic EVER
Reviewed By: Shikon Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2009 23:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK first of all, I love your writing, mainly because it reminds me of my own, but in such a fresh, blunt take it or fuck the fuck off kind of way. I absolutely LOVE your interpretation of Kagome. You make me want to go grab some random guy, slap a sticky note on his head that says hey i'm sesshoumaru, and do things that would get me in trouble if i went into detail. But still. Seriously, this is the first fanfic i've read since the shikon team came back to finish fftb, and I'm thouroughly satisfied. Thank you so much for not being a predictable tool bag just setting me up for disappointment. Now, if you DON'T mind, I'm going back to reading your story. =P lol
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Reviewed By: inyashafan2009 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2009 00:21 PDT
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at the time all i can say is MORE!!!! MORE!!!!!!! MORE!!!!!!!!!! that should say it all. love the story cant wait 4 an update. sooner than later if you can.
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Reviewed By: Walking Dead On: July 31, 2009 10:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pirate Queen, Pleaaase, there isn't a need to explain why it takes so long as long as you continue to update. Thats how my writing works, and always will. This one appreciates your work and always will!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2009 23:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh well that happens, at least you are alright, and you haven't lost your touch. WONDERFUL chapter! I'd say which parts I loved best but I'm currently writing this just as soon as I got home from work. I had to read this before I when to bed or I would stay awake all night wondering!!!
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Reviewed By: mysteryeditor On: July 30, 2009 07:35 PDT
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I was reading you stroy and going through the reviews. What you should do is stop posting the story online! Change the names, complete it, get a literary agent, have it sent to some editors, and then get it published. This s a master piece. Don't waste it.
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Title: ... it's like a breath of fresh air
Reviewed By: sockenobsessive [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2009 00:40 PDT
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ahahaha i always am egarly awaitting another chapter to this story, and have not once been disapointed. thank you soooo much for another great chappter! -a 'Dancing with Scissors' addict(i've tried the pill, and i've tried the patch but i can't seem to break my addiction to fanfiction lawlz)
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Title: Love IT!
Reviewed By: Infinite Silence [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2009 21:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, I am so sorry that I have been a silent reader for so long.. but that is kinda why I chose my name... lol, I loved the last line 'then she yawned and scratched her ass.' lol that sounds kinda like me. ehehehe. lol j/k kind of... I just wanted you to know that even if you take years to post the next chapter i'll read it just for the shear enjoyment of it! not saying that it's ok to take years. b/c if you do i'll annoy you to great legnths just to get an update! lol. ooohhh update soon i hope. I understand that rl come first but I love this story sooo much that I can't wait to see what happens next!!! i'll try to keep reviewing but knowing me i'll forget **blush** eheheh. I.S
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Reviewed By: Elven_mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2009 20:33 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Awwwww! Such a cute ending to the new chapter! I loooooooooooved it!
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