| "Dancing with Scissors" Reviews/Comments [ 256 ] |
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Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 06:17 PDT
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hi!! I'm an absolute fan of this story! I think its brill. Everyone is seriously in character. Even Kagome. (I dont have time to explain in full detail why but you'll read it later.... >< so yeah. I luv this fic!!
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 20:27 PDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors/artist, Inuyashaloverr and KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ Inuyashaloverr & KnittingKnots Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
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Reviewed By: KellyP On: September 11, 2008 20:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't read such a well written and entertaining story as this one in a long time! It's so funny and I can't wait to see what will happen next. I read all the chapters in one sitting and was getting sadder as I saw I was almost done. lol I hope that Sess will find out soon who writes the articles...and I really hope they get together too! The scene at the bar was promising! I do like how your characters are not drawn to each other right away and find themselves suddenly in love- but their relationship is being built up. Can't wait to see what will happen next!!
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Reviewed By: Selaite [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2008 12:04 PDT
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Please update soon. Can't wait to see what will progress between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. ;D
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Reviewed By: Florence On: September 08, 2008 21:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, Thank you thank you thank you! I've almost checked everyday to see when you've updated, and this chapter was so nicely done. The little seduction part was very clean, but it also put me right in Kagome's spot, what with flutters and butterflies. And her reaction afterwards was so real, which is what any girl would have done, deny and deny and deny. Kouga seems a tad whiny; will that change? The descriptions of the snotty upper-class country club girls were also nice, at least, enough to have an intended effect of making the reader hate them. Again, good job, I really can't stop reading! Hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Infinite Silence [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 09:42 PDT
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AH YAY! YOU UPDATED!!! I LOVE YOU!!! I can't wait to see the next chapter! Well until next time! Ja Ne Inifinite Silence
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 03:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I say... "everything you write comes out like gold" is that a little on the creepy side? squeal! Great ending... (cause it had the exact that you want it to have... I so cannot wait until the next chapter... ) I loved "Scarlet's" letter to the guy... I heart Kagomes trying to deny it (or trying to make her self believe that she isn't attracted to him) in the bathroom...
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 15:30 PDT
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Mmm, hotsauce. I can't believe he's considering going to the movie with her the next day--seems to me like realizing how much they both enjoyed that little encounter would send him running, if he really doesn't want to get involved. But then again, I think we all know he does! Let me tell you, though, I sure as hell enjoyed that little encounter. I feel like I'm degrading it by trying to describe it, so I'll stop--as long as you keep it coming! I love it when Sess reads Scarlet. It's like she's having a conversation with him that he doesn't know anything about! Sooo funny! I can't wait until he figures out it's her...and I do wonder how that will come about (it WILL come about, right?) when Sango is the only other person that knows. Will he do some digging on his own, or will the knowledge fall into his lap? Can't wait to find out! Cheers!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 11:21 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man I love this fic. I can hardly keep a smile off my face when I read it. I love the ode to 'Princess Bride'. You and I must have the exact same taste in movies. It's getting better and better. Sesshoumaru has no idea who he's dealing with, and Kagome is so wound up that she might crumble at any moment. Oooo...but they are walking a fine line, aren't they. I can't believe Sesshoumaru didn't realize the big hint that he got in 'Scarlett Letter'd'. Maybe if he'll figure it out soon. I hope so! Thanks for the new chapter!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 11:19 PDT
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wow Sesshoumaru teasing Kagome? pretty hot! can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 10:55 PDT
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Oh man! LOL Kagome really asked for it. Did Sesshoumaru have to be so damn sexy? Whew! I think he overdid it a bit--intentionally. Yup. Those two are in denial. Yet, similar to her advice in her column, it wouldn't be a good idea to jump into anything. On top of that, it could be devastating to Sesshoumaru's appearances. Oooh, wow, the sister is the mistress of the brother-in-law's brother. Talk about bad publicity. LOL Neither one of them have dated in a very long time. I feel sorry for them. Also, I feel sorry for Sesshoumaru having to put up with such a sorry date. Glad it wasn't Kagura and hope he escapes in time. Although it might be a good learning experience for Kagome to witness such a thing. Oooh, I wonder if Sesshoumaru will try to use Kagome like she did to him. Heh, his date could pass out and he could just leave her there and claim Kagome as his date. Hah! That would be fun! Kouga kinda pisses me off. He's flirting with Kagome right in front of Ayame. Someone needs to kick his ass. As always, I enjoyed Kagome's column. I'm glad that Sesshoumaru decided to go to the movies. Was there any doubt? Great chapter! Look forward to the next. snow
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Title: youkailover1
Reviewed By: youkailover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2008 18:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my Lord this is some seriously funny shit!! I loved reading what you have so far and cannot wait for more! Even though its set in alternate universe and not really the manga/anime I'm used to its still awesome! I love how humorous it is and the sex advice columns are hilarious! Can't wait for Kags to get her freak on with up and stuffy Sess!!!;)
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2008 13:10 PDT
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Holy damn! Love it, even all the very sad parts - wonderfully done. I wear my emotions like Kagome does, tears for all reasons. And Cribbage - wow - never thought I see someone add such a good old game into a story - you must play - or had a good source. I can't hardly wait to see what happens when Kagome let's her hair down at the club. Great job! Thanks for sharing!
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Reviewed By: Florence On: August 29, 2008 00:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the indepth development of characters, though the fanfiction...well, it was a little extreme, just a bit, I just thought that Kagome didn't sound very in-character when she was iterating what she said, but other than that, everything else was perfect. I'm going to be dying to wait for your other chapter! When they finally do something, hopefully?
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 16:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is so cruel.... I didn't want the last chapter to stop it was so good...
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