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Reviewed By: Yuuzai On: September 11, 2010 00:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, so I finally found the one you regularly update! ^^ I was beginning to be afraid that you had stopped writing. Glad to see my fears were unfounded. I thoroughly enjoy this story and hope the next chapter comes soon. On a chapter related note, Youji needs to get his head out of his ass and come home before Aya does something drastic. *smacks Youji for being an idiot*
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Reviewed By: Amyeyl (haven't logged in in years) On: September 05, 2010 20:55 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh, poor Aya. That pesky intrusion of reality. It's never done anyone any good, and especially not in his case. I miss the tiny illusion they built... Yohji, come back and make it better.
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas The Sleepy On: September 03, 2010 23:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh poor thing! *huggles you gently* Bronchitis Sucks! I've had it too, it's awful. I hope you are feeling much MUCH better! and Yohji, I know you're upset, but you have an Aya-pet to think of! *sits gently on the bed and gives Aya-pet a sandwich to snack on, then brushes his hair.* It'll be alright Pet, He's not mad at you, his whole life is just stressing him out. he'll be back soon, he might even want to hold you in his arms. Let's make your hair absolutely pettable for him, he won't be able to resist.
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Reviewed By: allia On: August 07, 2010 18:38 EDT
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Read the whole thing in one sitting -- really interesting and tense. Looking forward to more! :)
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: August 05, 2010 21:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hooray for updates! well she didn't kill either of them, so I see that as a plus. Poor Aya he's terrified now. and Yohji cooling down I see as a good thing. can't wait for more! ^_^
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Reviewed By: S.Degenerate On: July 27, 2010 02:10 EDT
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Y'know, that's something that's always irked me about WK, why no one ever recognises them, because surely Aya was all over the news and Ken was a freaking soccer star. Anyway, I'm really impressed with this story still, even after this many chapters it's still just as good as it was at the start. Your updates make me happy :D
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: July 26, 2010 22:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Manx! be nice to Aya-pet of I will rewrite the universe so that you will never be allowed to have chocolate again! ...or something. Whatever I think up as retaliation will be unpleasant, I can guarantee you that, so be nice!
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas The Sleepy On: July 23, 2010 21:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooh that was almost a teaser! I wanna see what happens hen Manx gets there! it is sure to be an interesting meeting.
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Reviewed By: Sky Rat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2010 14:44 EDT
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It took me a while to start reading this one, because I'm usually put off by stories about slavery/rape/torture, etc, but I really really like how you write and since this story was so long I couldn't resist giving it a try. I've been impressed at how well you're handling such difficult topics. Aya's response to the abuse seems very realistic and I'm glad you're keeping the pacing slow. If you skipped over much of the healing process it would have lost a lot of its believability for me. I'm relieved at how responsibly Yohji has been handling things too. I'm enjoying this and looking forward to finding out what you have in store for them and seeing Aya when he's more recovered (though don't rush anything, keep it up just like you've been doing!)
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: July 17, 2010 20:57 EDT
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heh I don't think a review would ever be enough to stop him from having fantasies about the tables, and I think I'm in agreement with him that Yohji should maybe go check to make sure he's ok. ^_^ I like this chapter, I think Omi is right that Aya will like it in there. What I'm curious about is when Ken and Omi will finally get to see Aya's favorite sweater for the first time.
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: July 16, 2010 02:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Strawberry Ensure?! Omi that's downright cruel! how could you give that to Aya-pet?! Here Aya darling, you are going to need something to help get that down. *gives him a mixed berry, apple, banana, and yogurt smoothie with added ginseng, honey, bee pollen, vitamin powder and whey protein.* Healthy stuff doesn't have to taste horrible Omi, and fresh foods are better for him anyway, give him more protein if you want him to gain weight. (peanut butter is a great source) And sorry Miko, you cannot successfully chase me off just by not updating for a while. In fact I doubt you will ever be able to get rid of me, I'm too hooked on your stories, so you might as well just accept the fact I'm gonna stick around. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas The Sleepy On: June 20, 2010 02:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this chapter just completely made my day, awww yay for Aya petting! *petpetpet* I REALLY hope Aya doesn't fall back into former habits, Yohji keep going with the trust building, you have a lot of damage to undo.
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: June 17, 2010 22:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nooooooo! no, Aya- pet you were doing so well! don't listen to that bastard for a second! Yohji!!! help him quick or it will be just like the first day all over again!
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Reviewed By: Degenerate On: June 16, 2010 05:39 EDT
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Epic cliffhanger ending FTW!!! I know I should hate Schuldig with a passion, but there's something about pure evil that's just...awesome!! I can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: June 15, 2010 18:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww I didn't get a chance to try the limrick, darnit! next time hentai slug, next time.
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