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Reviewed By: Cody T the Lazy On: June 15, 2010 13:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh SHIT! I totally didn't see that coming! Oh crap how did he even FIND them? or get in? oh not good not good not good. how long will it even be before Yohji goes upstairs to check on him? Oh I hope you plan to update soon because this will have me fretting about Aya-pet until it's resolved. Yohji! get a feeling of something amiss! I know you are swamped down there but PLEASE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas The Sleepy On: June 15, 2010 13:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! continue! keep going, please? you KNOW how much I love this story, and you haven't kicked badguy butt yet! there NEEDS to be more!!! poor Aya-pet, he needs some tea and probably a few more Yohji hugs, crazy fangirls, they had better not have scarred Aya-pet for life!
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas The Sleepy On: June 15, 2010 12:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow I like that bloom of hope,I like it a LOT. The flower shop will do Aya a world of good I think and I also think that as the hope grows, so will the trust. lovely chapter! and now I'm off to the next, I'm getting spoiled, three whole chappies all for me! *huggles them tight*
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Reviewed By: Boadicea On: June 14, 2010 16:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You'd BETTER keep writing, or the Evil Hentai Slug is going to meet Super-Frustrated Yaoi Fangirl! Trust me ... (evil smile) ... the Slug will lose. (hehehehehe) Seriously, good story! Keep writing1
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Reviewed By: Degenerate On: June 12, 2010 05:47 EDT
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Ahh, the fangirls. They probably just scarred Aya for life (well...more scarred than he is already...) Please, continue!
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas The Sleepy On: June 08, 2010 09:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmm this made my morning! I'm bound to have a good day now no matter how ungodly early it's starting. Yes I'm ready for the next round, these are FUN! and I'm so proud of Aya-pet, and I hope he noticed that look of pride on Yohji's face! The other guys are worrying me. A Lot. I hope when Aya-pet is doing much better he can slit their throats himself.
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: June 03, 2010 22:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yohji, you are doing the best you can, but I really think you need to explain things better. Where's Omi when you need him? Oooooh another challenge. lets see... Ah, Bishounen, you're quite a sight With those pants so deliciously tight Let's get out of the bar And go back to my car Where I can Fuck you all night!
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Reviewed By: anon583 On: June 01, 2010 17:32 EDT
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You know, I think that Yohji's plan to make Aya part of Weiss is not a very good idea. Aya seems so emotionally and mentally fragile; would it be wise to turn him into an assassin, where he would be killing random ppl right and left and where he would constantly have to endanger his life? If he was made more normal, then isn't it possible that putting him into these extreme circumstances might trigger a regression or just make him berserk? Maybe they should just let him run the flower shop without the killing?
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Reviewed By: anon284 On: May 31, 2010 22:36 EDT
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Oh, that's so sweet of Yohji to make so much effort for Aya. I guess that when Aya said "thank you"...was that a break-through? A very, very tiny break-through? Maybe he's beginning to realize that Yohji isn't sadistic and horrible and actually is very caring and generous?
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Reviewed By: Cody T the Lazy On: May 30, 2010 00:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww this chapter just filled me with warm and fuzzy feelings all over, and was that a hint of trust I saw from our dear Aya? Ooooh I'm so happy I could burst! ^_^ The prudes all tell me I'm sick Because of the things that I lick I just love to love boys And to handle their toys I'm expert at sucking a PRICK! XD love you Hentai Slug, truly I do.
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Reviewed By: Amyeyl (haven't logged in in years) On: May 29, 2010 09:02 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Your chapter format, I guess you could call it, where you have Yohji saying or doing something and Aya immediately getting sucked into a bad memory, and then ending with that one sentence in present time... it's really, really effective. Gah.
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: May 28, 2010 11:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that... actually went better than I had hoped. Way to go Yohji! *babys Aya-pet* shhhh there, it's ok, you did wonderfully, it's alright, you are being so good Pretty Aya-pet, you are so good.
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas The Sleepy On: May 27, 2010 11:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My poor Aya-pet! gimmie that wavier!... shall not cause undue or unnecessary harm, shall not cause irrevocable and untimely death to the undersigned... wow you left a lot of loop holes in here didn't you? all the better for me! *signs eagerly* I hope Aya gets to realize that Yohji won't do that terrible stuff to him. I hope this goes better than my imagination is dreading.
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Reviewed By: anon275 On: May 26, 2010 21:49 EDT
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The more I read the story, the more I get sad. The way you portray Aya is actually very realistic, considering the enormous amount of trauma he underwent, but it's kind of depressing. The stuff he went through won't go away no matter how much Yohji feeds him or takes him on shopping sprees or talks to him; it's stuff that'll last forever imprinted on him, and he'll never be normal again even if on the outside he might one day learn to act like any other person. I dunno if that's the way I should interpret it (it's taking a long time for Aya to heal, I guess, and it's making me think like this), but I just can't get these thoughts outta my head.
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Reviewed By: Amyeyl (haven't logged in in years) On: May 25, 2010 19:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Has it really been 2 months since I've read this? Apparently it has... but it left me with a large chunk of story to read, and that's always nice. I'm enjoying the slow, transitional period they're in so much so that a part of me doesn't want the inevitable return of Schwarz. Ah well, I'm sure I'll enjoy it when they do show up, too. Thanks so much!
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