| "Falling in Love the First Time" Reviews/Comments [ 111 ] |
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Title: caramelheart
Reviewed By: caramelheart [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 21:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read Falling in Love the Second Time first and this fic filled in some spaces that the second one left. It was so sweet! Great fic!
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Reviewed By: eljoebla On: April 09, 2003 00:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice fic i just finished get out the third part to surviving togethor out soon!!!! |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 00:05 EDT
Comment/Review:
waaaaaiiiii so sweet i loved it *sniffels* right more fics! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 23:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ITS OVERRRR!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! *cries loud*!
Omg I loved this story just like the other one .You are an exelent writer.Really your work is Flawless I love it and I cant stop reading it DAMN I TTT!!! Please please I need ST3 soon Im dying!!!
Later! *sniff then screams WHYY* |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 21:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful! Touching! Wonderful! Awesome!
Uh, running out of adjectives here...
That was a great ending to a great story. I loved the park argument. Ha ha. I laughed when I read it in the other one. |
Reviewed By: silver-eyed-Son [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 21:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww cute ending and I have been waiting forever for it |
Reviewed By: silver-eyed-Son [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 15:59 EST
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WHAT??? DID I MISS SOMTHING MAJOR HERE???
i think you posted a chapter from another story cause that DOES NOT fit in with the plot PLEASE FIX IT OR TELL ME WHAT I MISSED |
Reviewed By: Vejitalover On: April 03, 2003 01:52 EST
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Cool, cool, cool, and also fantastic. That has got to be the best chapter yet. Although I don't want to see this story end, I am eager to read the final chapter. :) |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 02:10 EST
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i'm so confused @_@ did you post the wrong chapter maybe.... i mean one moment they bonded the next chapter is full of people i never heard of..... |
Reviewed By: Gina On: March 29, 2003 20:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uhm.. well. Vegeta is the correct spelling I think someone else said that but I'm not sure. Uhm the last chapter.. there.. uhm.. yea.. I think that's wrong cause.. makes no sense. |
Reviewed By: Dragon Girl On: March 29, 2003 13:22 EST
Comment/Review:
I think you accidentally added the wrong chapter to this story. I read "he truth comes Out" on the Ward.
Oh by the way I love both stories. I'm looking forward to more updates. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 22:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOD I LOVED ITTT!!! *SNIIFFF* Please BULMA SAY YES AND BOND WITH HIMMM !
I love this fic ohhhhhh! *SOB*
The dream idea was greaaat! I loved it !
I just hope things get better and Bulma sends Jet packing!
Anywhoo UPDATER SOON AND GIVE ME SOME LLEMONNN! Pretty PLEASE!!!
Later! |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: March 09, 2003 21:24 EST
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When will that stubborn Bulma ever learn?! Why can't she see that the solid foundation of true love cannot be made with mere stereotypic displays like buying food and flowers.
Someone really needs to force a reality pill down Bulma's throat to make her see that Vegeta is stripping his pride bare to admit his feelings for her through his heritige. If she refuses to go and see him through the night, then it shows that she is insulting him and his culture, something that Vegeta treasures dearly. |
Reviewed By: Suki Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 20:40 EST
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Ohhh.... *grins* Can't wait too read the next chapter. i hope bulma does go to vegeta, cause that would mean a lemon chapter would be very soon :D Keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: Megumi On: March 09, 2003 20:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!!! It was worth the waiting!! Completly!!! but PLEASE!! update a little sooner i'm sure all your readers agree when I said.. WE NEED YOU!! you don't know how terrible it was when i checked everyday and yo hadn't updated :'( pleaaseeee
CONGRATS IT'S MY FAVORITE CHAPTER EVER ^^
hUGS!! |
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