| "Falling in Love the First Time" Reviews/Comments [ 111 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 04:57 EST
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Wow! That's pretty much all I can say right now. How did I miss such an
awesome fanfic? I loved every single word of it. You have such a wonderful style. The tension and interaction you create between Vegeta and Bulma is amazing. I can't wait to read more of this wonderful story! *hugs* Ember |
Reviewed By: Marianne Me. On: February 03, 2003 10:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Stubborn jerk Vegeta may be, but that was strangely romantic when he took away her pain and kissed her. Nice. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 19:05 EST
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I hate to see him go, but his parting words were touching, about as sweet as he can be anyway. |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 18:23 EST
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epppppp O_O sniff sniff... new chappie soon?? |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 03:14 EST
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ohhhhh i can't wait to see what happens next.. |
Reviewed By: Saki On: January 31, 2003 22:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Holds up pitchfork to murder Vegeta with* Amazing chapter. Tensions were running high with this one. Terrible thing Vegeta said and acted toward Bulma. But he's naturally an ass and is all talk. He can't live without her! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker On: January 31, 2003 21:26 EST
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great chapter. can't wait to see how the new grandparents are gonna take it. |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2003 00:01 EST
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mmm awsome i loved how you ended this one.... lol though my hetai minded wanted more details it was great the way it was |
Reviewed By: mischief maker On: January 29, 2003 23:34 EST
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I liked it. I'm almost scared to see how tense things are going to be later. |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 00:52 EST
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mmmmmmm nice one as always.... ah the joy of ruts |
Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 21:56 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmm, that was a very hot lemon! And I love how Vegeta was a virgin ... that's so sweet! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 19:57 EST
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Damn! That must have been some night for her to need a senzu in the morning!! Heh heh. I love it. Can't wait until the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 02:32 EST
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droool...... nice lemon.....mmmm veggie |
Reviewed By: Star On: January 25, 2003 00:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright, that was pretty hot and smoking. Let the rut begin. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2003 23:42 EST
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Woohoo! (Jumps up and down whistling and cheering) Yeah! It has begun! Can't wait until next time! |
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