| "Falling in Love the First Time" Reviews/Comments [ 111 ] |
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Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 19:56 EST
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NOOOOOO! You're so mean leaving us hanging like that! Heh heh I liked the flashback. that was good. can't wait to see how things go btwn vegeta and jet. |
Reviewed By: Kat On: February 10, 2003 09:01 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleaaaaaaaaaase update soon. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen between the two... |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 10, 2003 13:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect chap. Looks like Veggie's refusal to be Bulma's man is gonna bite him in the ass. I think Jet is gonna ask her to marry him. I hope she says yes just to see what monkey boy will do. Damn, Trunks is only 5 and he has more of a clue than his dad O_o. Great job!! |
Reviewed By: amber_waves On: February 10, 2003 13:23 EST
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OMG! That "declaration" in the flashback by Bulma was sweltering! Okay, I'm dying here... what is Veg going to do? Man this is getting good! |
Reviewed By: Pammy On: February 10, 2003 17:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellant chapter. Like all of Vegeta's angst and anxiousness. Vegeta is such an idiot! He'd drive anyone to drink. Now maybe another man in Bulma's life will kick him into gear. |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 22:31 EST
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ahhhh......... darn interloper.... *envision chibi veggies beating jet with a mallet* lol great job can't wait for the next chapt. |
Reviewed By: kainee (kainee1984@yahoo.com) On: February 10, 2003 22:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh!! You DO like torturing Veggie-chan a lot!!!
Mou... Anyway... this seems to be up to where you were on FF.net although I could swear you had more fics up than just these 3... I can't search on FF.net right now to verify this (another reason why I'm checking out Mediaminer sooo much more often than FF.net nowadays...) But really really great job so far. I like how you convey Bulma and Vegeta's emotional states. It's all through dialogue or through action. Which I really approve of... it's really annoying when the author tells you that the character is feeling angsty when it's just more effective to show it. So very very good job on that....
Just update soon! Ack!
*three....
million!
thumbs up!* |
Reviewed By: yaselle On: February 12, 2003 12:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, this is good! What's gonna happen now? Please don't let us dont and write more soon!! I'm so looking forward to this confrontation. |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 00:41 EST
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whoa.......man holy shit veggie can be an ass sometimess.... oye oye... next chapter soon plleeease |
Reviewed By: amber waves On: February 07, 2003 23:30 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Yeah! This is definately going to be a rocky road! I did read the sequel and am dying to read the rest of this one. I remember that it does take them years to finally be able to talk to each other. And it will finally be nice when it comes! Can't wait! Hurry! :P |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 21:33 EST
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Oh wow. That was tense. Those two have some serious issues! At least he's staying. Cant wait til next time. |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 18:00 EST
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Hurry and Update!!! |
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 13:02 EST
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Hooray for updates! Keep 'em comming |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2003 23:21 EST
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ohhh aww man that was sad.... hope trunks makes a differnce poor veggie... can't wait for next chap. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2003 21:53 EST
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Aw, poor Vegeta. I actually feel sorry for the big lug! Go Mirai! You tell her that he needs to be in their lives! Damn, I sound like a cheerleader or something. O_o Aahh, can't wait to see what's next. |
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