| "Falling in Love the First Time" Reviews/Comments [ 111 ] |
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Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 13:42 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh, what will Bulma do? I don't want Jet to turn out to be a slease, but we all know he and Bulma can't end up together.... AHHHH! Update, update, soon, soon!! |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: February 18, 2003 13:40 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you don't update soon I'll.....
I'll....
*snorts* Who am I kidding? I won't do a damn thing. But please get the next chapter out as soon as possible. I love your story and I can't wait to see what happens next! :) |
Reviewed By: audreyt26 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 10:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been waiting for this chapter since FOREVER!
Excellent Fic and I love the way you wrote the meeting between the two rivals! Waiting for the next chapter!!!! |
Reviewed By: Ying=chan On: February 17, 2003 22:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why HIM? WHAT ABOUT Geta? still real good though. |
Reviewed By: loulou4729 On: April 09, 2003 21:01 EDT
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Well worth the ride. Another great story by one of the greatest B/V Authors out there... |
Reviewed By: G>J> On: February 17, 2003 14:39 EST
Comment/Review:
THIS IS EVIL
I hope you update soon after leaving it on a cliff like that. Anywayz glad i got to read a new chapter.
GR8 job on it! |
Reviewed By: nsbvegeta On: February 16, 2003 22:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I fucking hate JET!! So much mushy stuff FUCK U Jet! All BUlma needs is her prince the rough , sexy, yummy ouji! no so troll asshole ! Oh boy *ahem* Im sorry anywhoo I love the fic I cant wait for the next chap *hopes that there is some jet killing in it* So yeah where was I keep up the good work I love all ur fics !
Later! and Oh yeah before I forget when its the next citrus B/V? *hentai grin* Ok yeah BYE! :D |
Reviewed By: Brit On: February 16, 2003 21:49 EST
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hey. just wanted to say i love this fic! please keep on writing. and thanx for spending your precious time to write us such a wonderful fic. please make a new chap. soon. bye bye |
Reviewed By: Lychee SSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 21:45 EST
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Gaahhh! What are you doing ending it there? Get back to the computer and write!!!! |
Reviewed By: Saki On: February 16, 2003 21:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Say yes Bulma! Have that idiot Vegeta all worried and angry over her engagement. That would be killer. I love Bulma and Vegeta and want them to get back together, but I just like to see Vegeta suffer for some reason. Great chapter. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: February 16, 2003 21:34 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
She'd better not marry him! Nice chapter. Can't wait for an update. |
Reviewed By: Kat On: February 16, 2003 21:24 EST
Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh!! I have been waiting so long for this chapter to come out. Even before you started posting here. I can just imagine what will happen! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE update soon!! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 21:10 EST
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Aaahhh, you evil, evil.....well I did see the cliffy coming so I'll shut up. Well, this is going to be interesting. can't wait til next time. |
Reviewed By: capra124 On: February 23, 2003 19:24 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my. When Bulma wakes, how's she gonna feel....about Vegeta....his actions, his statements about her, Jet, even himself; about Jet...his proposal, her feelings for him.....
And what about Vegeta? The thoughts going through his head about what he said and did the night before, as well as his own feelings about the situation, about Bulma.....it's gonna be interesting to say the least.....OH and then there's Trunks. Will Bulma tell him or won't she? If she does, how's he going to react? If she doesn't, and he still finds out, how's he going to react? Will he overreact and throw a tantrum or will he find other methods to get his feelings known?
Can't wait to see where things go from here....... |
Reviewed By: faye On: February 09, 2003 02:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
the fanfic is good, i can't wait to read the next chapter,although i think that maybe there is a big gap between the birth if trunks and the death of Cell in which we do not know anything about our favourite couple ¬_¬ |
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