| "Forgotten tears of a Warrior" Reviews/Comments [ 129 ] |
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Reviewed By: I Luv Vege [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 22:29 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh!! I've always imagined a nasty side of Chi-Chi like that!! YAY! This is good!! Please update soon!! I like it! |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 13:30 EST
Comment/Review:
Wow, this is really good! Vegeta was so sweet and the way you described Chi-Chi, well, I honestly don't think it's a long shot. I feel so sorry for Goku, but at least she hasn't harmed Gohan or Goten.
I hope I get the chance soon to read what happens next between the two full-bloods. Vegeta taking pity on Goku was so unusual, yet in a way it does seem right. Way to go on a great story so far, and I can't wait for more! Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 18:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhhhhhhh NO. How could ChiChi do that? She's so awful. You should write about the death of her. That would be the greatest, if I don't get to her first *nods with rifle in one hand and flamethrower in the other*. Yaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!!!!!!!!!!! GokuxVeggie forever. Update soon. This story is awsome. |
Reviewed By: teteiforever2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 08:57 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon!! I love your fic. I like the shower scene in chapter two. But I´m shocked! What is ChiChi doing to poor Goku?! Please continue. |
Reviewed By: gemini66 On: February 16, 2003 08:04 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a nice change from the same old same old ....i hope to read more soon ...just have to know what happens next |
Reviewed By: Dark Serapha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 05:11 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was so wonderful!
I loved the second chapter! Poor Goku.. I can#t wait when vegeta will finally find out what happened.. or maybe Chichi will get to Goku first? Hmm... I can see Vegeta bitching about why Goku puts up with that crap.. poor Goku...
The story I mentioned before can be found here:
http://stories.anzwers.net/sss/To%20Live%20Again.htm
First i thought yours would be pretty similar but now I see that it's quite different. Please continue soon! |
Reviewed By: wawashkeshi On: July 17, 2003 16:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one of the few fics that keeps me coming back for more! you write this story wonderfully. lots fo detail and emotion. hope to read more again soon. |
Reviewed By: wawashkeshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 20:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am not an english professor, so i won't even try to rate the others. have you posted this somewhere before? i, seriously, love the theme(?) or storyline that you're going with. chichi can seem a bit psychotic. i am looking forward to reading more. |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 20:26 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I KNEW Goten wasn't conceived by consensual sex!! Chi Chi was DRUGGING Goku!! AHA!! See, I always thought that he'd had a wet dream about Vegeta, and she just happened to roll into the wet spot!
ANYWAY! I really like the way this fic is starting out! Very intriguing and original concept! I feel terrible for poor Goku!
So...you mention that a certain Son is in love with a certain lavender haired prince. Can I hope for a bit of demi lovin' too? ~wiggles eyebrows~ |
Reviewed By: Dark Serapha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 20:27 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oi! I like it VERY much!
I've ever only red one fic that was like this before and, sick as I am, I am a total sucker for this angsty stuff! So please continue soon, this promises to be good! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 23:13 EST
Comment/Review:
Wow! Chi Chi is a super bitch! well, not that she wasn't a bitch anyway, but damn, drugging him to get her jollies! sad, sad woman! I'm liking where this is going. update soon. |
Reviewed By: goku mum On: February 10, 2003 18:22 EST
Comment/Review:
I have already read a similar fic once, with a total psychotic Chichi, drugging and hurting Goku to a point he nearly died. But I like your approach of this storyline, Goku trying to escape instead of fighting and Vegeta noticing that something is off with his sparring partner / rival and hopefully soon-to-be-lover. |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 07:37 EST
Comment/Review:
I have seen this theme before, but this one is delightfully well-written and concieved. Goku's long absences from home make a lot of sense with this element!
Go Vegeta! |
Reviewed By: Mistress Vejita On: July 19, 2003 14:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*DOIN' THE HAPPY DANCE* ^_^ I was so excited when I saw this chapie up! Did I tell you that you are awesome? Well, if I didn't I'm sorry... YOU ARE AWESOME! I am still LOVIN' it! Hmm, and I still say the bitch needs to die! *gives Goku a big, big hug* ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Sade Kline On: February 12, 2003 23:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A perfect 10 I think! I love your stories! I obviously haven't read alot of fanfics because I have never seen this theme type before! I love it! I also agree with Saiyajin_Raven69... Will there be? Better implied then nothing though... -_-' Anyhoo, keep up the wonderful work you always do! Ja! |
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