| "Forgotten tears of a Warrior" Reviews/Comments [ 129 ] |
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Reviewed By: I Luv Vege [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2003 02:29 EDT
Comment/Review:
Aww... Im really missing this ficcy.. please don't abandon it!! Its too good!!! ^_^ Looking forward to more ^_^
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Reviewed By: wawaskesh On: September 24, 2003 20:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i"ve been checking and checking and it's been 2 monthes since you last updated? Is this going to be an unfinished fic? or have you just been really busy? Sorry to bother you but i've just been really enjoying your story thus far.
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Reviewed By: candy00 On: September 20, 2003 19:37 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hey I really wish you would update its been like MONTHES!! PLEASE write again soon |
Title: chapter 13
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 02:09 EDT
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Wow. Vegeta did it again. Poor Goku. I can't believe he confused Bulma with Chi-Chi. They're so different. Poor thing. *cuddles Goku senseless* I certainly can't wait for more. *chants* 14! 14! 14! ^_^ I couldn't resist. Until then, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: water On: August 23, 2003 18:44 EDT
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This is the first time I'v read a story about this couple I must say I'm impressed not many can pull a story like this off especaly with thes two caracters. Please write more soon I want to know what happenes next. Also could you have vegeta kill chichi off? thanks :) |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 23:53 EDT
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Nice chapter. Can't wait to see what's next. |
Reviewed By: SSJ_DarkStar713 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 17:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEHE...that was great! *wipes away a tear* and so very incharacter if you ask me. You are soooo good at this!!! you have to write more ASAP! please?! *puppy eyes* |
Reviewed By: Dark Kavora On: July 18, 2003 14:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i absoulutly luv this story. it has to be one of the best ive ever read. I luv all the diffrent feelings youve put out. I cant wait to see what happens between geta and goku. write again soon |
Reviewed By: I Luv Vege [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 06:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh another good chappie!! This are starting to get... hehe... nice between 'Geta and Goku.... I luv IT!!!!!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! |
Reviewed By: Squall-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 00:18 EDT
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wow--102 reviews, i was wondering why i hadn't replied to such a wonder fic yet and i guess that was reason why! =^_~=
but it still demands more attention. this fic is quite rare compared to most DBZ fics thast i've read--the story is altogehter different and very well written, the emotions portrayed through the character--each and every one (even the smaller ones) are outstanding, they really make you 'feel' for everyone. i absolutely loved this last chapter (Ch. 13) it was so romantic... in a sincere way and just... perfect. i loved it.
can't wait for the next chapter--soon i hope. =^_^= |
Reviewed By: aquastar On: July 17, 2003 22:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'Damn that woman to the pits of hell'I don't even
think hell would want that pyscho(she might want
to take over).Chapter 13 was GREAT!I wonder
if Vegeta is going to kill ChiChi anytime soon?
I hope so!the bitch deserves to be cut into a
thousand pieces and cooked so Vegeta and Trunks
can feed her to the birds.
Anyways...again I loved this chapter and
I'll be sure to be reading the next one when you
update this wonderful fic. |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 18:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How thw hell do you always manage to outdo yourself in every God forsaken chapter? Can I have your autograph?
If not, just update. Lovin this story for now and forever more. |
Reviewed By: Tiger Claws On: July 17, 2003 17:19 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDate UPDate UPDate UPDate UPDate UPDate UPDate UPDate Now. ChiChi must die and rest in the ragen pit of hell, Yay for the Yaoi lov'in |
Reviewed By: Mistress Vejita On: July 09, 2003 20:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God! OH MY GOD!!! You absolutely cannot leave it there! He kissed him... I will die if you don't update soon now. *sobs* This fic is INCREDIBLE! Chi Chi is such a fuckin' bitch! DAMNIT VEJITA, WHY DIDN'T YOU KILL HER?! I've alway's hated her. Anybody who hurts my beautiful Goku like that deserves to be brutally torchered to death! *is off to get glowing red hot poker and other such devices* ::smirks evilly:: NOW YOU WILL PAY BITCH! |
Reviewed By: Jam On: July 05, 2003 00:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
;Day dream;
Put my hands on ChiChi nech and Squezzzzzzzz
;End;
Ahhh!!!, now I fell much better.
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Oh My God!!!!
Vegita is in a lovidovi moment.
:Faint: |
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