| "Forgotten tears of a Warrior" Reviews/Comments [ 129 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tracy Girard On: January 25, 2011 19:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic but It can't be over...is it? I want to know how Vegeta and Trunks help Goku and Goten heal and what really happened to Chi chi. Please finish the story. princesstracybrat1@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: shinilover On: March 01, 2010 22:25 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update! I love this fic.
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Reviewed By: scorcha15 On: May 12, 2008 04:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of my favorite dbz fics every written. i read the first few chapters a few years ago, and i just remembered it read the whole thing again. i hope you keep writing, this story had an amazing plot.
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Reviewed By: starlight_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 23:59 EDT
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When will you write more of this wonderful story?
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 08:05 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is very well written. You really had me feeling for the characters. I enjoyed this fic very much. I hope you do write a sequel.
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Title: I love this Fic!
Reviewed By: LoveKakarot On: November 17, 2004 02:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fiction very much, and it seems many people think so regarding the amount of reviews this fiction gets! Poor Goku and Goten! Go die Chichi! It's lucky that Vegeta and Trunks care for them. Will you write a sequel, please? Your story is very well written and I can read it a lot of times without being boring! This is probably the best Vegoku fanfiction I've ever read! Thanks for your great work! BTW: I love Truten too, and you are also a great Truten Writer! I hope I can read more Yaoi fictions of yours!
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Reviewed By: meow chan On: July 10, 2004 02:23 EDT
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update darn it!
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 02:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am loving your story. Please, please update soon! *|Mari|*
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Title: leelee
Reviewed By: leelee [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2004 00:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love ur story . I hope u update soon. I love V/G stories. There the best i hope u wwrite more.
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 00:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're doing an extremely good job at this. The emotions are coming through very clearly. If you have not done it already (although I get the impression that you already are) research Battered Wife's Syndrome. You are doing a decent portrayal of this issue. The things we do to each other. It's disturbing and sad. I hate to point it out to Water but if someone kills of ChiChi it won't be Vegeta. Vegeta will, however, have to come clean with Goku about his past experiences.
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Reviewed By: yaoiluver16 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 13:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love This Story and I Simply Hope That You Will Write More Chapters. Unlees it is that you are done, yet if you are you left it at a pretty precarious point. Write more Goku/Vegeta fics please. Yaoi-Luver-16
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Reviewed By: kitkat On: February 10, 2004 23:26 EST
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please say you didn't abandon this great story! I miss it a lot. Hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: bubbley freedom On: January 15, 2004 00:28 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is such a great story WHY HAVENT YOU UPDATED YET????????? I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: lady Chi-chi On: December 20, 2003 17:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the most worst story here fuck anyone who bashes chichi bash that bitch bulma and her ugly ass.!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Saiyan_Kitsune_Foxfire [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2003 01:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon, i love this fic. Its really really good. ~SKF
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