| "Forgotten tears of a Warrior" Reviews/Comments [ 129 ] |
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Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 16:35 EST
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Ooh, it'll be out in the open soon! Can't wait! That evil bitch managed to hurt her own son. Grr, update soon. |
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 15:15 EST
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Look's like Goten got into someone else's lunch... I wonder how Chi Chi will explain her way out of this one. Great fic, keep writing, update soon! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 14:56 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh No she is more a bitch in my eyes know and I hate her for it. I'nm glad to see this come up and now I hope everything comes out now. Well anyway keep up the good work and I want to know more |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2003 10:18 EST
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Goku!!! *cuddles the Saiyan* Poor, poor baby. She's so mean to you and the author sure isn't helping any. ^_~
So, Goku was found out by Chichi and now he's stuck with her. Will he ever tell Vegeta what's going on? Will Vegeta help him or simply laugh. Can Vegeta find out next chapter, please?
As always, I hope you update soon and mm.org will work so I can read it. *growling, kicks mm.org* Great job! Until next time, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 15:44 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well that was a great ep. I wonder how he is going to leave. With out her knowing and Is Vegeta going to help? lol ok well I can't wait to read the next one. |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 18:08 EST
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This fics the greatest in the world. Update soon, I jsu gotta know what happens. Veggie, the little softy..
Vegeta: Shut up
SonKikyo: Softy
Vegeta: I warning you
SonKikyo: Softy softy softy softy!!!!!!!!
Vegeta: Thats is (powers up to ssj2) prepair to die woman
SonKikyo: Ahhhhh update soon. I wanna live long enough to read it. Bye. |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 On: February 25, 2003 11:49 EST
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Vegeta is sooo sweet! He's such a softy. ^_^ I like how you had Bulma and Yamcha make up. I always knew those two were meant to be. They just can't stay away from one another for long. And Vegeta staying in the same house as his ex-lover's new/old lover just for his kids is way sweet as well. He's just so damn caring! He even loves Goku! Just please don't tell him I said that. I don't want to die just yet. ^_^ Goten playing hard to get...Very sexy indeed. Not to mention Trunks in pursuit. I mean, wow! Anyway, it's time for me to work...I don't want to go, but my boss says I have to now. Gosh, life sucks. I was hoping to read the next chapter today too. We'll just have to see what happens. Until later, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 15:07 EDT
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Still think it's great. Cant' wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: I Luv Vege [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 07:03 EST
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Aw poor Goku thats sooo sad! I want to cry for him! No he cant commit suicide!! I wont let him!! This is a really great fic! I like the way you portray Chi-Chi!!! Well done! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 22:36 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always knew she was a B***h and she needs her btt kicked. poor Goku he needs to leave and he need to tell Vegeta fast. well any way keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl On: February 24, 2003 14:42 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I SO badly want Goku to kill that bitch of a harpy he's married to!! How could she treat the lovely Son Kun like that??? It's a great story so far, very well written. I look forward to the next update. I'm really glad I found it. |
Reviewed By: Son Ichigo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 10:59 EST
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Poor Goku. If is at a point, who he is thinking to end his own life by himself. it must have gone pretty bad.
i only hope his choose is the spacespot or he is asking king kai before he is going to put an end on his life, if he would go to hell, if he would do that. but i doubt it. that he would go to hell. he done to much good things. and goku is so far i am know not chatolic or a member of any other religion.
and he really should do a thing. what about a timejourney to mirai trunks or back in the past to help his younger self out. or faraway in the past, so that he can meet his father and his mother on planet vegeta.
what about the dragonballs. can they not do thing. or can goku not thinking of the right wish.
this is so sad, but i like the plot. |
Reviewed By: Lauryn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 23:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would reeeeeeaaaaaaalllllllly love to hack ChiChi to pieces right about now. *glares at the banshee* At least Vegeta is actually trying to figure out what's wrong though :) I'm hooked to this fanficcy now. It's one of the only reasons I check this site, actually! Great job as usual and I hope ya update soon! |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 22:25 EST
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OH WOW!! Once again, POOR GOKU!! God, I just wish he'd tell Vegeta!! He'd HELP HIM!! Hell, he'd kill the bitch for him!! SOMEBODY needs to!!
Awwww!! Ten-kun's playing hard to get!! Sweet little Poopsie!! And Trunks just wanting to hold him...AWWWWWWWWWWWW!!! Such sweetness!! |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 21:57 EST
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Oh wow!! That's so sweet!! I loved how Vegeta felt protective of Goku when he went in the GR!! Poor Goku! I've never felt so bad for him before!! I've never read anything with this theme before, I think it's excellent!!
Truten, Truten, Lala la la laaaa!! |
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