| "Forgotten tears of a Warrior" Reviews/Comments [ 129 ] |
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Reviewed By: I Luv Vege [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 04:54 EDT
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Awww that was too cute at the end!! I luv it!! YAY!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 01:33 EDT
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OMG!! Vegeta actually had a sweet moment! *falls over*
heh heh. great job. can't wait to see how Goku reacts. |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2003 11:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff* Oh, that was so beautiful, *dabs teary eyes with kleenex* please, for the life of me, don't take another whole month to update. This fic just keeps on getting better. Truely still the best. Now matter how much yaoi I fill my head with, this fic beats the crap out of all of them.
so what I'm trying to say is
UPDATE!!! |
Reviewed By: Trinity On: June 28, 2003 00:21 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your work....i started readign this on AdultFFN but desided to comment while i was here. I love the story line...it makes sence with the actuall story. Keep up the good work and give us fans more. |
Reviewed By: Christina G. wytygr74@hotmail.com On: June 27, 2003 21:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! they finally kissed! and Vegeta's just wonderful in this story. gruff yet still sweet in his own special way. |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 21:35 EDT
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EEK! Vegeta kissed Goku!!! Ohmigosh!!! Thank you sooo much for emailing me about you update. Poor Vegeta. I know right now Goku and Goten are the ones in trouble, but seeing how all this is effecting Vegeta is making me feel so sorry for him right now. Seeing Goku and Goten in trouble is making him relive memories I know he must have tried desperately for years to forget, to move beyond. And now he has to face them again, face the terror. I can totally understand why he wouldn't understand sedimental humans. Heck, I don't understand them half the time and I am a human.
Oh, I did want to mention the part where Vegeta was trying to show he cared about Goten and it came off as a threat. Well, when I read what he said when Bulma left the room, I totally started cracking up! It was so good I had to tell my mother, who did not seem pleased I had interrupted her from making mashed potatoes to tell her about DBZ. *shrug* Since she didn't appreciate it, I copy pasted it to a friend in an email since no one seems to be online right now. Hmm...*scratches chin*
Anyway, great job! I only saw a few mistakes too! That was wonderful! (ebony and it is toward, no "s" ^_~) I wish I could do so well without a beta. I give my chicas tons to do, trust me. *sigh* Well, I'm getting really weird looks from my family and someone wants me to read what she's written on a fic and copy pasted to AIM (it's HUGE!!!), so I guess this is the end. Please let me know again when you update. Thankies!!! Until next time, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: Dark Kavora On: June 27, 2003 19:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!! You wrote again! Excellent story by the way! write again VERY soon. |
Reviewed By: Shinigami_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 17:06 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWW!! Demi sweetness, father-son sweetness, and full blood sweetness all in one chapter!!! ~gets all warm and fuzzy~ WONDERFUL chapter!! It was well worth the wait! I loved the Vegeta & Gokuness, and you KNOW I hate that pairing!!!! That shows how good it is!! It was so very sweet, the whole thing!! |
Reviewed By: SaiyanPride On: June 25, 2003 16:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story,its one of my favorite stories
of Vegeta and Goku even Goten and Trunks.I also
love the storyline,its really original and I've
read a few fics with a pyschotic Chichi(I always
thought the bitch was a little demented,anyways)
but I think that your story is the BEST!.I hope
that you'll be updating. |
Reviewed By: wawashkeshi On: June 20, 2003 00:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read and reread this story and on more than one site too! I keep going through my head what would hurt ChiChi the most. I think she should lose Goku (like that hasn't already happened) and have her sons disown her. You know, take her on a nice family picnic at the beach, that has no water, and leave her there, for the vulcars. Death is too good for her. At least in this story. Update soon! |
Reviewed By: I Luv Vege [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2003 19:37 EDT
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AHH THIS IS JUST TOO GOOD! I HOPE CHI-CHI BURNS IN HELL!! WELL DONE ON SUCH AN ORIGINAL FIC! PLEASE DONT HESISTATE TO UPDATE SOON...^_^ |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 15:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally mm.org's back to normal so I can continue obsessing over this brilliant work of art. Plz!!!!!!!!!! CONTINUE. THis story is still the best. I just love how Tru-kun and Chibi are. That's like the best part. I still say you should have Vegeta kill Chichi though. But, who cares. Don't stop, it keeps getting better every time ^_^ |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2003 03:44 EDT
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It's been quite a while since I've had time to read, much less review. I decided to leave the particular review though because I wanted to point out something I've noticed. I've been reading some of your stories for a very long time, and I wanted to point out to you how I have noticed you have grown as an author. Your vocabulary has improved, as well as your sentence structure. Way to go. I'm very impressed with your progress.
Now, on with the review. This story is probably my favorite or your stories. It's very dramatic with tons of grief. For some reason, I find myself attracted to stories with a really deep plot. I do think you've gotten your characters slightly OOC from time to time, but to make this story work, you have to. Therefore I'm not going to complain in the least.
Gosh, it's actually almost three a.m. for me and I'm not writing a totally insane, completely confusing review. That's got to be a first for me. I was banned by friends for a while from leaving reviews after one. Maybe I should stop sleeping all day long. Then I'd be crazier at night. Any how, great job and I encourage you to keep up the good work.
I have one last favor to ask of you. For some reason, I never get notices when you update even though you're on my list of faves. I was hoping you might email me whenever you update this story. My email is marvaughan83@yahoo.com. I'd totally appreciate it. Thank you for the entertainment and for emailing if you get the chance. Until next time, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: Frabjousgirl On: May 12, 2003 21:04 EDT
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It's soooo good! Please update again soon! Please please because I'm really enjoying this sooo muchly! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2003 14:37 EDT
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Aw, poor Goten. I hope Goku doesn't realize he's there, though. He's upset enough that Vegeta knows. Anyway, nice job. update soon. |
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