| "Forgotten tears of a Warrior" Reviews/Comments [ 129 ] |
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Reviewed By: likeacat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2003 23:10 EDT
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I am so addicted to this story. I like how Goku is so unwilling to appear weak in the eyes of his prince, and Vegeta all protective. I'm sure you have more evil cooked up for ChiChi...but I think she should be beaten to death by Bulma with one of her own frying pans. (Why should the guys have all the fun?) |
Reviewed By: amanda On: May 10, 2003 15:12 EDT
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i am in love with this fic! you have to update more! the plot is soooooo kewl, and sweet, POOR GOKU!
ill be waiting for an update
yur freind
amanada |
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2003 17:27 EDT
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Yay, updates! Still a great story, I am really enjoying it. Keep up the good work and fantastic writing. |
Reviewed By: Frabjousgirl On: May 09, 2003 15:53 EDT
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This is an incredible story!!! Please please please write the next chapter soonly soon! This is now definitly one of my faves!!!
10!!! 10 10 10!!! |
Reviewed By: Christina G. wytygr74@hotmail.com On: May 07, 2003 07:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! it's just so ivolving. you really feel what each person's emotions are.
they must kill ChiChi before she does something really bad. i'm kinda scared for the unsuspecting few that don't know what she's done. namely Goten and Pan.
goten's been so out of it he has no clue about what his mother did. and little Pan is a likely target of her grandmother's psychotic behavior.
i'm sure Gohan and Videl won't tell Pan what ChiChi has done. she's too young to be told and understand it. ChiChi could easily trick her into going with her somewhere in order to get back at her family. or to get Goku into a situation he might not be able to get out of.
and what i love most of all is Vegeta's protectiveness. after barely surviving life with the sadistic Frieza; he may be the only one that can rescue Goku. in more ways than one. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2003 11:07 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that kind of pulled at my heart strings. Great story keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2003 10:09 EDT
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Oh man, I thought there was going to be a serious fight when Gohan showed up at CC. It's a good thing he was calm enough to actually listen to everyone.
Hmm, so when does everyone go Chi Chi hunting?? Heh heh. |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2003 07:03 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOOOH!!! Vegeta's finally realizing some tender feelings toward Goku!! Woohoo!! I'm so glad that Gohan is in on the crisis, too! I was afraid he was going to take his mother's side when he finally found out what had happened, so I'm very relieved that he is concerned about his father and brother.
Speaking of his brother...how adorable is Goten sleeping at the top of the stairs??? AWWWWWWWWW!!! Poor little Poopsie!! |
Reviewed By: Riltani On: April 24, 2003 08:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, that was sweet! But since you didn't have Chichi killed, I bet she'll be back, I hope you make these characters kill her painfully, your excelent story has now made me severly dislike her! Keep up the great work!! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2003 16:20 EDT
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Excellent chapter. I'm glad everyone finally knows. I just hope whatever she gave him wasn't strong enough to do any damage! |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2003 10:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE this chapter! Of course I adored the Trunks & Goten snuggle scenes, no surprise there. The scene where Vegeta confronts Chi Chi is excellent, though!! I'm so glad he didn't kill her yet, just left her in pain. Now we can look forward to more evil plots from the harpy, and more of Vegeta protecting her men from her!! WOOHOO! |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2003 13:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooo, that was soo great. Man, you should've killed her though. Oh well, at least Veggie make Goku safe now. Awwwwwwwwwwwwww^_^ |
Reviewed By: teteiforever2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2003 12:53 EDT
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Finally, Goku is freed from this fucking bitch!! I hope that he`ll have a good time with Veggy-chan!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Kitkat On: April 18, 2003 21:19 EDT
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Really great story!
I'm adicted to it. And the theme is so unusual... I wish Goku Mum could remember what is the name of that fic with similar plot that had been talked about, i really would like to read it too.
Great job keep going!! |
Reviewed By: Riltani On: April 11, 2003 09:28 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a place to leave a chapter! That has to be the worst cliffhanger I've ever seen (For me, I really really really wanna know what's going to happen, it's a great place to leave it for you, who knows what's gunna happen!!) Poor Goku, this is the first type of this story I've read so I think it's really original! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!! |
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